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Posted: 13 years ago

#671

very nice dear ...just amazing story thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#672

Oh very nice Tanu. I liked th car convo. Poor Pia got shot down...lol.

But omg what was that? Who hit Piya and why was she standing in the middle of the road? :P

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Posted: 13 years ago

#673

Sorry like button is not working 4 me:-(
nice update tanu bt chotu tha.pia bechari,abhay ke working load ki mari.lol.n kiss wala scene was yummy.lol.ab itna hot bnda seduce karega to asar to hoga na.jaldi next part likhna.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#674

tanzz nice update yar
abhay being so rude to piya
what wrong with this alina want to go with prom with abhay
wow abhay jealous huh sid and piya ko dekh ker
liked the abhay and piya dailogues of when she came from bathroom
shit yar abhay saw a vision of piya accident hope she will ramain fine
cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#675

wow lovely update

can w8 to read more

thanks for pm

continu soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
There nokjhonk is so cute...detective piya on the roll... 👍🏼

Thanks for your comment:)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
yay!!!! me 1st first *dancing dancing*
amazing grt update tanu👏
The last part...looks like bodygaurd back in business😉

Thanks Juhi. Yes that's right 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#678

Originally posted by: mandy1024
Nice update Tanu 😊 I loved Abhiya nok jhok 😃 It was too cute esp the line - "Whenever she smiled at him, he frowned in return" 🤣 I am sure Abhay gave her paper n kept her occupied so that she could quit getting tired of him 😆 I also loved the line where he said he saw her with her resignation letter 😆 Alina surely has big plans up her sleeve n I am sure she can never be upto any good 😛 But I hope Abhay stays on guard n doesn let Alina fool him. Pia is surely attracted to him but doesn wanna admit I felt really bad for her in the end - Abhay treated her like trash 😡 BTW I have a feeling that Sid might be the supernatural who Alina is looking for. Anyways will wait for u to reveal that n please do update soon dear 😳

Thanks Mandy. Glad you liked it. Yeah Abhay wants Piya to be fed up of her job. Alina will definitely do something evil. Let's see if Abhay fools her or gets fooled himself. Yes Piya was attracted since the day she saw him first but his bad behaviour always puts her off. Abhay did treat her bad but he will regret. Wait and see if it's Sid. I will try to:)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#679

Amazing job tanu yaar!!! Just loved this updt. Poor piya, abhay kitna kaam karata hai, hope he never succeeds in his plan of making piya resign. So abhay jealoused, lol gr8, loved the scene where piya came out from bathroom and abhay pinned her and that dialogue clash was gr8 there. Lol that line where abhay imagined piya with resignation letter cracked me up lol. God knows what evil plans alina have. Wow seems like abhay will be back to his bodyguard mission, gr8, update soon!!!