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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

amazing update tanu..👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: spn-abhay
nice start👍🏼
so abhay wanted powers
pia has a ring which has powers😊
abhay is coming 4 pia😃
continue soon
thanx 4 the pm😳

Thank you...

yes abhay wants power...

ring... hmm... lets leave that for later...

maybe but abhay doesn't know her...

i'll try to n ur welcome 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweet_neetu
Amazing tanu..
Abhay is power hungry vampire
piya has something which i guess abhay wants

Thanks neetu 😊

yep Abhay is power hungry...

hmm... maybe...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Comments updated in pg 19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

amazing upd tanu 👏

ahhh i m lovin this power hungry abhay , what an attitude 😎

well wats with the ring seems very powerful and why abhay going to chandeena , is it piya ka bulava 😆 so is piya connected to abhay ?

awesome job , upd soon thanks for pm

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Originally posted by: mandy1024
So so sorry for the late reply Tanu Loved it 👏 Awesome start ⭐️ Abhay has totally turned to darkness 😲 He doesn seem to care abt anyone or anything. All he craves is power 😲 Pia has a ring which is a magnet for a trouble I suppose? It must be very powerful if the creatures of the supernatural world all seem to want to possess it. BTW looks like it was a dream. Who was tat lady? Was she referring to Abhay? 😕 Well awaiting the next update eagerly 😃 Do update when u get time n thanks for deciding to continue with this 🤗

Thanks for this lovely comment Mandy 😃 im glad u commented late doesn't matter at all. The importance of the ring will be revealed slowly. Abhay has indeed completely submitted himself to the darkness. Yep it was a dream... n the identity of the lady will come out later. Thanks for waiting... im happy i decided to continue it.

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Originally posted by: anjali0111
nice update!!!!!!

abhay is rude n arrogant...n unlike other FFs here he is evil power craving vampy but then also doesn't hunt on humans...interesting!!1
he lived with alina...will there be any love triangle???
so pia is special...her nightmares has to do something with abhay.. right!!!

continue soon

Thanks dear!!! I will make him evil but I just can't make him attack humans. Yes he's been living with Alina but vampires won't really fall in love in my ff except one. Yes Piya is special n maybe ur right 😊

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Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
wow power starving abhay... luv ur 1st update... pleare continue... sorry 4 late comment its jst dat my net is not working properly...

Thanks dear i'm glad u liked it 😊 i'll cont... n no problem.