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rockstarashu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#951

nice update .loved abhayendra and piya convo.eager to know who is new vampire who helped abhay .
happy diwali

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#952

lovely update. I liked what u did to birdie 😆 I adore abhayendra and piya's bond. They are cute

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#953

wow great story pl\z update soon
it's an amazing story to read
thanks for the pm
happy diwali to you

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#954

I guess piya mistook abhay on his love for maithili to her it will heart wretching to see pia broken again if abhendra.confesses to maithili any way it was a awesome update and again update soon

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NidhaA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#955

Good chapter Shreya!
Panchi was, if natural is taken into consideration
Bitten by a snake.
If supernatural is looked at, I can't really guess.
Most probably she might wake up in some other place.
Happy Diwali!

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#956

so sorry for late replying but due to my examzz i was not online
lovely last 2 chappy
so now abhiya starting become friend
and in present that will be sid who helped abhay rite?
last scene of abhiya too gud and definitely that will be piya na which abhendre like...
cont soon

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653787

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Posted: 12 years ago

#957

Nice update. I really liked Haseena and Abhay's part glad she told him off 😳 Panchi's part was written too funny 😆 I think the stranger was Sid and he helped Abhay? 😲 Looks like Abhayendra was talking about Maithali 😳

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Rumki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#958

liked Abhay Hassena part...glad that she showed some sense in Abhay...the stranger was Sid na who helped Abhay...was it metz about whom abhayendra was confessing to Pia?

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harinisriram39

@harinisriram39

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Posted: 12 years ago

#959

Shreya, You are an awesome script writer. The first scene is something which immediately comes into mind and I dont feel that I am reading a FF but actually watching something. A fantastic job

Coming to the FF, its good to see Haseena leaving no stone unturned to tell Abhay that he are Piya are destined to be together. The points you mentioned were really mind blowing esp the one that Piya did not try to expose them when they were powerless knowing the fact that Abhay bit her.

By the way, the magazine which Haseena showed to Abhay, is it an old one? because the real Piya is lost in the past and who would give an interview now though she or Reina is faking a contract with Nick.

Coming to Panchi, hope you wont tell that she fell into the trap of the vampire catchers who were using Arnab's help 😆

Now I am curious about the new Vampire who helped Abhay to overcome the werewolves. Is it by any chance Maithli?

I am waiting waiting waiting waiting for your next update.