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ilove99

@ilove99

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#961

damn!!! piyu did wot v say kulhadi mein pair marna abby will now propose metz not her

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#962

great update. dont remember if i placed a reserve somewhere else 😛

Now I loved this line and Haseena's whiplash on Abhay// sasuma ho to aise 😆 😆

I've sworn never to fall in love, because I don't believe anyone out there could ever give me what I really need.'

good one 👏 I hope Abhay finds Pia and give her the memory back. Why i fel the hooded figure was Alina 😕 or if its a vampire or newborn donno. it maybe Sid or someone else.. as usually you are master of creating confusion

COming to Panchi's death 😃 it was a snake.. a cobra right? 😆 and Snig 🤣 please maker a nagin here//please please 😃 🤣

And Abhayendra.. after all he IS Abhay so having a soft corner or feeling protective for Pia is in his blood... n Pia feeling for him yet again even though she doesnt know Abhay n Abhayendra are the same person proves they are soulmate of r eternity. and Pia was hurt knowing Abhayndra loves Maithili..aww... update soon

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#963

awesome update shreya...loved the way u wrote the whole thing😊...that haseena-abhay part was classic, and wonderfully brought out!!! 👏

and omg!who was that stranger😕...bad?? or good??that fight was spectacular👏... u painted a picture of the fight in front of my eyes with ur words...it was so well described...⭐️

and those parts of the parts...they are my favourites in each update...hm...so anhayendra has developed feelings for someone?😊 is it maithili?? or piya?????😕

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#964

Awesome update shreya.Oh i love haseena-Abhay convo. Abhay is so into her but will not agree. He felt a jolt 2 c Pia in small dress in magazine cover & hated it. So who is stranger who helped abahy?Is he reina? Is Alina frnd or enemy or Reina & Alina r same ?

I love Piya-Abhayendra convo.Pia shuld have stayed away frn past. Abhayendra was talking abt metz & Pia thought it was her

Plz cont..

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#965

Just fantastic update shreya. U are just a mindblowing and super talented writer, I love ur classy and sophisticated style of writing too good. I loved haseena's outburst on abhay, it was beautifully written. Panchi🤣 ab tum hi jano uske saath kya hua, so reveal it soon. Ummm who is this new vampire? Gosh u are just too good in confusing. Abhyendra and piya part was brillantly written, I guess abhyendra have developed a soft corner for pita, but he loves metz, this ff is turning more and more interesting. Plz update soon, can't wait for next part!!!

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Priya

@Priya46

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#966

lovely part can't wait for the next part

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#967

first of all sorry 4 late review... u knw a trishna sorry
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by the way hassbna aunty u r so sweet and caring love u... its gud dat u try ur best to give a piece of mind to ur stupid son... who is dat stranger sid... and shreya tune panchi ka kya hale kiya maza aa gaya aukat dikha di... and so abhayendra going to confess his feeling to metz...

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#968

plz plz plz plz plz plz update na i missing this ff alot

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#969

Originally posted by: smdosi
Oh my god...what exactly is this chapter??? So Abhay has developed feelings for someone? And Piya thinks that 'THAT SOMEONE' is Piya herself but probably its Maithali? And then there is this jerk Abhay who is so dumb that he doesn't even realise what exactly he wants...it so stupid! I loved Haseena - Abhay convo...especially haseena's dialogue...shez is one hot woman when shez angry (Don't misunderstand I'm straight! 😆)...btw whoz this new entry?? Hooded figure?? Yaar tum bohot jyada suspense mat rakho warna hum readers suspense se mar jayenge...and please hum readers pe thodi daya karo aur reina or hooded figure mein se kisi ek ki toh real identity bata do...itna toh humara haq banta hai...btw thanks for the pm...

LOL try to understand Abhay's dilemma too, bechara har taraf se dimag ka dahi ban raha hai😛 Hooded figure? I thought it was obvious...I even left clues...anyway, it might be clearer next chapter😃

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#970

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
awsum update
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glad that haseena told abhay to return pia's memories.
did panchi die?who was the hooded person with abhay...is it sid or alina?
so abhayendra has fallen in luv with maithili and was sharing it with pia who has completely misunderstood him...poor pia she always gets hurt from him.
wonderfully written
thanks for pm.

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thanks Megha, yes it was Sid :D and yup I guess Panchi did die :P
yes Pia is going to get hurt from him again...but this time its her own fault...