FF :Time and Again Book 1 completed - Page 47

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
I'm really loving this story of your
thanks for the pm

Thanks!😳

Originally posted by: sukugeny

its awesm shreya...me too feel tht m bck in time...i remebr vampire diaries..bt our ametz n sidiya in it.nice update..OMG I did not intend it to be similar...Sidiya? They're not a couple dearie😛

bt abhay pagal ki trh pia ko find kr rha hoga..director k nam mile kya models k use??egrly waiting fr nxt update...

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.

wow shreya!!that was a wonderful piece of writing!!👏it really transported me to the past,during the reign of the kings and queens...the way u described that abhayendra-maithili-pia-siddharth scene and that abhayendra-pia scene was so realistic and perfect..great job👍🏼..just one question..didn't pia recognise sid?or did she not know him in the present??😕

Thanks for the warm words Tora...No Pia did not recognise Sid as she has not recovered her memory yet. Sid is forgotten...for now.

PS> Pia as Reina is, well...very interesting😉👏

Originally posted by: ilove99

WOW!!!!!it was AWESOME!!!!loved it!!

Maithili seemed to do tht ride thingy intentionally to spend time with abhay..didn't she?i kinda saw tht selfish...but then they r in love!!Yes...Maithali was definitely selfish and I am glad you caught that😳

well..abhay almost saw pia!!do he remembers piyali in present?Let's see if he does, that's a long way off now😛

liked the way he mocked her but good metzie told the fake-reason!abhay seemslike won't get along with pia too much...Why do I feel you are wrong here? Wait..because it was Sid who mocked her not Abhay😆

And sid...i felt its right what pia felt for sid...both Ametz went leaving him behind and pia was also leaving!!pity!i hope pia doesn't go to her room n again return to sid until metz comes!

I liked sid n pia!!the gentle sid,and a horse-scared pia!Well, Sid was nice once upon a time..right?

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

ah awesome but pia ko abhi tak samjh nai aya this abhyendra and sid and 1870 century

aise to bada detectivegiri karti hai hai aur ab dekho😆

bechari ka dimag ghum chuka hai, what did you expect?😆

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

That was really really good Shreya. I love how you describe Abhayendra...shows his differences with Abhay clearly. like a thin line. the whole 18th century atmosphere was wonderful to read. I felt bad for Siddarth. He surely was looking for maithili and Abhayendra.

dont worry about updates. study hard and update whenever you can 😊

Thank you Tanzie. I nearly broke my head at one point trying to show both Sid and Abhay are different with a thin line, like you said. Thank god it came out properly😆

Originally posted by: _Chandni_Sadia

very nice up date please pay attention on your study too thanks for pm

Thanks a lot.😳

Originally posted by: tanvipareek

lovely update. sorry for not giving proper response to your ff.. actually i love abhiya and moreever pkyek and shattered when this serial end and i start reading stories on this forum, i read all ff's , ss's but due to my tight schedule my personal situation i am not able to give comments on any of the ff or ss par fir bhi i am be up to date wit all stories to day i got time so i think why not congtatz and thanks u people for ur lovely work and as i dont have any friend and even i dont like to make any these stories are biggest source fill the hole in my life... thanks once again

Oh thanks so much. Thanks a lot for giving the feedback, it's really nic of you😳 IF pe friends apne aap ban jaate hain😳😆

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Oh wow wow Kisses to you and lots of hugz🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 you gave me AMetz now how about some alone time with ametz I loved it. Felt bad for Pia and Sid but Ametz together so bhar main jaye duniya

Excellent

I dunno if I can write much about AMetz since this story is mostly from Pia's POV in the past. let's see, I am definitely going to try😳 Save your pity for later, Pia-Sid are in for some rude shocks especially Pia😆

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

superb update

m sure pia is too shocked to see such a sweet and shy abhay...

loved sidhartha's and piya's bonding...i feel it might play a bigger role later.

thanks for pm

Yu're quite right. It will play a bigger role later😳