AbhIya FF : It's the end's beginning. (PAGE 60 ).

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Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Just amazing update koyel. I loved the last part most. U just described each and everything beautifully, just beyond words. I just felt like everything happening infront of my eyes, the sky changing colour, abhay's effect everything. Alvira's and that boy's part was amazingly written. U are a beautiful and amazing writer. Continue soon and thanks for the pm.

thank you so much Romi...glad you liked Harsh-Alvi and AbhIya. hopefully you'll like it further.

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Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: bellaaa
koyel lovely update yar...
loved it every part
but like the most ending part
as u know its abhiya na
loved it the way u describe the piya and abhay feeling
and teh way abhay react and closed his eyes
the way drop of blood zoom out to the piya hand
and piya lost control and touched abhay ufff
so amazing yar
cont soon

yaa i know since its AbhIya people will be more drawn towards them...glad you liked their part...hopefully they'll be this intense later on .

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Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
Awesome koyel I loved it😊

glad you liked it , juhi.

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Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
amazing update😃

glad you liked , honey.

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Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: luckdiya
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superb updt koyel👏👏👏

glad you liked it , diya.

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neetu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#296

Awesme update...
Abhay find peace around pia
thnxx for pm

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Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: sweet_neetu
Awesme update...
Abhay find peace around pia
thnxx for pm

glad you liked it. thank you.

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bubble_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#298

Another amazing update Koel...👏

I really liked the title😳...

alvi's attitude was amazing..

and who does Harsh remind Alvi of..?😕

Abhay is so ruthless...I wonder how his heart will be melted by Pia..

Continue soon dear..

and I'm really sorry for the late comment dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#299

amazing upate.lvd abhay pia confrontation.finally abhay felt peace bt m sure he won't accept dat pia is d reason & would gt angry on her.thanx 4 pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
amazing upate.lvd abhay pia confrontation.finally abhay felt peace bt m sure he won't accept dat pia is d reason & would gt angry on her.thanx 4 pm

glad you liked abhiya's confrontation..there will be too many of them later on...yeah abhay felt peace..but he will go ballistic when he thinks of the reason why.