AbhIya FF : It's the end's beginning. (PAGE 60 ).

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chandni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

koyal wow!!🤗

i really love to read your ff..😛

when i read i fill it..pia's dream fill so real..like her soul is really not in her body that time..like her soul see her path...and i just want to ask u something..

alvi,pari and piya trio r human..??😕

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Beautiful update... you should be a poet...i get touch of Pocos writing in you or i feel like Im reading poetry of some British writer of 18 century...😆

So Pia was dreaming about her forbidden fruit or Abhay? it because of some kind of connection or she has already seen him somewhere? clearly noone around her is aware of Abhay and that's why she sounds like lunatic... lets see where it leads them... continue soon 🤗

Previous post edited too...page 6 😊

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Comment updated on pg-13
plzz check...

--indu

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Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
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sorry for being so late. Im always gonna be late since Im too busy but I will show up...promise 😆
The character sketch is outstanding... Amon or Abhay is intriguing and fascinating... loved it. Abhay's parents name are unique and the name of princes of hell take things to a new height... wonderful just as I expected... waiting for an wonderful story... continue soon 😳

YAY!! 😆 i am glad you like..i want Amon to tugg at people's heart strings as the story goes..hopefully he will. 😳

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Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: cccppp
koyal wow!!🤗

i really love to read your ff..😛

thank you baby! i am so glad!

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Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
Beautiful update... you should be a poet...i get touch of Pocos writing in you or i feel like Im reading poetry of some British writer of 18 century...😆
So Pia was dreaming about her forbidden fruit or Abhay? it because of some kind of connection or she has already seen him somewhere? clearly noone around her is aware of Abhay and that's why she sounds like lunatic... lets see where it leads them... continue soon 🤗

Previous post edited too...page 6 😊

Yes , Abhay is the forbidden fruit 😳..and there is a definite connection..and she has seen him in part 1 but no one else has...but the reason why piya thinks she was clearly hallucinating and so does everyone else ..is because fire was leashing out from his skin which did not even die in rain , which is practically impossible , right? yes ..she has always sounded like some lunatic as if she does not belong here and never has.😳

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Brilliant so pia is already pinning for her forbidden fruit or man. Nice

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Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Brilliant so pia is already pinning for her forbidden fruit or man. Nice

yes she has 😳

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Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
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awesome...magnificient update koyel!!! 👏 🤗
it felt while reading,tht the words were enlightening my soul..!!! Lovd it!! 😳

So pia wants, death to b her life??!!! 😳
I guess thy hvnt met n dis era!! Or Mayb thy hv bt nt n flesh n blood!!?? Or am i wrng? Hv thy actualy met??

Plzz continue soon..luking forward to d nxt part eagerly!!
Thanks fr the pm..tk.cre...😊

--indu

ahahha. they have met..but not in flesh and blood ..yes piya wants death to be her life...they have never met or they believe they haven't but they have already met in part 1..piya is not sure though...and abhay has seen her..but she is his 150th prey that he could not rip apart cause pri and alvi were there. 😳

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Anj01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#110

superb update!!!

u mentioned about pia's thoughts so beautifully...the description was simply fantastic...adding to the beauty of phenomenal piece of writing.

continue soon.