AbhIya FF : It's the end's beginning. (PAGE 60 ).

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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brilliant writing koel..so pia is already longing for her forbidden fruit..so they already met??

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Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: abhiora
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brilliant writing koel..so pia is already longing for her forbidden fruit..so they already met??

yes..they have 😳..but no one knows..neither does piya herself. 😳..or so she head thinks she hasn't but her heart thinks its met him long ,long ago..😳

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Resh

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Ok so if Pia aware Abhay is some devil frm hell coz the way alvi & pri r saying he is forbidden fruit,U cant c him & Pia is questioning thm 'Y can't I c him or have' seems lke she know him.Chalo plzz cont..Awesome update by the way.I love the way u describe everything lke a true author/writer😳

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Amazing Koyel 👏 It felt like I was reading poetry 😳 It was beautiful. So Pia wants the forbidden fruit now? 😉 Plz continue soon n thanks for the PM 😊

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awesome...magnificient update koyel!!! 👏 🤗
it felt while reading,tht the words were enlightening my soul..!!! Lovd it!! 😳

So pia wants, death to b her life??!!! 😳
I guess thy hvnt met n dis era!! Or Mayb thy hv bt nt n flesh n blood!!?? Or am i wrng? Hv thy actualy met??

Plzz continue soon..luking forward to d nxt part eagerly!!
Thanks fr the pm..tk.cre...😊

--indu

Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
Ok so if Pia aware Abhay is some devil frm hell coz the way alvi & pri r saying he is forbidden fruit,U cant c him & Pia is questioning thm 'Y can't I c him or have' seems lke she know him.Chalo plzz cont..Awesome update by the way.I love the way u describe everything lke a true author/writer😳

Srish , Alvi and Pri have no idea what she was talking about..for the reason Alvi was like she finally needs a clinic 😛..Piya's soul told her that he is the forbidden fruit as she asks herself..she was asking if he is a devil or human to herself because of how surreal he appears , Piya's head thinks she is hallucinating..but her heart and her soul are saying things which seem insane... ..and only she has seen him..alvi and pri have not seen him yet. Piya knows Abhay before she knew anything else..but obviously , she would not know that yet..or lets just says she has just began to know that , finally. 😳

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Nabakov_Musings

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: mandy1024
Amazing Koyel 👏 It felt like I was reading poetry 😳 It was beautiful. So Pia wants the forbidden fruit now? 😉 Plz continue soon n thanks for the PM 😊

Yes she does 😉..or lets just say she is just intrigued and fascinated by him for now. 😳