AbhIya FF : It's the end's beginning. (PAGE 60 ). - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
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brilliant writing koel..so pia is already longing for her forbidden fruit..so they already met??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiora

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brilliant writing koel..so pia is already longing for her forbidden fruit..so they already met??

yes..they have 😳..but no one knows..neither does piya herself. 😳..or so she head thinks she hasn't but her heart thinks its met him long ,long ago..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok so if Pia aware Abhay is some devil frm hell coz the way alvi & pri r saying he is forbidden fruit,U cant c him & Pia is questioning thm 'Y can't I c him or have' seems lke she know him.Chalo plzz cont..Awesome update by the way.I love the way u describe everything lke a true author/writer😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing Koyel 👏 It felt like I was reading poetry 😳 It was beautiful. So Pia wants the forbidden fruit now? 😉 Plz continue soon n thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...magnificient update koyel!!! 👏 🤗
it felt while reading,tht the words were enlightening my soul..!!! Lovd it!! 😳

So pia wants, death to b her life??!!! 😳
I guess thy hvnt met n dis era!! Or Mayb thy hv bt nt n flesh n blood!!?? Or am i wrng? Hv thy actualy met??

Plzz continue soon..luking forward to d nxt part eagerly!!
Thanks fr the pm..tk.cre...😊

--indu
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Ok so if Pia aware Abhay is some devil frm hell coz the way alvi & pri r saying he is forbidden fruit,U cant c him & Pia is questioning thm 'Y can't I c him or have' seems lke she know him.Chalo plzz cont..Awesome update by the way.I love the way u describe everything lke a true author/writer😳

Srish , Alvi and Pri have no idea what she was talking about..for the reason Alvi was like she finally needs a clinic 😛..Piya's soul told her that he is the forbidden fruit as she asks herself..she was asking if he is a devil or human to herself because of how surreal he appears , Piya's head thinks she is hallucinating..but her heart and her soul are saying things which seem insane... ..and only she has seen him..alvi and pri have not seen him yet. Piya knows Abhay before she knew anything else..but obviously , she would not know that yet..or lets just says she has just began to know that , finally. 😳
Edited by austenrox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mandy1024

Amazing Koyel 👏 It felt like I was reading poetry 😳 It was beautiful. So Pia wants the forbidden fruit now? 😉 Plz continue soon n thanks for the PM 😊

Yes she does 😉..or lets just say she is just intrigued and fascinated by him for now. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abc123chiti

it's awsome...
perfect...!!!
pleez add me in ur pm list...


ok. added! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

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it's awesum..evrything was perfect😃
cont. soon n pm me

okay, i will. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon


sure , Alicia. 😳

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