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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER-1

( THE DARKNESS )

It is stormy night or u can say every night of this place is stormy. It is said that this place never remains clam.People says this place is full of curse. No one visit this place as it is fully covered with deep forest'.forest which is full of mystry!!!!

It is said that it is the most dangerous place of Dehradun. Mnay people says that there r ghosts or wild animals living which survive on human blood!!! No one know who the animals r that sucks blood!!! But not only that'.there r lot of mysterious things which happens here!!!

Deep through the forest, there is dark castle type house where no one came till 15 years'.people say that horror things happen here but no one knows what is the story behind this house!!!

As the forest grew deeper and deeper inside , at last u can see that mysterious house!!!

The house which is full of darkness and sorrow!!!!!!

Many years has past'no one lives here, no one comes here but'still someone is there!!!

But who??? Yes there is someone who is living in this house'the one who is waiting all these years to take revenge from a special person'who is the pure enemy!!! The one's soul whose soul will make her free from this curse life!!!

But still the time didn't came to take the revenge and she lives in full of agony, anger, frausted and kills poor soul of people!!!

But now the time will be over soon'and she will get what she wants!!!

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A big masion stands in the middle of garden..garden full of chrippy birds and colourful butterflies. Sunlight is falling all over the garden. A woman about 50 years old standing in the middle of garden giving orders to the gardeners to water the flowers and trees.

Woman- oho are yeh kya karahi he ap??? Mene apko kaha tha ki wo rose wali pot uss side me rakhe lekin apko to samaj hi nahi ata!! Jai ye aur usse waha uss kone pe rakhe..

Man 1- yes maam.

Woman- Gopal idhar ao'wo jasmine ka plant kaha rakha tha?? Usme pani de do!!

Suddenly a man about 50 years came running " Madhu!! Arre suno..kush kahbri he!! Chand se phone aya tha..unone kah ki abhay aj sham ko Paris se wapas arhi he!!!"

Madhu happily- kya??? Wow this is a very happy news!! Bohot dino ke baad arhi he abhay..oh no I have clean the house'.kitne sare kaam baki he!!

Man coolly- arre tension mat lo..main hu na!!

Madhu glares- huh..tum aur mujhe help karoge!!! Arnab..me tumhe acchi tara janti hu'in 35 salo me koi sahi se kam nahi ki!! Aur aj help karoge?? NONSENCE..

Arnab smiles- I know madhu but I promise that I will wrk like a gentleman today and hep u'by the way its Sunday means holiday!!!

Madhu laughs- ok ok!! As u wish..accha ab jaldi se kam me lago..

Suddenly she notices arnab lost in thoughts. She asked worriedly " Arnab r u alright?"

Arnab comes to sences- hmm yeah!! I am fine.

Madhu not accepting- no arnab..u seems disturbed. What happen??

Arnab sadly- ( sighs ) just remembering the fateful night'how happy was my daughter wih abhay but destiny also took it away!! She died on that night'and we lost her forever.

Madhu with teary eyes- yes arnab'everything is perfect now but yet so unperfect!! Abhay lost pia and we lost the charm of our house..i still remembers her sweet voice..the beautiful voice when she used to call me mumma!!

A tear escaped from madhu eye. Arnab put his hand on her shoulder to comfort her.

Arnab sadly- madhu I know itss very hard to forget her as we r her parents'but past is past!! And I know it still hurts us remembering the fateful night and the worst thing is we didn't find her body!!

Madhu starts crying. Arnab holds her shoulder and says " madhu I know it hurts but what to do??? Anyways stop crying'otherwise u will hv dark circles under ur eyes!!"

Madhu still crying- arnab its no time fr joke..i cant forget pia..she is my daughter!!

Arnab in broken tone- I know madhu but we hv to move on..pia was also my daughter!! Ok lets start cleaning and decorate the house before richands come.,

Madhu rubbing her tears- oh I forgot..yeah lets go!!

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The huge castle like masion which is little bit far away from forest also seems happy and cheerful. A woman wearing a black long length dress coming downstairs with a smiling face . She seems to be very happy with some reasons'.

A man came towards her wearing a black coat.

Man- hasseena bohot kush lag rahe ho???

Hasena- yaeh chand..afterall hamari bare beta paris se arhi he after 1 year!! In ek salo me sahi se bhi baat nahi hui usse'

Chand- u r right!! I am very happy too'atlast he is back.

Hasena- chand, how is he?? Tumne to usse baat ki he!

Chand worriedly- he is fine..but the darkness didn't leave him!! Seems like he still mourns fr her death'after all she was her true love!!

Haseena sadly- yeah chand..i still miss pia!! She was just like my daughter'I hope everything becomes good like before!!

Chand- hope so'

Haseena- well..who is going to airport??

Chand- hmmm...actually I am busy with business..so thought to tell aditiya!!

What say??

Haseena beams- sure..he would be very happy to know that abhay is coming back!!

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A young man with light brown eyes coming towards a restaurant with a naughty smile.

A girl came running and hugged him tightly and said " oh jaan!! Kabse intezar kar rahi thi tumhara'itni dar kiu lag!!"

The man with smirk- oh sweety..busy with business!! But now I hv time fr u..( winks ).

Girl with smile- shut up Adi..kitni naughty ho tum!!

Aditiya- tumhari payar ne mujhe naughty banadi , Tina!!

Aditiya kissed her cheeks. Tina blushed.

Suddenly aditiya's mobile rang.

Aditiya picked it up without looking " hello!"

A girl shouted- u ghada..kaha ho?? Where r u? I am waiting in lovers park and u didn't came still!! Adha ghanta ho gaya'

Aditiya mobile was about to slip from his hand as he got nervous.

He stammered " oh..umm'umm..actually..i..i am busy with..with..actually I am busy!!

The girl shouted- busy with whom?? Ha..i think dating with any other girl!!

Aditiya shocked- no no..just a important wrk!! Will meet u later. Bye.

Before the girl could say anything he cut th call and sighed.

On the other hand tina asked worriedly- hey whats wrong?? Tum thik to hona??

Aditiya- yeah I am fine !! ok lets go in the restaurant.

Tina beams- sure.

Suddenly again the phone rang. Aditiya became afraid and cut the call without looking.

He walked in restaurant with tina but again the phone rang. He got panicked.

Tina got suspicious and asked " adi.. whos call is this?"

Aditiya gulped and looked at mobile and felt relived as it was his dad.

Aditiya smiles- its dad'wait a second I am coming!!

Saying this he picked the call " hello dad!"

Chand angrily- aditiya'what is wrong with u?? kabse call kar raha hu tumhe'

Aditiya coolly- sorry dad..didnt notice!! Hehehe

Chand shouted- shut up!! I know..some girl must be call before me. Right?

Aditiya pouted- no dad..i had urgent meeting!

Chand smirks- u Mr. flirter I know u well!! So behave'

Aditiya laughs- ok dad..u caught me!! Yep it was my u know'

Chand laughs- ok I understand! Now listen..today abhay is coming back'and I want u to go to airport and pick him!!

Aditiya happily- really!! Bhaiya coming back..wow..yeppie!!

Chand- so r u going!!

Aditiya- ofcourse dad!! Sure..ok I wil leave now..

Chand- yeah u should leave now fr airport as the flight might be arriving..

Aditiya- ok dad.

They cut the call. Aditiya was feeling very happy as abhay was returning after long time. He really missed his brother in this whole year. He cant wait to see him!!!

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Aditiya is on way to airport. But this traffic seems to make him late.

Suddenly fe noticed that cars r not moving and is pressing their horns.

Aditiya in mind- oh no'what is this?

Aditiya saw an old man car next to his'he called out " hello uncle!! Ummm'can u tell me what is going on?"

Old man- beta'there is some construction wrk taking place which is causing the jam..

Aditiya irritated- and how much time it will take to clear the road??

Old man sighs- almost 3 hrs!!

Aditiya shocked- oh no.. I had to reach at 2 o clock !! I hv only 15 mins..shit!!

Aditiya began to drive the car on other side, suddenly the old man yelled " beta kaha ja rahe ho?"

Aditiya- uncle I hv to go to pick my brother from airport..so I am in hurry!!

Old man worried- but by which road u will go?

Aditiya smiling- uncle I will go by the roadside of jungle!

Old man moth dried hearing the word jungle, he quickly said " but its dangerous..u know very well many people hv died by going that side!"

Aditiya smirks- thanks uncle'but I hv to reach my brother! And by the way I will be fine.

Saying this aditiya left by turning right side..he smiled n mind " uff this people..huh! they r soo afraid of that stupid jungle' and see there is nothing stupid living there!"

As he began to pass through the jungle, suddenly a gush of wind began to blow'it seems like hurricane is going to happen!!

Aditiya stopped his car and looked outside from window.

Aditiya in mind- aj achanaj yeh mausam ko kya hogya'seems like something is going to be wrong!! Is jungle me kya kya raaz chupa hai'kisiko bhi nahi pata!!! Sibhaya hamare', ase kiu lag raha hai ki koi anew ala hai yeha!! Koi especial??

The trees of jungle began to swing in its own rythem..it seems that whole jungle is happy as well as sad. Every day the darkness and sadness is visible in the atmosphere but today it is different!!! It is like someone is going to bring light'

Aditiya looks at the jungle fr last time and inhales the air and sighs sadly. He started the car and left from there to meet his brother...

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GUYS THIS WAS THE FIRST CHAPTER...HOPE U ALL LIKE IT!!!

SORRY FR BEING LATE...

Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
sis my mind is so small.. pehle hi update me itni sari mystery..😡
now give my questions reply..😉

pehle me bol deti hu..amazing update..😆


how is mystery girl in forest?😕
r u planning to come back of piya?..😕 bez piya's body didnt found..😕
and is piya negative here..or piyali..?😕 bez piyali is also diff person na..and she has mystery..i mean is she abhay's past lover reborn?😕
and adtya is cool..😎 thank god arnav yaha detactivegiri nahi karega..😆😆

abb answers dena mere savalo ke..😆😆






Edited by TeDylove - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Hey nafi awsm update
thx for pm

But hey itne saari mysieries...
Pls solve them fast
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesum update nafi👏..continue soon n thnx 4 d pm
Edited by abhiya_pkyek - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing update. Full of mystery and suspenses, but I liked it.
I love mysterious stories.
so piya and piyali are different here.
I loved aditiya's character here.
waiting to know who is the girl waiting to take revenge.
Pls pls continue soon and thanks for the pm.
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update Nafi 😊 Pia's body wasn found? 😲 So is the Mehra's daughter Pia? Am kinda confused abt one thing. Is the monster u were referring to a vampire or a ghost? 😕 Blood sucking vampires I got it, must be the Raichands but what abt somebody who wanted revenge? Has to be a ghost coz a vampire can take its revenge anytime it wants as its not bound to a place or human or so I think 😕 Not sure. Waiting for the next part. Hope u continue soon this n I hope ur exams went well 😃

Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update!!!!

pehla hi update full of mysteries...good...i like mysterious story😉
abhiya are already separated...oh no...plz unhe jaldi phirse milwa do😍
liked aditya's character...he is very naughty😉

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update
beautiful start..
Eagerly waiting for abhiya's meeting
continue soon
thanx for the pm
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome!
a confusion!pia died 18 yrs bac?so if now pach is 30 tht time 12?😆confuesd abt the time😕will pia dobrial be evil😭as u mentioned tht sm1 lives in palace n is angry n wants revenge 😭
Edited by ilove99 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pia is dead even before the story begins. Loved the character of Aditya. he is the best among the lot looks like. So now why is abhay coming back. Waiting to see that. So will abhay cross the jungle.

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