FF: THE GRUDGE CH-6 UPDATED *pg 44* NOTE PG 47

.AgapiMou.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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new ff!!!!!!!!!!wow...awsum concept n characters...rely lukin 4wrd 2 it!!!!!!pm me:))))

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Resh

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awesome start.I guess Piyali is recarnation of Pia but y Abhay wid panchi.Hate it.Koi na cont..😳

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow great story plz update soon
my name is Alicia pm

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Nikvi29

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Wow its Amazing i love the character sketch and prologue.
i love it Thanks Nafisa for the pm
i am a fan of your work .

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Anj01

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow amazing prologue and CS...continue soon😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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thanks for pm ,but your character sketch is very long --but nice concept

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flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: raichandroxx
VERY NYC CHAR SKETCH...PROLOGUE SOUNDS INTERESTING...CONTINUE SOON THANX FOR PM😊

THANKS FR LIKING IT!!! WILL CONTINUE SOON..😉

Originally posted by: abhiya0006
character sketch and prolouge sounds interesting!! continue soon

THANKS..

Originally posted by: rashi.rose
Wowww dear:-)... AWESOME CS:-):-). Its very Interesting:-)... I loved it:-) cont soon...

THANKS..😉

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flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Rmuk
Awesome character sketch and prolouge.
Loved it dear.
Wow u are an awesome writer. U have already so many works.
Pls continue soon and thanks for the pm.

THANKS..WILL UPDATE SOON

Originally posted by: abc123chiti
awsome cs n prologue...!!!👏
abhay is gonna get engaged to panchi...😲
prolougue is interesting...mysterious though...😕
so pia has been born again as piyali...?? 😊
n waiting for abhay to fall in love again...??😃
continue soon...😊
will be waiting...😊

NOPE PIYALI IS NOT PIA..THEY BOTH R TOTALY DIFFERENT!!! THANKS FR LIKING IT..

Originally posted by: luckdiya
1 more stry... dnt 4gt nafi u hv been writing...3 stories... plz update dem on tym:))
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nice startin... abhay & panchi engaged...***phew***
DD & VD r siblings 🤣wht an imagination😆😆& shanaya is her(pia) momnt fair...😆😆
xcited 4 d nw ff...continue soon:))

DONT WORRY I WILL END FF DONT BREAK MY HEART AGAIN...😆THEN WILL CONTINUE THIS!!!😉

ABHAY PANCHI IS NOT ENGAGED.😲.THEY WILL OR MAY BE NOT...DD AND VD ARE SIBLINGS YEAP🤣 AND THANKS FR APPRECIATING MY IMAGINATION...😆WILL UPDATE SOON😊

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flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Yumna786
very different from other ff,s...like conept n c.s continue...😊

THANKS😊

Originally posted by: -Sonia-

Nice concept
loved it
continue soon
thanx 4 d pm
tc

THANKS WILL UPDATE SOON

Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago

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flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: lost_in_love
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wow!! Grt cs!! 👏 Nd prologue sounds interestng too!!! 😃 The little grl is piyali i thnk!! So is it hr reincarnatn??hm..v.intrstng!!
Plzz continue soon...nd pm me when u update!!! and thnx fr the pm...😊

-indu

THANKS...PIYALI IS NOT LITTLE GIRL..😆SHE IS 21 YEARS OLD!!😉I EDITED LATER...NO ITS NOT REBORN STORY.😲PIYA AND PIYALI ARE DIFFERENT!!😃

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