'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#681

hi indu & tora..superb update yaar...abhay realized his mistk & dat SLAP ws awesome...stil he didnt knw "ish feeling ko kya naam du" 🤣 dis updt is secially written 4 abhay all his feelings,regrets,sadness,care everythng hs described b'fully

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#682

Yay so kate was nicely put in her proper place! I wonder what she'll do now...

and Pia wakes...she'll wonder what's happening 😆

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 13 years ago

#683

wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

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barki

@barki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#684

lovely update abhay realised his mistake and come back to his real life thanks for updating me 👏

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#685

its supa dupa awsum...love it to d core...

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#686

lovely ss indu & tora😳
thnk god abhay understood his mistake😛
so now abhay is having feeling for piya😉
continu soon & pm karte rehna😆

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#687

amazing update

m happy that abhay slapped kate...she deserved it!!!! but she had already given a warning that she will create troubles for them in future.

Finally abhay realized his mistake and is feeling guilty of committing so many blunders being with kate...hope everybody forgives him soon and accepts him.He was so restless to know about pia...hope he soon realises his feelings for her.

rajeeb and tora were sweet.waitin to see pia's reaction when she will see abhay sitting right in front of him.

thanks for pm

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#688

this was so nice indu. the way u wrote abhay's guilt and confusion was fantastic

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621511

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Posted: 13 years ago

#689

wow just amazing story abhay slap is mind bowling ...waiting for piya response how she will react ...thanks for pm

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#690

wow!!!!!👏
superb update!!!!!⭐️
it was not at all boring..it was amazing indeed!!!!!😃
loved the way abhay demanded answer from kate!!! that was the best part...yay!!👏 i was so delighted on every insult he threw at her!!😆 yippee!!!! they broke up gr8!!🥳
kate is so evil😡...even after all this she is thinking of taking revenge😡...hope she will suffer more🤢

finally abhay ki dimag ki batti jali😃...he found his old self. liked rajeeb for so blatantly telling him his mistakes😆..good.
the scene where abhay realized that he didn't have any feelings for kate and all his well wishers were right...n how stupid he was...the way he felt...that he could rewind his life...was amazing!!! 👏⭐️this is what happen when realization strikes.
but now he is so afraid to use his brain😆 that when it telling him abt his feelings for pia...he is just ignoring it...every person around him can see that but our gr8 abhay raichand as usual will be the last to understand😆😆😆...but i love this innocent n cute abhay.😆

continue soon😊

Edited by anjali0111 - 13 years ago

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