'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153

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chandni

@TeDylove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#341

hey always write amazing ...why u think u bored us??😭😭

i always love to read it..and when u last add this line "u bored us" mera pura mood bigad jata he,,,,😭😭

dont do this again...

continue soon..😳

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

Very beautiful update indu blkul borng ni ti
ahh kate she is so irritatng ,abhay jhelta kaise h
anik is so sweet nd carng
u describd deir emotns nd pain very well
cntinue soon

thanks a lot hema! 😳

yep! kate's lyk that!! haha..yeh toh sirf abhay ko hi pata hey!! 😆

yaa..anik is a true gentleman! 😳

will continue soon!

and once again thanks fr liking..😳

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: cccppp
hey always write amazing ...why u think u bored us??😭😭

i always love to read it..and when u last add this line "u bored us" mera pura mood bigad jata he,,,,😭😭

dont do this again...

continue soon..😳

aww...thanks dear!! 🤗 so sweet of u to think so!! 😳

i m still nt satisfied wth the update!! 😕 but glad that u really liked it! 😃

okk..i wnt !! 😊

yep! will continue asap!

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#344

amazing update

i luv anik's character..he is so sweet and caring..

i wonder what is wrong with abhay if his sister is also not talking to him because of kate what does he see her in then?

u depicted their pain so well both abhay's and pia's...

plz pm me nxt time when u update

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
amazing update
i luv anik's character..he is so sweet and caring..
i wonder what is wrong with abhay if his sister is also not talking to him because of kate what does he see her in then?
u depicted their pain so well both abhay's and pia's...
plz pm me nxt time when u update

thanks a ton dear! 😳

yaa..anik's a sweetheart! 😳

ryt now,abhay is blindfolded by kate! he is confused btw love n pretence! so it will tak tym fr him to realise the truth! :(

once again thanks for ur lovely words.😳

yaa..will surely pm u. .

Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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Ankita

@Fly_high

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Posted: 13 years ago

#346

nice update Indu👏 and I m liking Aniket he really loves Pia alot 😊 and Kate I think she is with Abhay only bcz of his money 😡 and Abhay loves Pia but don't realise it himself anyways nice update 😊

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#347

Aniket is really a sweetheart but why is Abhay acting like Kate's personal naukar😡

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#348

nyc update indu 👏
kate is only after abhay's money...huh!!
anik is so sweet and caring 😃
acha hua risa abhay se bat nai krti hai... 😡
hope abhay realises his mistake...
continue soon and thanx for pm 😊

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Sulagna

@SheIsTheOne

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#349

Very nice update...👏 Aniket is so sweet...and Abhay-Piya's past memories were very sweet 😳and what important has Haseena got to say to Abhay??😕 And Kate...ufff...she's so weird...never repeats any dress...🤢 ..freaky...😆...anyways...really nice update..🤗 Continue soon...😳

and ya...thanks for the PM..😃