ABHIYA FF:-UNITED chapter 9 page 54 18/2

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Peehu24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

awesome update...loved it..piya is starting a new life..hope she meets abhay soon..

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Nice 😊 Felt bad for Pia though 😭 But in a way good coz if Rahul hadn dumped her then Abhay wouldn have got her 😉

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Rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Yaar its really Amaging:-).. Plz PM me when u update:-):-)... You are an Awesome writer:-)

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Anj01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

nice update!!!

poor pia ...she has suffered a lot😭

wil abhay be her saviour???😕

waiting for abhiya meeting...continue soon..n add me in ur pm list

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Diya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

nice start chanu...
feeling bad 4 pia...rahul lft her b4 her marriage
MBA ? at d age of 18😕... srry bt dis is nt possible... graduation is necessary 4 doin MBA & she is jst 18 yrs old...
dnt wrry its a fiction ... toh sab chalta hai...
update soon

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Pari Gupta

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#36

nice

pm me when u cont please

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chandni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

hey thanks all to comment...i am happy u all like it..😃

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chandni

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Africa in Raichand office

One lady nervously make round and round in office..she is so tense,she know if alisha'a plan not work then all africa bast in any times... if he will not get ready to go then god knows what how will they all save them self from her Mr . item-bomb's anger...haseena eagerly waiting for her daughter...
chand console her"dont wary haseena ,alisha sure know how to make abhay accept her wish and this is business trip so he sure dont appose and start his intelligent question,so just calm down and trust your daughter talent.. so sure make him go out of town and kunal is also with her so situation is under control...we have not fear to blast nucleus today...but i am sure we have to prepare for it...otherwise no one can ave us from your son's blast..."
haseena glare at him and he roll his eyes and thought now some one pls save me for my personal lady blast..

.haseena just start to scold his for blame her son and the door of the office open and one joyful lady with handsome young man enter in office,her steps are so grassfull and her own stile..all the member of office blow at both..but today her face is so happy..and her eyes flash eagerness to success her mission and also waiting for someone who is coming to change her family's and the person who she love most in whole world life..and beside her charming man is walking with her ..and smiling for his love's success..both happily enter in cabin and smile alisha thumb up with his ded and cheerfully declar"mission successful,bro ready to go out of town ..part 1 is success so for now cheer..""yaa ded..seem like ali(alisha) also save u..and mom cool dawn dont scold poor man,already he is under your charge."kunal added wink to his father-in -law..alisha glare to kunal and added"yes..now if u guys complete your enjoyment then we will have to ready for part 2 mission ..here we know about bro but we didnt know anything about her ,we just know her name and before bro return here we have to know all thing about her..and we have only two days for it.":dont wary ali two days are enough for us"and he smirk at her"alisha are u sure about that girl..i mean r u sure she is what we all think..what if u wrong"haseena ask her daughter in concurs.."oh mom pls trust me..i fill that she is same girl which i drams...but i didnt see her face yet..i really want to see her...kunal what time of her flight?"alisha asked"oh her flight arrive here at 10 o'clock and i also send a car for receive her.."kunal answer her cheerfully but alisha suddenly frozen and after some seconds she shout"oh no!!! oh no!!""what happen alisha why u shout"haseena ask anxiously..

"mom bro's flight time is 10:30..we have to do something otherwise our plan go fail..we cant effort to meet them now "lisha answers,kunal use his power to calm all"we have to stop him"chand reply calmly"no!! he doubt on us..what about alisha and kunal go to see of him..u both have to tell him u also have some work so u drop him on airport and go for your work..he believe u but pls control your thought around him.."haseena told them,they both nodded and go out of cabin"kunal i fill like they both meet today.."alisha told kunal"ali trust your vision we sure know how to stop them..and alisha suddenly stop..and blankly stare..kunal understand she saw somthing,after some second alisha spoke" i see they both fight with each other in airport we have to stop them so kunal when bro going for passing u have to with him and i stand with driver to receiver her"kunal nodded in agreement"..

In Raichand mission

The boy playing basket ball in Cort yard,his body language is so perfect like some athlete,his blue eyes only on his target,his black hair coming on his face make his face more dead handsome,any girl in this world ready to give him her heart in first sight,his masculine is so perfect like he everyday workout on his body..but his mind is not with him,he playing absent minded still his target is so perfect and thought why i feel like all they hide something from me,them thought today so different..like they concentrate their thought around me..he his no one but arrogant,rude yet gentle Abhay Raichand,the son of chand and haseena and Partner of Raichand empire, in world no one can change his decision or no one nigh late his order..and if some one make him angry then no one save that person..
he thought leave it i have have to ready for go out and suddenly his phone range,see the no in screen smile appear on his face,he throw alast goal direct in basket without seeing and take the phone"what now aalu(alisha)..i am going to get ready so dont shout me its just 9-30..oky and i reach airport sharp 10..so no wary baby.." abhay told her sister in teasing tone"oh bro pla stop call me aalu or me starting to call u khadush..and me and kunal coming with u at airport bez we have to go sopping that way so we think u see of u ..then i can tell mom dad that i through u out of city.."alisha spoke with abhay in fake anger..abhay laugh silently and added"oh alisha u never change and why u have to come with me,u both can go in different car, u know i dont want to disturb your cho-chico around me..u cant think around me about kunal freely..and i love to drive alone"alisha answer quickly"why bro u telling me all this story just say that na u dont want t come with us bez if i come with u in all way i will tell u what i want when u return from trip",abhay just shake his head and spoke"ok i am coming with u but i will drive""no problem!!"she added cheerfully and cut the phone.."few!!! to make bro agree is so hard how can that girl make him fall for her?"she told knunal in censured"dont wary ali when it come to girl all girls have some strong weapon to make boy go on knee and if this girl really made for abhay then sure god give her some unexpected strength...so just chill and ready for watch how world most dangerous and sunburn creature fall in love..sound interesting isn't it?"and both smile at each other and kunal told her"now before abhay go himself for airport we have to reach home"and both driving from office to raichand mission..

after 15 minutes trio going in the car for airport alisha full the music volume and put the English fast track so kunal and her mind get totally involve in song and also fighting with his bro during driving..make them drive thrilled..they reach 10'o clock at the airport abhay force both of them to go but they refuse and alisha started telling abhay her list of thing which she wants...alisha found her driver and told kunal to go with abhay she have some work with driver...abhay kiss alisha on her cheek and started walking with kunal...alisha know now she has to go far away from her bro bez she feel her present around means she is near to her..suddenly outside of the airport started Raining and all the atmosphere change in happy ...like they also welcome someone special..abhay started walking with kunal and he suddenly fill some strange pull and also smell strong like Lathyrus flower which make him crazy and his eyes colour suddenly change i violate but thanks for his goggles no one can seen it..he suddenly fill to dry that people who have this sent and close his eyes to control him but suddenly from no where someone collide with him..and he fill so much anger bez he fill smell so much close..and he stop halt to threaten that people..

pia reach out from security counter and started walking at the door..they inform her some driver is coming to receive her so she have to find driver..she switch on her phone and her phone started ringing,she smile see her screen and pickup the phone"hey anu i just reach S.A and i really fill nervous and good also here weather suddenly change i hope they really send someone to receive me? any way how r u? and mum dad ? r u tell them about me and give them latter..?how is my dad..what mom anser.e they happy..u tell them i am going to work?""oh!!Oh!!! oh my god my question machine is return..its true i always irritated from ypur continues questions bomb but i really miss it..pia just take a deep breath and calm down..and pls i request don't throw your hirosima and nagasakhi bomb on their people.."😆

pia listen her friend and close her eyes and take deep breath ..she smell very sweet and chocolate fragrance make her mouth water..but she didnt open her eyes and just enjoy the smell and sweet smile occur on her lips..but she suddenly she collide with some one and she so much angry because of someone break her concentration..she stop in halt ready for fight but anu's voice brink her back and she mutter"idiot blind" and again started to walk for reach out the door,but she fill like her heart speed suddenly increase so much after collide with that man she just she his back but fill strange pull.but she shake her head and again started walking.."pia u again started day dreaming !!! weak up girl and yes your dad is good and all is well just go and take some rest i talk with u at ni8 or next morning"anu added mockingly" oky anu bye i also have a task to find my driver and take care of yourself and mom dad"pia cut the call and started searching for her name plate...

another side abhay just in half turn and he listen kunal thought he is going out of control bez of her fragrant and abhay held his hand and started walking far away from girl ,he listen her murmur and got more angry bez no one have dare to tell him like that,,he just turn around to take alook of girl he only see her back and curly hair and he thought u curly head when i am return from my trip and see u here and i sware u have to pay for what u say to me..no one means no one have dare to mess with Abhay Raichand..they come so far and stop then abhay ask" him r u ok?""yup,bro now i am fine thank for that..i have to go from here ali sure waiting for me"kunal replay smiling at him"ok i also have ..see u soon"and he also smile and started walking inside..kunal breath now and smirk appear on his face and he also started walking at the door and thought how can abhay save himself form her when when he know she is working in our empire..😆😆 i really have to warn mom and dad to make house and specially his room and cabin using some strong metal so we have less damage..

here another side pia read her name and go to driver alisha standing some distance to see her...she really happy to see her,pia is most beautiful girl in the world and her chocolate brown eyes around dark circle seem her stress and her face is so pale like she didnt eat properly for some days.. kunal suddenly come with her form no ware..he smile and his eyes told her ,another plan is success,they stop their face to face meeting...but the angry voice break them eyelock and both eyes got shock which they seem..here pia take left-write of diver"what r u thinking i am coming from india so i have no brain" if u r the driver of me then see me your id card of company..with photo ID proof ,dont think i am fool otherwise i send u in jail.." kunal thought she is saw week now yet she has this strength and temper then what is she when she has her full energy..and like alisha also think same as and they both laugh hearty..."she is perfect for bro..we really enjoy this..she is as temper as bro and she also has unlimited strength"alisha told him"and she is also question machine like lawyer and investigator like Sherlocke homes"kunal this comment made both of them laugh ..they started walking toward pia and alisha introduce both of them pia also fire question on them and after finish question answer round one they pleaded pia to go to see her new house and after she take rest she can question them how many she wants...but in whole their journey from airport to guest house pia askes most of question about the empire and about her work..they both smiling at her innocent comment and her expression..alisha think mom is really love her after she meet her..and bro ..😆😆 pls god save my bro ...and she laugh heartily just thinking about her bro...and here pia drifted in sleep for some times..

They all reach guest house and first alisha order pizaa for pia because she know if they go from here without force her to eat she probably not going to eat..so both of them force her to finish all..after they gone pia started unpacking all her thing..alisha told her that car come here to receive her tomorrow for office..so she has to take rest today...pia's all day gone to place her thing in house..after complete all work she fill so tired and begun to walk her bedroom...she take out her parent's frame and tear started rolling dawn from her eyes"mom dad please forgive me but i have to do this ,i cant marry someone whom i didnt know..my heart is not ready for that.."and she put it on table and takeout rahul's frame,she lovingly caress her hand on it"i know u dont like that when i am cry so i am never going to cry in public and also never i sew my pain to anyone..see i started making my decision..god give...u..a.ll.happiness"and she burst out tear which faces always made her happy now that face hunted in her dream like night-mature ..she fill like her lifr is already finish..now her only goal to take care of her parents..but she didnt know god already send an angle to make her life colorful again...

Edited by cccppp - 13 years ago