ABHIYA FF:-UNITED chapter 9 page 54 18/2 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome concept...👏
do continue...😊
n plz add me in ur pm list...😊
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nice concept chandini you should cotinue.. its really amazing..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start chandni ...
continue soon ... nd pm me next time 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You have a nice concept please continue and please pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey chandni...😊
ur ss sounds interesting...
well written👏👏👏
title can be BORN AGAIN...
i hope u will like it...
and don't forget to pm me...
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wow great story plz update soon
my name is Alicia pm me
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nice concept..i loved it..continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing Chandani
So piya is gonna be fardeen reincarnation?
And Abhay is suppose to be her savoir


i was alittle confused dear about u said she died because her savior will not born😕 but next time her savior will be ready to save her

wew you trying to say dear. Fardeen Savior was not born in her fardeen life but in her next birth her savior will be their to protect her as he was born
or are you trying to say her savoir is not human is a supernatural who she has not meet.

is this some suspense ?


Thanks for the pm

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wow!!!! shreya...nice suggestion... yaar i really liked d name...i thnk u r a big harry potter fan... 😃



yesss...a huge one😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 1

In Delhi

The beautiful girl sitting at the window,she has beautiful baby brown eye,curly long hair and creamy white skin but tear continuously roll down from her eyes. past some days of her life made her life gone up to down. She lost everything in her life before two days.She lost love of her life,her families respect for her and most important her father's love for her.Tears not stop from her beautiful eyes only question come in her mind why? why this all happen with her when in all this she has not any fault...

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When pia turn into 16 her father chose for her Rahul ,the son of his old friend.she happily accept this relationship and also fall in love with him .Spending two years with him she felt like she is luckiest girl in the wold. He has so much care,love for her and her family. He fulfill all her wish and also give her moral support. For her he was like best friend she share all thing with him. Pia was like she didnt take one step without asking him.She was totally depended on him for all important things.Sometimes he also scold her"pia that is not good , u fully dependent on me what if one day i leave u for some reason?" and that time pia totally shaken of her core"pls Rahul dont speak again like that...i..i...cant think to live without u"and tear roll down from her eyes"pia pls dont cry i just want u that u take your decision yourself,i always with u i promise" who knows that one day her life change like that,she has to live without him..

When she turn 18 Rahul parents and pia's parents decide both of marriage..Pia told her father she want to study more but her father replay she continue her study after marriage also. So she ready for marriage, but her destiny decide for her another thing..and before her marriage's two day...Rahul married with soniya because his grandmother promise sonia's parents that and she just want to see his marriage with soniya before she died. Rahul and his family so much try to chage his grandma decision but no use. Rahul told pia first everything she was totally broken after that..she has no strength told her parents and family about this..Rahul's father come and apologized to her father and told all story ,after his father leave all family member talk about pia very bed and also about his father...to listen all this her father has heart attack and after that her mother also so much angry on her...she told many bed things to her. Her some family member suggest her mother to arrange pia's marriage with another man.Pia not ready for that she totally shaken after incidence.. but no one ready to listen her..all people made fun of her even her mother not support her.Her father totally silent in pain.No one ready to listen her pain only Anuja understand her and also give her some support..Even Rahul fill so much guilt about knowing this and so its affect his marriage life. Pia didnt want to marry now and even she dint want to spoil Rahul's life because of her.She has not capability to listen all family members miserable talk about her...So she made one decision...for al she love...

Flashback End

Pia made decision to leave india because its only way to make all happy...she cant leave even 10 days far form her parents but she knows she have to do this..for them...So she decided to leave india without talling anyone...She will go tomorrow to give interview in Raichand empire . So thats why tear rolling down from her eyes ,she has no one to listen her,even in those days no one care about her...she didnt eat properly from three days and continuously crying... her eye totally red and swollen..but she close her eyes because for pass interview she has to rest...

Pia pass interview in Raichand empire thanks to her MBA degree .She was brilliant student thats why she has MBA degree in small age...MD of Raichand also empress so he also accept her request to didnt give her info to any person...Thanks to Haseena Raichand who accept her condition on phone...Pia think she is really nice lady...


Pia direct go anuja's home and talk with her job..she told her that she want to leave india thats why she accept this job...she will go south Africa for her job tomorrow..pia told anuja to take care about her parents and also give her latter which pia written for her parents.Anuja know all about her and she know that no use for stop pia ...bez if she will not go her family member presser her to marry someone which pia and also anuja didnt want..Anuja know that if pia's father is in good condition then he also dont force her for marriage..so anuja support her...they both come to pia's home and secretly pack her all things...anuja took pia's beg with her so no one suspect pia when she leave home at night..

Now pia and anuja in airport...anuja's bf also come their he know all about pia and also respect her so much"anu i know its difficult for u but please take care of my parent,specially papa..i know he cant bear it but u have to understand them why i take this decision..i dont know from now when i talk with them or even i return here or not.."and tear roll down from her eyes.."pia pls dont cry now u have to breave dear,u will live their alone ,no one with u their ,u have to take your all decision from yourself so pls try to confident ..and dont panic about your parents i surely take care for them...u just go and live your life..."anuja told her and hug last time to her b estfriend and bid her goodbye.She pray to god"please god she always belive in u..even when u do bed to her ,she told me WHEN GOD SNATCH YOUR HAPPINESS THEN DONT BE SAD ,HE ALWAYS RETURN U MORE HAPPINESS...so please now make her life easy and peace.."

And like god listen her prayer suddenly started raining in india .

Edited by cccppp - 13 years ago

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