SS-You brought the colours! Xmas update CH11-pg76

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STUTI KANSAL

@arunsunita_gm

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#501

update complete hai ya nahi ?????????????

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#502

great update meera👏 pia made him dance in the rain😉Hmmm...nw waiting to knw wat is abhay's past nd how pia wil deal with it...!

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#503

i just loved it soo much😳
so my abhiya danced in rain
my poor abhay he takes so much stress
his eyes hovered around her petite curves as she took his breath away.He whispered as he coiled his hand on her waist, "You look engaging my winsome lady" i loveddd this line☺️☺️😆 & about this line He kept looking at her as they danced, caressing her milky soft waist.it was just ahem ahem☺️☺️☺️☺️
meraaa i just loved this line tooo much"Life isn't about number of breaths u take it is about the number of moments that took your breath away.u dont have any idea hw much i loved it😳😳 its sooo true. claps for u👏 for writting such an awsome line👏👏😆 vaise batao ye line kisse churaya hai??😉😆
chalo mom ko bhi abhay pasand hai😉 good job abhay!!😆
piya called the MD, MD ka baccha🤣🤣🤣 & the MD calls her abhay ki chamchi😲 dats good!!😉
waiting to know about wat MD told him😛
& about precap i never understood even now 🤣
only 1 update left i will surely miss it yaar, this ss always touched my heart,
its so realistic😳 but its ok😔
first i thought that i will give u a very short comment as u updated sooo late😡😡😡 but the update was so good that i could'nt stop myself😆😆
do continu soon this time, the last update & claps for me for writting such a big comment🤣

Edited by shria - 12 years ago

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kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#504

Amazing update!
So finally Abhiya r opening up 2 each other.Abhay even talked 2 Piya's mom n mish! Wow!
Continue soon.

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#505

Aw! Thats so cute. I love the part where Pia tells him to dance in the rain.
Hmmm...so supense end tak rakhogi, haan? Cool... :D

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#506

lovely update...thanx u remember ur update...really love tht...but my like bottom no working...thanx 4 pm me...plzz update soon & pm me,

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#507

Hwww you are ending this ff?:O God I jus loved it :-):-) Beautiful update:-):-) Amazing:-):-):-)

Edited by --Rose-- - 12 years ago

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#508

wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm

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Ekta

@HaymurS

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#509

Cutie update meeru.nice one.aww abhay stressed and pia tensed.lol
dat rain wala part wow.abhiya dance.
n dat shadi wala where pia rushed to abhay to know she looking n dance was uff.loved the dialogue of no. of breaths wala.khud ka tha ya udaya hai kisi ka?lol
hehe ab to maa bhi razi and mishu bhi.aww
md ka bacha(lol)
abhay ki chamchi(rofl)
n precap mere sir ke upar se chala gaya.lol.kaun pack kar raha hai?n tum ye ss thoda aur nai lamba kar sakti.i mean i m ready to c a family drama of abhiya n unke bal-bache.lol
continue soon(nd as usual tum bhut time logi update karne me.)lol