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Posted: 13 years ago
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the narrative is abhya.

EPISODE 8

The raichand trio reached the dehradun airport in the morning & they all were waiting for their luggage , abhya wanted to say few things to her parents.

"dad, mom...thanku so much aapne mere liye itna bada step uthaya ...thnku so much ...mai" mom interrupted me.."ek minute abhya kya bola tumne thanku...kyu ...hum hai kya tumhare , haan?"

"mom, but ...i am saying what i feel at heart..bas...aap aise kyu bol rahe ho"

"kyuki hum tumhare parents...aur hum bas tumhe khush dekhna chahte hai kisi bhi haalat mai...got it...parents can sacrifice anything for their children...isliye aage se koi thanku bola na to fir dekhna abhya...i wont talk to u"

"mom...please don't say like that ...i love you" i hugged muma .

"yahan tum dono ko gale lagne se fursat nahi h aur officers ko humara luggage dene se " dad was always the mood changer , mom patted dad's shoulder.

"vaise mom, lagta hai dad apni purani jagah aakar bahut hi khush hai...unhe aap jo mili thi yahan, hena dad?" i chuckled & dad patted my head "acha beta...dad se panga...dekh lunga mai" i laughed even louder & finnaly there came our luggage , we all went out .

it was pleasant outside , nice breeze, mom dad never stopped smiling it was obvious they would be remembering their old town , i saw two cars , one was a dashing white mercedes and other a black honda city. the two people standing besides the car began approaching us. oh god nanu , uncle...wow...i ran towards nanu to hug him.

'naaannnuuu..."i hugged him

"o mera beta...kaisa hai?..." he moved his hand over my head

"nanu bilkul fit.. and fine...aap kaise ho?" i moved one feet back.

"bilkul fit and fine like my grand daughter.." i smiled to him and then he went forward to greet mom dad "hey pia abhay...hows everything?" i watched nanu go , mom replied "everything's fine papa...nd so on mom dad got into conversation...

i heard a clearance of throat...
"hey uncle..." and uncle went towards mom dad
"hi pia ...abhay" and he hugged daddy "aur bhai abhay apni beautiful beti ko nahi laye kya?" dad laughed very loud.
i grumphed on his comment and went there "haan ji KABIR UNCLEji ...voh beti ab badi ho gyi hai...jaise ki aap budhe ho gye ho,mai badi ho g yi hoon" all laughed on my comment.

"pia yaar, bilkul tumhari hi beti hai ye to..."

"panga loge toh phasoge hi na kabir."mom said

"okay ..then to mafi mangni padegi before it's late...sorry abhya madam apki kya seva ho sakti hai"

"better uncle...vaise ab kyuki aapne sorry bol hi diya hai toh ek baat mai bhi bol deti hoon...aap budhe nahi ho , aap to abhi bhi bade smart personality ho" dad cleared his throat & i continued "haan...haan... bilkul mere dad ki tarah."

"thanku ...bojh uttar gaya mere uppar se ab to...nahi to misha ne to mujhe buzurg category mai daal hi rakha hai"

everybody laughed together..

"so lets go home , madhu sabka intezaar kar rahi hogi"nanu said

"nanu mai aapki mercedes mai jaongi...plsss"i loved mercedes to the core ...so i opted nanau's car.

"okay beta ...kabir luggage meri gadi mai rakhva do nd pia and abhay ko tum le aao"

"okay dad"
then we all sat as nanu said and started driving...
i opened the window to take in some fresh breeze on my face & then placed my and outside the window
"abhya beta sambhal ke ..."

"haan nanu don't worry...mai dekh loongi jab peeche gadi ayegi"

then i placed my face outside as well ...these jungles, trees were fascinating...lovely trees, breezes...dehradun was an amazing place...

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the narrative is not abhya, but a conversation between two strangers, a girl and a boy standing behind the trees of the road through which abhya was going.

"hey...have you gone out of your mind...how came u came here...weren't we supposed to be in the most dense part of the jungle...?? why arent u replying me...bola na!!" the girl said

"what is it...could'nt u guess the reason...smell it" the boy said.

the girl smelled a bit.."what is it ?...they are humans...won't humans pass by the road...we don't harm humans we can control ...we were so far...itni dur se how can u smell humans..."

"it's something strange...this smell have smelled for the first time...it's not human...or may be a strange human...smell it harder"

she smelled harder "no it's nothing trust me ...u are thirsty thats it lets go...lets go... take one more slice of a deer" and the girl laughed and she holded the guy's hand & then they ran into the forest.





Edited by temptations - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
nice update. waiting to know what exactly is abhya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
nice update par who are these mysterious boy gaj... r they vampire and boy feel pull toward abhya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
awesome update. 👍🏼 lets wait and watch what dehradoon has to give abhya and abhiya. waiting for ur next update. ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
thanks everybody for reading...and appreciating...

@..dishu.. jald hi bahar aa jaega ki abhya hai kya...would take few updates more...till then enjoy!!!

@ trishnawaliya ...those mysterious characters will be reveled most probably in my next update...

now i can say that PKYEK 2 will become interesting at great levels...so all of u be updated by my posts...i am sure you all will love them even more :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
thank you so much...

next update soon to come...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update, ur story is really interesting. Plz continue soon and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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story was awesome..Keep update,,
Edited by vjBhavesh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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the narrative is abhya

EPISODE 9

We all reached to nanu's house ...kabir uncle helped us get our luggage , nanu opened the door and the first face i saw was nanis' behind it was misha massi in a beautiful blue suit with light embroidery on it, she looked really nice in that , a girl in track pants in shirt on which the caption was 'dare u!!! , looking at her i could easily guess she had to be ishika , misha massi daughter and beside ishika was a guy in black pant and white shirt , he was no doubt my sincere cousin rahul bhaiya, he always treated me like his real sister ,though he was adopted by misha maasi and kabir uncle when he was 4 , he was a lawyer by profession & as mom told me he is very sincere towards his work and responsibilities .i remember the last time i saw misha massi , ishika , rahul bhaiya was 7 years back when they came to mumbai...since i never came to dehradun...they only came to meet our family. ishika was the same just a few maturity on face...i was wishing she could have got maturity in her behaviour as well...she was so amateurish in all senses.but whatever she was like , I got along with her.

Before we could come inside nani was ready with a plate of diya, flowers ...whatever mom had told it was used to welcome guests...nani waved it around our faces clockwise.

before anybody could say anything nanu spoke

"come on madhu , ab andar bhi aane dogi bacho ko ya bahar hi rakhna hai"

"oho arnab...aap ko kuch nhi pata h...yeh zaruri hai...sab itne saalo ke baad yahan aye hai...aur meri dhyoti pehli baar humare ghar ayi hai...to kya mai itna bhi na karu??" nani waved her hand through my face & I smiled back.

"acha theek hai...to kya ab hum aandar aa sakte hai"

"hmmm...aao beta " and we all entered the house...it was lavishing , beautiful , ofcourse it had to be nanu was amongst the richest businessman in dehradun.

misha massi ,rahul bhaiya came towards us and ishika was busy having a burger.

"hey pia meri behen...poore saat saal baad mil rahi ho...kaisi hai tu?"misha massi hugged muma.


"eeeiii misha tumne over emotions vali acting kab se start kar di , huh??" mom laughed


"hadd hai yaar pia , tumhari behen tumhe miss karke apne emotions dikha rhi hai aur tum ho ki...jao jao rehene do pia...tumne mujhe bilkul yaad nhi kiya mai samajh gyi." misha massi's overacting was fabulous ...i started to laugh when muma patted massi's hand & hugged her back . massi looked at me from the corner of her eye and whispered in mom's ear. a whisper which everyone could easily hear "hey pia yeh ladki kon hai , dikhti to thodi thodi tumhari tarah hai "

mom made a face like what massi is talking about and parted away from massi

"oh wait ...let me guess yeh tumhari london return vali beti toh nahi hai?"


"misha !!!" mom opened her mouth. "haan yeh meri london return beti hi hai...tum bol to aise rahi ho jaise meri dus- barah betiya ho aur usmai se mai sirf ek ko hi layi hoon" everyone laughed.

then misha massi came and hugged me"kaisa hai mera bacha?"

"i am fine massi...aap kaise ho"she was hugging me very tight but i could'nt feel her tightness , i was a bit strong for that.

"i am fine...and sory about that london return thing...that was to tease pia , not u" massi whispered in my ears , which only i could hear, and i smiled back to her "it's okay massi" then massi went to dad "hmmm...to mr. abhay raichand ...kaise hai aap jejaji"


"theek hihoon apni saaliji se milne ke tadap raha tha...par ab milkar jaan mai jaan aa gyi hai"


"toh apni jaan apne paas rakho...usse dur kyo khade ho"and she brought muma closer to dad by pulling her hand , mom became red and dad holded mom on her shoulders.

"tum dono toh abhi bhi perfect dikhte ho...vo college vale couple jaise"

kabir uncle came towards massi..."to hum kam hai kya misha..." & smiled towards massi & massi gave back a fake smile "haan bilkul...bas thakurji thode budhe ho gye hai" and she laughed out loud.

then i said"no massi ...mujhe to uncle abhi bhi dad jaise young lagte hai"

"voh isliye abhya kyuki tum pia ki beti ho...ab uske traits to tumhare andar ayenge hi na"

"shut up misha" mom said "tum meri beti ko pane jaise mat bana dena"

"ab to banegi hi...dehradun jo aagyi hai...and i promise mai nhi banaongi but...ishika kis kaam ayegi...by the way ishika hai kahan?" everyone looked towards her and she was busy munching her burger & ishika made a baby smile

"this won't work ishika...stop eating and atleast come here"kabir uncle said.


"rehendo kabir beti kiski hai aakhir" and mom and massi laughed .


"aayi na dad ...bas last bite"and we all laughed...she ate so much and still had a athletic body .

then rahul bhiaya came and greeted mom dad ...

"namastey massi , uncle...kaise hai aap dono?"


'hum theek hai ...tum batao rahul...job kaisi chal rhi hai?"mom asked


"mai theek hun massi...court mai sab acha hai..!"

then bhaiya came to me.

"hey abhya ...kaisi hai?"and all others got into their conversation nani nanu, mom dad, massi uncle ...


"theek hun bhaiya..."


"kaisa laga dehradun?"


"badiya hai...thanda hai...mumbai ne to jaan hi leli thi garmi se"we both laughed.


"aur london mai sab kaisa tha..ya hai?"


"vahan sab theek hi tha but mujhe nahi pasand tha...mujhe bas india mai padna tha...vahan teen saal bahut mushkil se nikale...vo UK ka accent toh aap jante hi hoge...mujhe bilkul nhi pasand hai vo"


"acha samjh gaya...tumhe london pasand nhi hai"


"yeah bhaiya...aur aap batao...job mai lage kitna time ho gaya?"


"zada nahi panch mahine hi hue hai...but maza aata hai cases ladne mai"


"sunkar acha laga ...aap bhi settle ho gye ho"


"abhi kahan...abhi to bas start hi kara hai..."ishika interrupted him "haan abhi start kara hai kaam karna, phir shaadi karni hai ,bache honge, unki shaadi hogi...tab jaake humare rahul bhaiya settle honge , hena bhaiya?"

bhaiya pinched ishika's ear"acha bachu , bhaiya se panga..."


"aaooo...aaaooo...acha sorry bhaiya...mai to mazak kar rhi thi...sorry ...chodo na...pls...leave me" and bhaiya beholded he ear

"don't worry bhaiya ...ab mai aa gyi hun isko thode manners sikhane ki koshish zaroor karungi"


"sambhal ke abhya...kahin tum bhi.."


"acha hi hoga agar ye meri jaise ban jaegi...hum milkar shaitaniyan karenge"


"bhul jao ishika ...not possible...mai tumhari tarah junnglee nahi banoogi..."


"challenge??"


"done...lets see"

and we hugged each other.


"chalo mai chalta hoon client se milne jaana hai"


"bye bhaiya "i said and he left


"huh!! don't be so official ...come on man!!"


"this is not formal , but these are manners...which u don't have"


"whatever...mai zara massi se milkar ayi"


ishika went to the rest of them and i stood near the bar table .

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narrative is not abhya , entry of few strangers , two of them have already come in scene


there is a luge bunglow between the jungle where there are no other houses in far range of the house.


the two strangers introduced earlier...


the girl wearing a blue knee length dress opened the main door and a guy in grey cargo pants and white shirt was standing inside the door.

"how was it baby??"


"deers only..." and they both holded hands and went inside


"where is...r" the girl interrupted "he has gone crazy for sure...he is in way ...aa rha hogaa"

they went in their room

"okay...so minisha you look a bit dirty ...did u went to roadside?"


"ya i did...long story...before that let me take a bath...love you karan" and she placed a peck on the guy's face and he smiled back.

the gut went to the drawing room. then came a boy in black jeans and brown shirt came from the entrance.


"hey ranbir ...tum aa gye" karan came towards the boy whose age was about 20.


"ofcorse karan ...hum bhoot to ban nahi sakte , jo hai ussi se pachta rahe hai"


"what happend man...is everything fine?"


"what do i need to tell?"


"ya i guess ...i don't break rules of not getting into any of ours mind , neither mini told me anything...come on tell me"


"ignore brother!! i am in no mood to tell...ask your mini only" and throgh this karan was reading ranbir's mind.


"but ranbir...dude!!" and the boy went to his room ignoring karan, when he understood karan was reading his mind.


"this guy ...mini was right he has gone crazy"

ranbir brought his face outside his room's door "i heard that karan...now stop it don't make a issue of it...don't you dare tell adah and raj"

"dude...respect!!!"


"whatever...you rule breaker...dare u tell mom dad...got it!!"


"better...i won't ..."

ranbir went inside his room and karan went to his room.





PLEASE DO COMMENT ...!!!

Edited by temptations - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice... so i think their is new vampire family and ranbir may be abhya's soulemate and what actully abhaya is suspense still waiting to knw more story

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