ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#641

I am xhausted guys so i will try to write over a few days. Be patient. The only reason why i made a start today was coz i was on my lunchbreak but then i lost the plot. So i will develop this as i go along and PM U all individually OK? So don't expect this to be complete by tomorrow to save U all the bother.

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..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#642

wow that was a realy awesome update ayeshu!! abhay saved pia frm ww that was the only thng he must hav done in 100s of years and again back to darkness that was realy a vry henious act to use a small child for knwing the truth...story is getting more nd more interesting...i hope nw daniel helps pia..

Edited by -juhi-lily- - 13 years ago

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Prima :D

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Posted: 13 years ago

#643

awesum updt ayesha

eagerly waiting 4 d nxt updt

Edited by abhiya_pkyek - 13 years ago

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#644

BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 Told ya u'd get it back on track. Abhay is back to being the monster he is and Pia is also livid at him 😃 LOVED IT! 👏 BRAVO! ⭐️ Waiting for their confrontation. Now that Pia has lost all her powers I wonder what she'll have against Abhay! This gets way more interesting. I just hope the dark love story is retained in the upcoming updates since this is supposed to be an intense passionate story. BTW Ayshu who's updating next? Cant wait to read the next part 😃 Hats off to u! 😃 Only u could've pulled this off! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago

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bubble_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#645

That was a fab update Aysha...👏👏👏..U gave a new direction to the story...I would love to see how Pia now deals with abhay..who now knows Pia's secret...Abhay's dark nature was really well portrayed...He didn't even think once before harming an innocent child...and Pia on the other side without even thinking once gave away all her powers to save aayan..This shows how pure she is..But now she is rendered powerless..wonder how she now plans to make Abhay pay for what he has done......Continue soon...and thank u for the pm...🤗

Edited by _Sonu_ - 13 years ago

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bellaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#646

oh god superb update...
abhay saved her buty he do this to aryann
may be to see the powers of piya rite?
now again battlestarted btw abhiya...
lovely update the way u narrate

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: bellaaa
oh god superb update...
abhay saved her buty he do this to aryann
may be to see the powers of piya rite?
now again battlestarted btw abhiya...
lovely update the way u narrate

I am just trying to relight this FF back to it original dark place its always meant to be.

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#648

Excellent Ayesha... Thats how I loved it and that's why I always wanted it to be... Abhay being bad, very bad, dark and a manipulator since he has created a soft corner inside Pia...now its going to be fun... Im gonna loveee writing it now... 😃

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but it was really damn cruel of Abhay to attack Aayan... he is just a child. 😕 though he didnt kill him but still... i guess it shows how dark his character is. I guess this will make Pia really angry but im also worried if she has powers left because she needs to fight Abhay emotionally...

Edited by Phoenix.Xeelan - 13 years ago

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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#649

Wow ayesha u updated ur FF.I m glad 2 c u back in action.I loved it.I guess abhay did this to know wht Pia is I guess now Pia will become pure human or will lose her life.Lets c wht Pia will do 2 abhay?

By the way v read jst half of abhay's past life I wnt 2 read more abt his human life😳

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chandni

@TeDylove

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Posted: 13 years ago

#650

so now story is back in track...pls ayesha i request u,,i know u handed this FF authority to dishu..but made this story dark..i really love it..😛

now pia's all energy and powers gone i think and she will only human now..so leats see how she will fight..😊
i love abhay's gray character.🤢.and i think after abhay's bite ayaan will be fine..bez of it..?😕

hope fully we can see abhay's past ..and pia's secrete hope not out yet..

will be waiting for next part..⭐️