ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148

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Diya

@Fearless_Lover

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#561

PERFECT...
i ws missing u anji...
abhendra & ada moments were beautifully described
u r a superb writer dear...
keep writing swt❤️hrt

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#562

Anji tat was superbly brilliant 👏👏👏👏👏

U had me spellbound. That was a masterpiece ⭐️ U portrayed Abhay and Ada so beautifully I am at a loss for words. Everything about them be it their first encounter, or the scene where Ada tends to Abhay's wounds, their liltte romantic getaway at the lakeside was so beautiful 😍 I am really curious to know what happened during the attack.

I also loved the way u portrayed Pia's feelings. Be it her jealousy or her heartbreak, everything was mind blowing. Told u, u'd ace didn it? 👍🏼

Loved Dan's last line 😳

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#563

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wow...wow..wow...anji..tht ws a magnificient...Royal and dreamy update..!!!
U'r an Ace writer anji...i am in loss of words!! Dnt knw wat else to say..!! Just terrific!!
I totally lovd d past..nd princess Ada as well...m in awe of hr already...want to knw wat happnd to hr nd abhayndra tht forced hm to becum a monstar...!!
And pia is in love wth abhay already...cnt wait to knw wat happns whn thy meet again!!
Lovd daniel's part...he said it right..tht 'its hard to make abhay feel again...and he wnt want to change so easily'...true, bt we all knw only pia cn do dis impossible task of once again makng hm feel n change...!!
Lovd dis line of Daniel, "he loved once.he will love again."... waitng fr dis to happn...
Awaitng d nxt update eagrly...
Thnx for d pm aysha..tk cre...
And thank u anji for dis awesome update!! Tk cre..

-Indu

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#564

Gr8 update yaar.. eagerly waiting 2 know wat happens further.. carry on.. thanxx for d pm..😊

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#565

gr8 update!!!!!!!👏

nice to see abhay's past...so he sacrificed his soul for his love...aww poor guy.😭...n feel sad for pia also ...seeing him in so much love wid someone else.. ..was painfull for her.😭

now how will pia find out abt abhay...actually what happened in past???😕

continue soon.😊

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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#566

luved it. continue soon. wonderful update anjali

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#567

wonderful update

abhay and ada were so much in luv...their luv story was sweet

feel sad for both abhay and pia...

but lvd daniel's last line...

lvd it!!!!

thanks for pm

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#568

This is an outstanding chapter Anji... loved it to the core 👏 👏 👏

This is so sad Abhay lost Ada. I felt worse for Pia. she is clearly in love with Abhay and she felt bad because he loved someone else. But like Dan said, Im sure Abhay will love her again and find his humanity back. 😳

the whole channeling past and portal portion was amazing. and Im eager to see how Pia will find the rest of the story. who will continue next?

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Sharpay.Evans

@Sharpay.Evans

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#569

OOH LA LA!! Pia is falling for Abhay!! LOVELY UPDATE!! And yes I am upd8in g the nxt time!! :)

-gauri

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#570

auperb update anji...
piya is falling for abhay...
abhay ada love story is so sweet na...
but poor abhay wht had happened to him...
waiting for it...
cont soon