ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148 - Page 17

Originally posted by: mandy1024

This is one hell of a captivating story 👏 Brilliant. Very well written.

@Shivani: Loved the way u have written the second part. Very well portrayed. Loved Ayaan 😊 He's so cute. Good to know that Kabir will only be Pia's friend and not love interest 😉 brilliant story. Please PM me once u update it.

@Aysha: Thanks for the PM 🤗

Originally posted by: anukrati

SORRY FOR LATE REPLY
WOW
REALLY AMAZING
SHIVANI
really love u dear u are superb writter
love pia as angel appear on earth and her INTERACTION with human
like kabir story and aayan is so sweet.
love pia is eager to meet the monster abhay. hope they meet soon
love the update
update soon wonderful writters.
thanks 4 the pM

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

Great update shivani...!!! :-))
Lovd d way u intrducd pia to kabir,ayaan n thn misha...!!! Pia being an angel s very emotional...nd hr emotions hs been very well xprssd..!! Oh..Kabir hs gt a sad past...nd ayaans so innocnt...bt hope angel pia will surely cure ayaan's illness...!! Humm...so nw pia s goin to wrk n d nyt clubs...abhay's fav8 destnatn...!!!
Lovd d entire update!!! :-D m lovng dis story mre nd mre...!!!!
Thx fr pm...hope n d nxt update abhaiya will cme face to face...cnt hold my excitmnt!!! :-)
nxt update s by tanzie,i thnk?
K..tcr...

--indu