ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

thanks for pm

superb update

the way u have described abhay as evil and such a dark creature with no remorse of killing anyone is simply brilliant.

great job👏

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Anukrati

@anukrati19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

SUPERB
AWESOME UPDATE
ronnie
i love the update sorry i not read your work before but u are superb writter
love the way u describe abhay wildness.
lovely update
WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE
thanks 4 pm

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anjali

@adnilover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Ronee, you are a terrific writer. Amazing update!! just wow! The way you showed Abhay's dark world was commendable. This shows the intensity of the love Abhay will possess for Piya someday and also the power in Piya's love that will be able to bring a beast of of this dark world.

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Venesa44

@Venesa44

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Wow a chilling update,

Man i m not use to see Abhay all dark ,

Nice work👍🏼

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

really awsome update yar...the way u describe abhays evil side the lust of sex and blood and the other side piyas angel determination tht she bring abhat into good its seem lovely to when they meet...plzzz make it fast to meet abhiya yar...cant wait 4 tht...superb work u did cont soon

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

That was brilliant Ronee 👏 👏

I love your writing since the day I read your OS and you portrayed Abhay as a ruthless, evil vampire so perfectly... too sexy...

Now Im worried... how would I write Abhay n Pia's first meeting... you guys are birlliant 😳

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan
That was brilliant Ronee 👏 👏
I love your writing since the day I read your OS and you portrayed Abhay as a ruthless, evil vampire so perfectly... too sexy...

Now Im worried... how would I write Abhay n Pia's first meeting... you guys are birlliant 😳

I know U will blow us all away with your writing TANZIE no need to be so modest. U have a way with words and describing emotions. I can't believe all the fabulous work i've had the opportunity to read. I will try to catch up more on reading your works. I have an FF i am ending very soon so it will provide me with ample time to read. I can officially state this group FF is turning into a MONSTER hit and providing us with goosebumps because even i don't know where we are taking it. So there is an element of surprise even for me.

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: matwamango
I know U will blow us all away with your writing TANZIE no need to be so modest. U have a way with words and describing emotions. I can't believe all the fabulous work i've had the opportunity to read. I will try to catch up more on reading your works. I have an FF i am ending very soon so it will provide me with ample time to read. I can officially state this group FF is turning into a MONSTER hit and providing us with goosebumps because even i don't know where we are taking it. So there is an element of surprise even for me.

Thanks a lot Ayesha... means a lot to me. 🤗 specially from 1 of my fav writer and who is my inspiration of writing FF 😳 I took interest in FF ever since I read your Twisted love 😃

Thats true.. everyone will be surprised. let it be the readers or the writers because we dont know ourselves what's the other writer is gonna put 😆 this is gonna be fun 😳

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#179

Oh this Abhay is too evil . Is there a reason behind him being such a dark character. And how is he connected to Pia. Why does she feel it whenever he does something wrong.

But the darkenss that seemed to revolve around Abhay is too much Will a good heart klike Pia stand a chance or she too gets engulfed into it. I hope not.

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--faroo--

@--faroo--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#180

wow very nice update ronee its fab abhay super sexy evil and piya an angel how will they met what happened when they met what did abhay do when he see piya really excited thanks for pm ayesha