ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148

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SatanLaughs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Rmuk
The evil sexy part of Abhay was mindblowing. I loved the update. This ff interests me a lot. Pls continue soon and thanks for the pm. Pls pm me next time too and I want Abhiya to meet soon.

Thanx ! I love evil abhay and glad dat u loved the evil abhay as well, in my update !:-D:-D

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: minibsp2007
Very nice abhay's evilness was well described waiting for abhiya meet continue soon

Thanx !:-D so glad that u likd my update !:-D

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
U guys are superb. I think Abhay's bloodlust was described very well...in fact i'm wondering whether or not to hate him, his character is like that...love the last part where Piya vows to tame the beast... This is going to be awesome!

Thanx !:-D:-D.. Yea, while writing this, d 'taming d beast' part was my fav as well.. Lol.:-D:-D.. I am over d moon with dese positive feedbacks ! :-D:-D thanx, agn ! So glad u likd it.:-D

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
I'm looking forward to your next part of the story

Thanx, Alicia !:-D

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
<font size="4">Awesome update
Loved the way u wrote ronee
Abhay is evil sexy. Gosh the way u described abhay lust 4 blood & sex
& on 2nd hand pia's determination 2 bring out angel frm beast was superb
Plz cont...</font>

Thanx , shrish !:-D:-D.. I love d fact dat u lovd d update !:-P:-P
Yea , Abhay is sexy and evil. Purely so. But , Piya WILL bring out the angel. If she cant , who will ?:-D

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: bellaaa
tht new ff concept was awsome yar...loved it superb abhiya ff wowo so now in this abhay is evil and piya is angel and then they both fell in love yupieee cant wait 4 their meeting yar...lovely wruters u ares everyone do pm me loved it...cont...i m first one yupieee...now piya buys clothes and who this this man hope he help piya and waiting 4 abhiya meeting wht happened then...

abhiya will be meeting soon most probably in the next update depends on how tanzie shapes it
dude the update is complete and even the third one is up by purple nights do have a look at it u will get answers of ur question

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Diya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

hey!!!!!!!! ronee... amazinggg yaar... i luv dis dark side of abhay...
superb wrk dear... bt update ws vry short... thanks 4 pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

gosh! u guys made abhay sooo evil poor girls of d city...
pia has chosen a vry tough task bt i m sure she cmplete her fairytale...
thanx for d pm 😊

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: matwamango
SHIVANI just loved all the hard work U put into the UPDATE. It was brilliant. The description of what Pia was going through falling on EARTH. She met with Kabir and his story was heartbreaking. Poor dude lost a sister. So this is number 1 friend of Pia's. Lets see which outfits Pia purchases but she doesn't even have any money. Little Ayaan is so cute. Luv how he got attached to Pia right away. Children are so innocent and her as his nanny would be awesome. Pia working in a club would be interesting to see.

i m glad u liked it aysha i was just trying to set a plot for abhiya first encounter and also to show the deepness of purity of our angel i hope i did a fair job