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Fabulous update tanzie..👏 👏
after reading ur updates it no more seems tht the show hs stopped! The impact of ur updates are as powerful as the effect we perceive visually! Its as if pkyk/abhiya are still there..and its nt mere words bt pictures shifting infrnt our eyes!! 👏 ⭐️
abhay's possessives was really enjoyable to read! Loved misha.her entry brought sum light moments..
Well i wnt predict anythng dis tym regarding james,as in a world anythng n everythng is possible,so its better tht i wait for the action..
Wow!!!tanzie!! Am bowled! Pia taking lessons on shooting was surprising yet sumwhat expected!! Wonderful description..i truly felt i was watchng a hollywood flick!!! ⭐️
the nervousness,fear,anxiety..inexperience of a starter was wonderfully shown!! Awesome!👏
abhay's face changing while holding the gun was again explained wonderfully!👍🏼
wow! They both are so stubborn! Bt i like this thng abt them! 😉
hm..so chand is pia's true father! Why i dont knw bt i feel chand wnt try to kill pia! Abhay's fear regardng pia is going to prove wrng i guess!! 🤔
the part were pia ws afraid aftr they met james,and abhay gettng worried 4 pia,as to wat wud happn to her ,if sumthng happns to hm, was remarkably written! It shows again how deep their Love is!😊
the end was again beautiful...😊
In short the entire update was just fantastic!!!⭐️
plz continue soon..and thanks for the pm..dear..😳
p.s. Extremly sorry,tht i cudnt comment n d previous update as my xms were going on..
and...do tak..cre..🤗
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