Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143) - Page 78

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow me third...
ok coming to the update, it was fabulous 👏 👏
I loved it to the core, amazing yaar.
My most favourite part was where abhay teached piya how to use a gun, it was brilliantly written.
I hate that chand 😡
I loved that each and every part.
plz continue soon and thanks for the pm.
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
One day i will res first😈😆


Coming to the update! it was awesome! Loved the Misha part
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Abhay is so possesive i love him more like that😆
Pia learning how to use a gun was kind off a surprise, didn't expect that😉
I hope James doesn't back stab Abhay!
Abhay's master is actually Pia's father😲

thanks for the pm🤗



Edited by Abhiya_Gunner - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Oops sorry Tanzie 4 late reply😳

Chalo lets come 2 ur update
Awesome update lke always.Abhiya were super-Hot.Abhay possessive side was jst wow.Pia & Abhay's bonding.The change they brought in each other 4 their won gud was well described.Mish-Abhiya scene was fab.I always knew chand is Pia's dad & evn wrote tht in my previous comment but tu kabhi accept nhi karti thi😡😆.Now how Pia will react whn she'll come 2 know abt her father?I loved tht training session.Lets wait & watch
Plz contt..😳
Love u🤗
Edited by cuteshrishti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fabulous update tanzie..👏 👏
after reading ur updates it no more seems tht the show hs stopped! The impact of ur updates are as powerful as the effect we perceive visually! Its as if pkyk/abhiya are still there..and its nt mere words bt pictures shifting infrnt our eyes!! 👏 ⭐️

abhay's possessives was really enjoyable to read! Loved misha.her entry brought sum light moments..
Well i wnt predict anythng dis tym regarding james,as in a world anythng n everythng is possible,so its better tht i wait for the action..
Wow!!!tanzie!! Am bowled! Pia taking lessons on shooting was surprising yet sumwhat expected!! Wonderful description..i truly felt i was watchng a hollywood flick!!! ⭐️
the nervousness,fear,anxiety..inexperience of a starter was wonderfully shown!! Awesome!👏
abhay's face changing while holding the gun was again explained wonderfully!👍🏼
wow! They both are so stubborn! Bt i like this thng abt them! 😉
hm..so chand is pia's true father! Why i dont knw bt i feel chand wnt try to kill pia! Abhay's fear regardng pia is going to prove wrng i guess!! 🤔

the part were pia ws afraid aftr they met james,and abhay gettng worried 4 pia,as to wat wud happn to her ,if sumthng happns to hm, was remarkably written! It shows again how deep their Love is!😊
the end was again beautiful...😊
In short the entire update was just fantastic!!!⭐️

plz continue soon..and thanks for the pm..dear..😳
p.s. Extremly sorry,tht i cudnt comment n d previous update as my xms were going on..

and...do tak..cre..🤗
Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW TANZIE..GREAT UPDATE!! LOVE ABHIYA KITCHEN SCENE..ABHAY WAS VERY POSSESIVE..
SO CHAND IS PIA FATHER...I KNEW IT!! I HOPE PIA DOESNT GET ANGRY ON ABHAY WHEN SHE KNOWS THAT ABHY HIDE THE FACT THAT CHAND IS HER FATHER..
AND HOPE THEY REMAIN TOGATHER FOREEVER..BUT ONE THING HIT IN MY MIND WHILE PIA LEARNING GUN SHE ASKED ABHAY THAT IF SHE DOESNT WANT TO KILL THE PERSON THEN WHAT TO DO..KAHI ESA NA HO FUTURE ME PIA ABHAY KO MARDE!!
AND LAST LINE IS FRITENING ME...DONT BRING DEATH TO THEM..PLS!!
UPDATE SOON
Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update tanzie👏


abhiya part was cute and hot😳.liked possessive part😆

liked the gun training part.now I am feeling like learning it

so chand is Pia's father,hope after knowing the truth Pia wont leave abhay😕

Edited by .rumki. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update. 👍🏼 misha entry was superb. pia always play the game of jealousy to make abhay express the depth of love he possess for pia. really loving the romantic and passionate moments of abhiya. waiting for ur next update and thinking whether jehs entry is going to bring a twist. ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res. 😆

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tanzie 🤗🤗🤗
i l❤️ved dis updt... finally misha is bck in piya's lyf ... 😆😆😆
she called abhay her lyf 😍 dis is d bst line i mst say...u md my day...i ws missin my possessive abhay bt after reading 2days updt i m super duper happy😃
so james😡 (1 of d member of abhay gang) cm 2 knw abt abhay🤢 dis is 2 bad...it vil increase dere problem...piya is in terrible condition..cnt c lik dis...its awful 4 abhay
i thnk her decision is rgt... she dont wnt 2 b a burden 4 abhay...
d way he handled d whole situation is marvelous ...👏👏👏
wht vil hppn nxt...xcited 4 nxt prt
keep writing dear... tk care
Edited by luckdiya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Baccho its not done... still writing...abhi comment mat karna... 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 Awesome update Tanzie. It is really scaring me as i know disaster is looming. Abhiya are both at the most beautiful phase of their life yet they are vulnerable to lurking danger I am keeping my fingers crossed.

Glad Mishu is back
Edited by snitchseeker - 13 years ago

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