Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143) - Page 33

Originally posted by: priya.1

awesome update tanzie 👏

wow abhay freed pia😊

abhiya falling for each other😳

good that u made the note at end of ur FF... 😆

waiting for abhiya to meet again 😍

continue soon dr...

Originally posted by: abhiora

wow!!this was soo beautiful and touching...the way they r slowly bringing each other out towards the light..jst amazing!!

Thanks Tora. how are you? hope your hostel is treating you good. yeap..the journey towards light has started.

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Oh this is so touching. The way you described Abhay's pain was so heart rending! I didn't think he'd let her free, but I'm so glad he did.
Now Pia will live a new life as a med student...waiting for the leap. It was supermega awesome,buddy- can't wait for the next!

Thanks a lot Shreeya 🤗

Pia will start her new life but will meet Abhay again. we will know more about his past then.

Originally posted by: raichandroxx

fab update yar luvd it...so abhay saved pia nd pia has nw almost quiet drinkng nd has decided to join med college wow!!
both pia nd abhay has helped each other to start to c d li8 happy to knw dat... 😊
nw eagerly waitng for abhiya meetng again...thanx for d pm nd cntinue soon 😊

Originally posted by: rashi.rose

AWESOME UPDATE:-) U R A GREAT WRITTER DEAR:-) I JUS LOVE IT:-):-)

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Mindblowing update. U are a superb writer. Abhay and Piya's pov were nice. Pia decided to continue her study was good. I am eagerly waiting for the leap and Abhiya meeting again. Pls update ASAP and pm me.

Originally posted by: PurpleFairy

Hello hi, Tanzie and Heena🤗 neethzzz 🤗

Ok, why I feel that this was the best update so far is because NOW the real story begins. One month, and the the indelible impact they've left on each other refuses to fade away. I need to know more about Abhay to judge just how much she has affected his life but ya, Pia definitely has had a 360 degree change. Eaxctly.. that's why the leap. you will see how much impact they have left on each other. how it has turned Abhay to something else and where it would lead him. and Pia has already changed a bit. She was a medical student? Wow, yaar! Damn, poor soul! What she is and what she could've been. I'm glad that at least she is finding her way back into the light. Hopefully, she'll help Abhay as well. Aww! He actually waits to catch glimpses of her! So, Abhay sees himself in her and hence, relates to her pain. I'm hoping to see him trust her with the same once they meet again and develop their bond. We will see soon why Abhay is like what he is today. and Pia will change for good which will shock her friends but she won't bother. they will meet soon too in complete different situation. Pia seems to be like our Pia Jaiswal in the show: keen to meet Abhay and know more about him. She, too, has realised the reason why Abhay let her escape and I'm eager to see her dig deeper into him and take him out of his shell! She had to work hard for that offcourse 😆 but she will be successful in that 😳 she will care for him even more when she will know his past... 😊

Eeekk! I want an update already!

Nevertheless, all the best with your work, Tanzie! Hope to see you back soon! <33 heena will update after holi dear.. n enjoy your day..happy holi 😊

Originally posted by: -Sonia-

Awesome update!
Loved it.
Awww.. Abhay helped piya! So sweet !
OMG! Piya was a med student .. Wow!
I hope, abhiya meet soon

Please! Continue soon
take care

Originally posted by: peehu24

awesome tanzie...their pov was written beautifully...piya was a med student! Totally unexpected!

Originally posted by: anjali0111

wow what an amazing update!!!!!!👏👏👏

u hv described every thing so well...thats it does'nt seems a story anymore, to me it has became a reality of abhay-pia (two people, whom i feel i knw them personally).😍..all thanks to your writing skills...u kinda captured my mind..u knw!!!!!!😲 Thanks a lot 🤗 your comments very defined so i love reading them 😳 whats the point of writing if people doesnt feel it...glad u did..means lot to us 😊

so they r separated...leaving a vacuum in each other's heart n a hope that they wud meet again somewhere, some day in life.😍...i liked the impact they had on each other...i mean on one hand a cruel assassin has lied to his master n feeling guilt n remorse after a longtime in his life..how a "damsel in distress"(though fearless n confident) has shaken him to the core n shown him mirror.😕...and on the other hand brat, drunkerd, spoilt supermodel is inspired by her abducter not to drink, infact she is feeling dull in the spotlight n nw want to go back to her normal life...🤪...what a strong potrayal of emotions n all the characters!!!!!! hats off to u...why dont u take this writing thing seriously...i m sure ur stories r gonna be big hit. Thank you.. honestly i do want to take writing seriously but im afraid my scripts will be thrown as garbage 😆 anyways...will try for sure. coming to abhiya.. you will see the impact they had on each other and how much they both will change when they will meet after 6 months. and they wont even admit it but when they will know it.. its gonna be beautiful. 😳

nyways continue soon...n as u promised..bring abhiya back soon😉...god knws how m gonna wait for next update. will update on saturday😆

Originally posted by: sukusnavnit

amazing update . the way u expressed their internal feelings with ur words it was superb. loved reading ur update and eagerly waiting for ur next update. update asap. 👍🏼 😍 😛