Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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hema

@hema_rawat

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#301

amazing update tanzie ... bpth pov were suprb...

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#302

awesome tanzie...their pov was written beautifully...piya was a med student! Totally unexpected!

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STUTI KANSAL

@arunsunita_gm

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: flora212
Oh my god ! Truley man, u r a great writer!!!
!SUPER COOL! I think abhiya r going to fall in love soon as u say there will be leap.Hope u will give happy end! take care.

my thinking is also same as yur flora

i also think that abhiya will meet after leap and will FALL IN LOVE

tc ks hav gud day 😊

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#304

wow what an amazing update!!!!!!👏👏👏

u hv described every thing so well...thats it does'nt seems a story anymore, to me it has became a reality of abhay-pia (two people, whom i feel i knw them personally).😍..all thanks to your writing skills...u kinda captured my mind..u knw!!!!!!😲

so they r separated...leaving a vacuum in each other's heart n a hope that they wud meet again somewhere, some day in life.😍...i liked the impact they had on each other...i mean on one hand a cruel assassin has lied to his master n feeling guilt n remorse after a longtime in his life..how a "damsel in distress"(though fearless n confident) has shaken him to the core n shown him mirror.😕...and on the other hand brat, drunkerd, spoilt supermodel is inspired by her abducter not to drink, infact she is feeling dull in the spotlight n nw want to go back to her normal life...🤪...what a strong potrayal of emotions n all the characters!!!!!! hats off to u...why dont u take this writing thing seriously...i m sure ur stories r gonna be big hit.

nyways continue soon.😊..n as u promised..bring abhiya back soon😉...god knws how m gonna wait for next update.

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navnit

@sukusnavnit

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#305

amazing update . the way u expressed their internal feelings with ur words it was superb. loved reading ur update and eagerly waiting for ur next update. update asap. 👍🏼 😍 😛

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621511

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#306

You are a very good story writer
amazing and mind -bowling story 👏👏👏❤️
thanks very much for giving such a cute concept of ff ==it is very unique and different
please send me your ff dear
👏

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#307

woh tanazie!!! its beautifull!!!! i loved it!!!!

abhay freed pia!!!!

both are falling 4 each other!!!! i m loving dere bond!!!!

i loved d note... i cant see dem apart 4 long!!!!

waiting for dere other meating...

now i wish abhay opens up with pia!!!!!

cont soon n thanks 4 d pm

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.AgapiMou.

@.AgapiMou.

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#308

Hmm..romantic thriller..luvd dis!!1 of d bst ffs mus say..bolly writers cn luk out 4 dis if dey wnt superhits..ts sizlin n terific n yeah abhia's cnection vry difrnt..rely njoyd dis..cntinue soon!!

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Pallavi Sarkar

@pallavisarkar

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#309

thnx for d pm

gr8t 👏👏

felt really bad for both of dem

cont soon updt soon

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Mousumi

@-Chinky-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#310

Tanzie & Heena..this 🤗 is for both of you.
What a story man!
Abhay as an assasin is really thrilling. Now Piya has changed her mind and decided to finish her medical studies. All because of abhay! Aww..
The way they understood each others' unspoken words and felt the pain hidden within,.it just sent chills in my body.
The best part was when abhay set her free but piya was unwilling to leave cuz she feared that abhay could be harmed!
She even asked if they could meet again..how cute!
Loved reading it so so much..:)

Well this is your new reader(when you have already posted 5 chapters 😆 ) and I usually arrive a bit late with my comments ( Tanzie, stop laughing now🤣)
Waiting for the next update.
Much love ❤️

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