Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#131

jst wow tanzie!!i have no words..the spark is already there between these two firecrackers!!! omg!!the writing was sooo vivid nd realistic!!i cud picture the scenes!!they have many things in common even though they r poles apart!!they already sizzle my cell screen!!

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Nice update. I liked the way Abhay saved pia from Rob. I want Abhay to come to good path soon. Thanks for the pm and update soon. Pls pm me after updating.

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Anukrati

@anukrati19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

WOW
SUPERB UPDATE
TANZIE
love u dear what a update
omg abhay kidnapper and killer.
abhay pia both have a tearful past.really love the idea. haseena is dead sad and i guess that plump man is chaand.
ABHAY-pia pov is superb. she feel safe when abhay is around so sweet
rob is jerk love the way abhay fight for pia .really excited 4 next update .i guess next will done by heena
waiting update soon
AND THANKS A LOT FOR PM

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Awesome update
I loved it tanzie
Oh so tht incident made abhay heartless
Pia is mesmerized watching abhay's face
I cant wait 4 more
Now its heena turn 2 update
Loved it
Plz cont
Luv u
🤗

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Khizra jabeen

@PrincessKhizra

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

👏OMG... Tanzie that was superb yar, this ss is even more darker than any supernatural story. n abhay is also very ruthless that i wanted to hate him (for the 1st tym in my life) but his mercy towards piya compensated the loss n yar this is the SUCCESS of WRITER's way of expressing a character, evn if the character is favourite for sm 1 u can make the reader to hate him with the magic of ur words n at the same tym u make the reader to love him again amazing yar... 👏 👏 👏

I just loveddd the way Abhay cares for Piya 😳

I think v'll hv to wait for a long tym to c their love blooming bcoz both r hard nut to crack n especially the circumstances r mosttt worst (she evn saw him killing jhon) 😕

Anyways, hope for best, n i must say that this part was 1 of ur bestest loved it HATS OFF TO U 🤗

Yar i wanna say smthing, hmmm... as v know that u n heena both r writers of the story then plzzz try to update ths ss twice a week (with 3 days interval), but if possible update it daily 😉 u know na how greedy i m in ths matter 😳

so plzzz... update soon...

❤️

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

thanks for pm:))

awsum update

luvd it

pia is indeed very fiesty..would love to see her interaction with abhay...

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

WOWWW... AMA4NG UPDATE dear:-) loved it:-)

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#138

oh dear both abhay and pia had troubled childhood and both are surrounded by darkness in a way. hope they find solace in each other.

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621511

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

love it ))) amazing start

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#140

Felt very bad for Abhay. He seems to have become so cold blooded because of his bad past. I think Pia has already penetrated the dead heart of his. So now what is it going to be is he going to go against the master. And Rob he deserved it.

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