FF:DON'T BREAK MY HEART AGAIN last chapter pg 116 - Page 24

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update

so i guess finally abhay will come to knw about abhi in next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update .
mein socha abhi to abhay ko pata chal jayega but no but chalo next update mein hi sahi . continue soon .
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 update
hope soon abhi will get well
i want abhay to know abt abhi as his son
hating jeh.he deserve to get punishment
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
I'm looking forward to your next part of the story
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update Flora. I want Abhay to know Abhi's truth soon. Hope Piya gived Abhay a chance to be with his family
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Posted: 13 years ago
Guys well here goes the next ch but may be after this the next update will be late as my exams are approaching but will try my best to update in btw.
Chapter 14(1)

Hospital,evening

Pia is sitting on a tool near abhi's bed.her eyes were swallon due to crying a lot.she kept her hand on abhi's small hand.suddenly she felt abhay's finger is moving.First she thought it was dream but then she again noticed and saw it was true.she quickly called the doc.The doctor did some check and told that he is totaly fine.pia gave a sigh of relief. The doc left.pia looked at abhi who is looking at the surrounding with his sparkle blue eyes' Mom! Where am i?'
pia smiled 'sweetheart, u r in hospital!'.
Abhi- why ? What happen to me?
Pia- u forgot? U got an accident!
Abhi smiling- oh yeh! I remember! (holding his head)OOUCH! It hurts!
Pia with little anger-what were u doing on the road?huh!u didnt think what would happen to ur mamma, if i would lost u?
Abhi pouting like a child- choli momma! I dont now what i was doing there! I just went to take my ball.choli i will not do it again!
Pia hugged abhi and tears roll down her cheaks.
Abhi pulled away from the hug.
Abhi- mom, why u r crying? I am alive not dead.pia gigled at her son.
At that moment , abhay entered the room and became shocked.
Abhi shouted- YEPPIE! Abhay uncle u came at last! I was waiting fr u so long!!!
Abhay came near his bed- relax abhi! U r injured?
Abhi making an angry face folded his arm around his chest- Not fair! U r late!
Abhay holding his ears-sorry baba! It will not happen next time.
They both laughed.pia was getting nervous seeing abhay and abhi closeness.
Abhay saw pia's nervousness and asked abhi with smirk' well, who is this young lady?'
pia became surprised at his question.
Abhi- Oh i forgot to introduce! So...uncle this is mom and mom this is abhay uncle...MY BEST FRIEND! I told u remember? Actually , i wanted to give u a surprise on my birthday!
Hearing the name mom, abhay's eyes widen with shock. Pia looked at abhay with fear.
Abhay to pia-oh i see!nice to meet u!(extending his hands)
Pia shaked her hands hesitantly.
Abhay was still in shock and looked at pia with questioning eyes that shows what is this pia.
Abhi suddenly spoke-wow, u bring choclates fr me! I love u so much abhay uncle.
And gave a kiss on abhay cheak pulling him towards him.
Abhay smiles and says'well abhi take care of ur self. I need to go now.WILL COME TO SEE TOMORROW MORNING!'
Abhi- ok buy! See u!
Abhay went from there and looked at pia before leaving with sad face.Abhay came out of the room and thinks'why pia?why u left me? Now u became someone else.a mother of someone's child!why u hate me?u didnt even let me explain?why?'
abhay began to cry.
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Hospital garage

Kabir is waiting outside near the car. Suddenly he see abhay coming, kabir noticed that it seems abhay has been crying so long.kabir became worried and ran to abhay.
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Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 14(2)

Kabir- Abhay, r u ok!
Abhay with broken crying tone- Why it always happen to me?
Kabir- hey dude relax ! What happen to u?
Abhay almost crying- U know pia...she doesnt love me ! Every time i go near her she breaks my heart and today she made me dead.
Kabir shocked- hey what did she do now?
Abhay crying- I HAVE LOST ALL MY HOPES! She can never be mine. She is mother of someone's child. She has marry to someone else!
Kabir smiling - wow! That's great news?so ultimately u knows it!
Abhay yelling- oh shut up! U r happy! U r so selfish kabir u r not my friend! I lost pia and u r becoming happy.
Kabir to himself- Opps! I think abhay doesnt knows the real mystry. I am sorry pia ! I cant keep it any more!
Kabir-abhay relax! I think u have some misunderstanding.
Pia stills loves u. And there is a proof.
Abhay crying hard- what proof huh? She hates me.
Kabir-NO!NO! She loves u. And abhi is ur son not some one else.
Abhay became shocked and froze- what?
Kabir- yes abhay.its true!
Abhay- but why she hide from me?
Kabir- she thinks that u will take abhi from her!
Abhay remembers the day when pia and he became one soul.
Abhay- how she can think about it? I want her in my life and she doent trust me.why?
Kabir- she needs time. And i am sure u can make her?
Abhay- yes u r right! Pia will come back to me then we will have our perfact family.
Suddenly abhay sees pia and he thinks of a plan smiles to himself.
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Precape- Abhay asks Pia about Abhi...Chand decides to go to paris.
Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOWWW... Superb update:-) Finally Abhay knew abt his son:-) and now Abhi is fine:-):-) Please continue soon...
Edited by rashi.rose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow amazing story. Finally Abhay will come to know about Abhi. Pls continue soon and pls pm me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice glad that finally Abhay came 2 know about Abhi😊

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