FF:DON'T BREAK MY HEART AGAIN last chapter pg 116

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credit of siggy goes to drishti aka divya6696😳

Hi guyz i am writing FF .hope u like it.do coment.

This story starts after abhay n pia got married since 5 years but they live apart from eachother due to a girl in abhay's office.
Here is ch 1.

A very big house, inside it lives a curly hair with beautiful fair skin glowing in the sun.She is standing in the kitchen cooking for someone.Lady says'Abhi wake up its morning,abhi r u listening me!'
A young boy sleeping like an angle in his huge bed,smiling in his dream.suddenly, he wakes up due to tickling on his tummy.'Mom,plz 5 min more.what so hurry'says laughingly with his cute dimples and sparkle in his blue eyes.It always make her remember of him,her abhay.It has been since 4 year she is living in paris and works as teacher in school.pia remembered the day when she left abhay.

index


ch 1 pg1
ch 2 pg 3
ch 3 pg 5
ch 4 pg 7
ch 5 pg 9
ch 6 pg 12
ch7 pg 14
ch 8 pg 16
ch9 pg 19
Ch 10 pg 22
ch 11 pg 26
ch 12 pg 30
ch 13 pg 34
ch 14 pg 37
ch 15 pg 42
ch 16 pg 45
ch 17 pg 48
ch 18 pg 53
ch 19 pg 58 and 59
CH 20 PG 64
ch 21 pg 69
CH 22 PG 76
CH 23 pg 82
ch 24 pg 88
ch 25 pg 94
ch 26 pg 104
ch 27 pg 111
ch 28 pg 116
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww...it was really cute...
But a small one...continue soon...
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hey its a copy ff u had copy an ff of snitchseeker its compeletly copy plz try to write of ur own dont copy anyones ff
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intersting.. continue soon and pm me 2 :)
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Well thanks for inspiration.here goes ch 2.

Pia is sitting on the bed near the bed remembers the worst day of her life.(flashback)

It has been one year that abhay and pia were married.they were happily living togather.but oneday pia saw a wierd reaction of abhay.abhay and pia were having dinner.pia asked abhay she would like to go out for some shopping if he was free.Instead of saying politely he shouted at her,'pia u dont have any work rather than shopping.u all girls r same'.saying he left from there.Pia thought maybe he was worried about his business thats why he was angry.Few days abhay talked to pia very less,this make pia more suspecious.it was about that day when pia left abhay.she was talking to her friend ,when she heard a bell.
PIA POV
I went down and saw a young girl standing in the door.i asked who she was and shocked to hear that she was abhay's wife and is pregnent.i got freeze on that time.At that time abhay arrived home and also got shocked when he saw her.
Abhay:u bitch what r u doing here!
Girl:i hv been pregnent of ur baby and u havent told me about ur house.i m ur wife.
Abhay:what rubbish! Hv u gone mad.i know since u r working with fr one month and i hv my wife.
I was shattered hearing all this.I screamed:stop it.i dont want to live with u.that why u r behaving like this with me since few days.
Abhay:pia!listen to me.i didnt do this.trust me pia.LET ME EXPLAIN.
I didnt hear to him and rush out from his home with my baggage.(flash back ends)

pia come back to her sences when abhi said'mom where r u lost?look i am awake.
(note:remember abhay didnt divorce pia as he still loves her.They r only living apart.He also doesnt know about his child)
pia:oh yah!ok come on get ready ,i hv to send u to school.
Abhi: mom !!! I am only 4 years old.
Pia help but laugh at his son's childish behavior.
Pia:ya my angle! But after 2 weeks u r going to be 5.
Abhi:mom!2 weeks r left.1,2,3...(counting on his fingers)means 14 days.not so soon mom plz.after my birthday , promise.
Pia(laughing):ok dear.ur request accepted.
Abhi shouts in excitement and hugs his mom.
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MUMBAI,INDIA

A Young man sitting on sofa with an angry expression .Abhay richand ,the youngest and richest bussiness man.He has every thing but lives like dead.he has lort his smile when his love left him.
Precap:abhay flashback.

Hope u all will like it .do coment.can anyone tell me how to copy link of ff in pm.
Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago

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