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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

nice concept plzz add me in pm list hope abhiya soon met no one separate them

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story
pm me

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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

accident ... nooo hope abhay is k
continue soon... its interesting plot

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abhiya7fan

@abhiya7fan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

nice concept and a great start...

do continue soon and please pm me!!

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Sharpay.Evans

@Sharpay.Evans

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

nyc concept!
abhay's accident :'(
pm me wen ya cont!

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sweety_crazed

@sweety_crazed

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

i liked d concept...abhay's accident!!!...

continue soon n pm me!!!

is jeh is behind all this???...is jeh good here???

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Anukrati

@anukrati19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

update soon and pm me

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cutecupcake260

@cutecupcake260

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Part 1Feedback:
Jeh called piya and tell abt the accident of Abhay...!!!!!

Part 2:
Piya goes and wake up Haseena and Chand...
Piya:Mo...m...Mo...m...m,...om...Da...d...D...ad
WAKE UP!!!!!!!!!!
Haseena: Wat happen darling u luk so scared wats wrong???
Chand:Ya???
Piya: Mom Dad ...Abhay...abh...ay had a accident and many people r saying abhay is died...!!!!
Haseen, Chand:Wat???
Haseena: Who told u dis dat he is died he is my son he can't die
Piya: Jeh told me dis awll
Haseena:Wat!!!! but how it's impossible???
Piya: I also dun't believe dis!!!!

Sumone enters quietly...
Stranger:But u have 2 believe it piya abhay is gone forever he won't return
Piya turns and sees dat it's Aleena...
Piya: Wat??
Aleena: yes jeh has found a body and they r investigating ...jeh was telling it's seems it's Abhay's body
Piya(shocked):NOOO!!!Abhay can't die ...Abhay can't leave my sight...u r lying...it can't happen
Aleena:No...no it's true
Haseena :Stop it!!! my son is alive and i no dat!!!!

Phones Rings.Chand gets it...
Chand:Hello
Person:hello sir dere is a very bad news
Chand: Wat??
Person:Ur son Abhay Richand had died in car accident and it's confirm
Chand: WAt??
Person:Sorry sir(phone cuts)

Chand putting phone back
Chand(Luking at aleena):u r rite abhay is died he won't back he is gone forever and dats fully confirm
Piya:noo(crying)nooo

(Suddenly piya faints Aleena quickly holds her)
Haseena:piya piya get up piya
Chand:I may call the doctor!!!!

(After sum time doctor arrive she checked piya)
Doctor: It's only weakness...plzz buy these medicines
Haseena:She will be okay right??
Doctor:Yes!!!! Now i shld leave take good care of her
Aleena:i may drop u till outside

(Aleena and Doctor leaves)
Haseena:i Dun't no wats going on??? and y it's happening wid us only r only son have gone forever...
Chand:Dun't worry i won't leave this case until and unless i dun't get 2 who was behind this awll...
Haseena: Yes find dat person he/she shld pay for wat he/she have done wid Abhay...
Chand: now i shld go dere and check wat going on take care
haseena:okay go and be on save side
(Chand leaves)

(He arrives where accident have taken place and sees JEh. He goes 2 him)
Chand:wat have u find uptil now.
Jeh: Who...Wat...Oh it's u Mr.Richand.I have find Abahy's body
Chand:where it is??
Jeh: it gone for investigation...u will get the body till tomorrow

(Jeh's Mbl rings)
Jeh: Excuse me
Chand: ya sure

(Jeh goes on coner)
Jeh: VERY GOOD...U HVE DONE IT VERY NEATLY i'M PROUD OF U KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!
PERSON: THANK U SIR...WAT ABT THE MONEY??
JEH: U WILL GET BY TOMORROW
PERSON: U NO THE AMOUNT ??
JEH: YES 2 MILLION
PERSON: YES
JEH: U WILL GET THEM BY TOMORROW
PERSON: THANK U!!!
JEH: UR WELCUM
PERSON:BYE
JEH:BYE!!!!

CHAND BEHIND LISTENS!!!!!

PRECAP: JEH CUMS 2 MEET PIYA!!!!