FF:DHADKAN ch 2 updated

Actually i am inspired by many ff writers.so i decided to write one. Its normal love story of abhiya. Here is the character sketch,
piya dobriyal:A Beautiful curly hair girl .she is cycologist.hates her father.
Abhay riachand:A handsome young rich man.became mentally ill after death of love of his life mathli.
Mathli mehra:fiance of abhay died in car accidant.
Haseena richand:mother of abhay.loves his son.
Chand richand:a rich bussiness man.abhay father.
Arnab dobrail: father of pia.
Rest of characters will introduced later.so tell should i continue or not.

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hey nyc character sketch👏...add me 2 ur pm list😛 ..eagerly looking 4ward for abhiya story😳

Hey guyz here is a short scene of my ff.if u like it ,i will continue otherwise not

A beautiful sun shine morning,a handsome man with blue eyes sitting on patient bed with his back and lost in his own world.(flashback)
girl:abhay,abhay where are u?
Abhay:caught u mathli?(encircle his arms around her)
mathli:god!where were u?
Abhay:just i bought a surprise for u.
Mathli:surprise!what
abhay:cant tell!close ur eyes.
Mathli close her eyes.abhay slips ring in her finger and says'i love u'
mathli smiles'i love u abhay'and they both hugs .
Abhay came out to preasence when he heard a nurse shouting at him'look mr riachand.come out of ur sences or i will hit ur head'
abhay frowns at nurse.nurse says him to drink the medicine.abhay refuses at first but when the nurse forces him.he take the medicine bottle and throws on the ground.the nurse screams'he has gone mad again.dr,dr come quickly!
Haseena was looking all from the door and a tear falls from her eyes.

this concept sound interstng...
plz cont. it, i m looking forward for it.
add me to ur pm list n plz pm me whnevr u update.
happy be-lated new year!!!!!

nice updt

nyc start 👍🏼 do cntinue & add me 2 ur pm list😛

Guyz thanks for here goes 1st ch
AT LONDON

A very large house can be seen far away.It just looks like a castle.there is a beautiful garden near house.everything seems beatiful but inside it is night of silence.Even morning seems dark.in a grey comfortable sofa sits a woman and looking at photo frame.tears are falling down her cheaks.
Haseena(in mind):Abhay where r u?where is my fun loving son?u have forgotten me since one year.i cannot see u in this condition.
Chand:haseena.
Haseena coming to scence: ya.What do u need now?
Chand:haseena we r going to see abhay?be ready when i come back.
Haseena:yes chand.
AT SANFRANSISCO

A Boy enters a room of a hotel.
Boy:mam may i cum in?
A curly brown hair girl sitting by the side of window say,'yes,plz'
Boy:someone came to talk to u.
Girl:call in.
Misha:hi pia.
Pia:misha.where were u .i have been searching for u two days.
Misha:oh cum on dude.i hv a good newz fr u .
Pia:what?

Precape:CHAND AND DR TALKING ABOUT ABHAY.
Do coment.

nice start...
glad u strt it .it is a nice updte
waitng for abhiya meeting.
plz pm me next time.