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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: peehu24

lovely update..bt i m feeling bad for abhay..plz bring piya back na! Jeh seems interesting..bt abhi is a choco pie



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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: zoozoo123

I thought its Piya...😭...Dil tod diya...Love Abhay n his son's relationship...So Jeh is Abhay's best buddy ...waiting 4 the return of Piya...Lovely update...wht's going on Haseena's mind..😕...Continue soon...😛...Thanks 4 pm...😛...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: piya_abhay_love

awesome update,... than for pm

will w8 for next update


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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: pallavisarkar

thnx for d pm

awesome gr8t updt
cont soon
feeling really bad for abhay


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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: charmingkiller

awesumm ff

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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: aroradaks

nyc story.continue sooon😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: HallyH

OMG YAAR I love it!!! OK IMP message to other guys my FF called love conquers all hasn't been finished yet because its been turned into a screenplay so sorry I will get to writing as soon as I have finished

THANKS!!!!! WE CAN W8 U TAKE UR TIME!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3:
ABHAY SITTING ON HIS KNEES AND ABHI SLOWLY SLOWLY TRYING TO WALK
TOWARD HIM,LAYGHING SMILING WERE ON BOTH OF THEIR FACES...SUDDENLY
ABHI SITS DOWN CRYING...ABHAY COULDN'T STOP LAUHGING AT HIS
CHILDISH BEHAVOIUR...HE PICK UP HIM AND SAT ON THE SOFA..LETTING
HIS SON PLAYING WITH HIS LAPSES...FEW MINUTES LATER ABHI WAS
SLEEPING ON ABHAYS LAPSES...ABHAY SAW THIS AND ABHAY CLOSED HIS
EYES RESTING HIS NECK ON SOFA...

Abhay(thinking): i still remmeber that day ,when i saw u first time
pia!!!!

...Flash Back...

ABHAY WAS PERPARING HIM SELF FOR THE RACE,SUDDENLY SOME ON PUT HIS
HAND ON HIS SHOULDER,ABHAY TURNED AROUND AND SAW NEIL STANDING
THERE SMILING...

Neil: ready abhay...for losing
Abhay: losing and me?...don't go togerther..but if u r talking
about ur self then...
Neil: shut up...stop acting as a hero...
Abhay: well i m not acting ...i m !!!!!(smiling)
Neil: overconfidnce
Abhay: for u i have to act one!
Neil: u must be a hero front of everyone eyes but for me u r a
coward...w8 and watch how i will beat u!!
Abhay: yeah sure..go a head!

NEIL WENT AWAY...EVERYONE TOOK THEIR POSTION .AND THE RACE
BEGINS...IT WAS A THRILLING RACE BETWEEN ABHAY AND NEIL...BUT OF COURSE ABHAY HAD TO WIN AND HE DID...THE WHOLE CROWD WENT TO HIM
EXCEPT TWO GIRLS STANDING BEHIND...ABHAY TOOK OFF HIS CAP AND
STARTED TO WAVE WITH THE CROWD AND THAT MOMENT HE SAW A GIRL,WEARING PINK SKIRT AND WHITE T-SHIRT WITH WHITE SWEATER and straight hairs,ABHAY
COULDN'T MOVE HIS EYES FROM HER,SHE LOOKING AT HIM..WHO MOVED HID
GAZE FASTER AND WENT AWAY WITH ANOTHER GIRL AND JEH...ABHAY TRY TO
JOIN THEM BUT CROWD WAS NOT LETTING HIM ,BUT ATLAST HE GOT FREE
FROM THE CROWD...NEIL CAME...

Neil: u cheater !!!!..i will show u next time
Abhay(not interested): yeah yeah..sure..sure

PUSHING HIM AWAY,ABHAY WENT IN BOY LOCKER GOT CHANGED AND STARTED
LOOKING FOR THAT GIRL...SUDDENLY HE MEETS MISHA:

ABHAY: MISHA MISHA...!!!
Misha: what?
Abhay: did u know a new girl came here, in ...
Misha: pink skirt and white t-shirt with white sweater...right?
Abhay: YES!!
Misha: ohh...mr. flirty...don't u dare put ur charm on her it won't
work on her...she soo different from every girl here...
Abhay: what is she?
Misha: MISS.PIA DORBIYAL,new here come for study with her sister
alina!!!...jeh is already melt front of pia...
Abhay ooh!...

...Flash back ends...

ABHAY OPENED HIS EYES AND SAW SID THERE...

Sid: little brother y aren't ready?
Abhay: i was just...
Sid: never mind...just get ready...i have arranged some beautiful
dancing girls i can't w8 to meet them!
Abhay: yeah...and i hope u can't w8 for panchi scolding part also!!!!
Sid: come on bro...enjoy the life...
Abhay: yeah sure enjoy the life...
Sid: still?
Abhay: how much u can try i wont erase any memoiers of her from my
heart...
Sid: what kind a PERSON ARE U?...erasing her memories hurts
u!...if keeping the memories..thats also hurt u!!...grrr...u
going to make urself MAD!...come out of this
nonsense...plzzz...for abhi plzzz...
Abhay: i am trying...
Sid:well it is not good enough!... don't make my mood off...i m
taking abhi down, come fast!!!!!!!

SID TOOK ABHI AND ABHAY WENT FOR A BATH...DURING BATH HE STARTED
REMMBERING HIS PAST!!!!
...Flash Back...
Abhay: oh really?...that girl is that much different..
Misha: yes!
Abhay: then i would love to meet her...excuse me...
Misha: abhay!!

ABHAY LEFT MISHA BEHIND,LATER HE ENTER IN THE CLASS WITH HIS OWN
STYLE..

ABHAY: HI LOVELIES!!!...i am back...
Girls: HI!!!!!!!!

ABHAY LOOKED AROUND AND SAW PIA SETTING TRYING HER BEST TO AVOID
HIM..HE SMILED...BUT AGAIN SOMETHING HE WAS FEELING THAT HE
COULDN'T UNDERSTAND!!!...HE SAW SHE WAS SITTING ALONE...NOT
LEAVING THIS CHANCE HE SAT WITH HER...PIA GOT SHOCK SHE TRY TO
LEAVE HER CHAIR BUT HE HOLED HER HAND ...AT THAT MOMENT TEACHER
ENTER...SHE HAD TO SIT WITH HIM

Teacher: good morning class!!!!
Class: good morning!!!!!!
Teacher: well first lets intotduce urself...let started with..
Abhay: with me..(he stood up)...well everyone know me very well but
for this lovely(pointing at pia) i can ... well my name is ABhay
richand ...the prince of this uni...champion in ...
Teacher: stop here!!!!..the list wouldn't end!
Abhay: kkk...ur turn lovely..
Pia: don't call me lovely..
Abhay: ok lovely!!!!
Pia: grrr!!
Teacher: abhay!
Pia: well my name is pia ...pia dorbiyal..i m new here
Abhay: well eveyone r new here IN THIS YEAR!!

CLASS STARED LAUGHING..PIA GIVED HIM A KILLER FACE

Teacher: Abhay behave!
Pia: i have came from other city with my family and loOking forward
for a good year!!!
Abhay: tell me about it?
Teacher: any way i have project..i know first day and suddenly
project but what can i do?...headmaster have given orders!..well...
Abhay:boring-ing-ing
Teacher:abhay!...well u r going to do project on following topic i
have given on broad...in panthers...where ever u r sitting beside
u who ever is sitting is ur panther thats FINAL!!!
Abhay: well we r panther miss lovely...
Pia: its pia!!

...FLASH BACK OVERS...

ABHAY COMES OUT FROM THE BATH ROOM AND SAW HIMSELF IN MIRROR...HE
SAW PIA ON MIRROR HE TURN AROUND ..BUT THEIR WAS NO ONE!...ABHAY
WENT TO CHANGE..
...

KURANA'S MISAION
JEH ENTERS...AND SOME PPL SITTING..

Jeh: so?
A Man: sir...
Jeh: nothing...
A man: don't worry sir we will find her...
Jeh: u ppl r useless!
A man: we will find her before him...
Jeh: yeah u better find pia!!!!...
A man: but sir 1Q...where is she vainshed?
Jeh : don't know!.i kippnaped her but...
Other man: but she is death by cancer ...
Jeh: who said that?pia didn't die by cancer she was kipnaped by me
after giving birth to her son.ppl think she was burned in hospitial
and i made it look like by putting a burned body AND OTHER
THINGS...that body which is burried with pia's name is not
pia!!!!!..she is some one else placed by me...and everyone things
that is pia!
Other man: ohh!...but y? how? and when?
Jeh(pointing to another person): u tell him everthing what had
happen...i don't have whole day!
...

PERCAP: HASEENA ANNOUNCE THAT ABHAY IS MARRYING MISHA!!!!!!!!!
ABHAY LOOK AT HER IN SHOCK!!!!
( DON'T WORRY GUYS HE WON'T MARRY😆)

Edited by iqrahareem - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
it was awesome..i love the flasback scenes..hehe abhiya bickering is too good...and omg..its jeh who did this..meaning piya is alive...now i want abhiya to meet fast..and abhay to know everything..precap is shock...hope all gets well soon..continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: anukrati

AWESOME UPDATE ABHAY ALONE IN SO MUCH PAIN BUT GOOD PIA IS ALIVE.SUPERB UPDATE.THANX FOR PM


😳thanks yar!!!

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