Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Rashmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#573

Yipee 🥳gaurav dead...dhinka chika...aww amber...she can never get happiness or what tanzie...poor her...abhiya were cute...ahh i love these bros ...they r very caring...waiting for abhiya marriage...btw...thanks huh...admist of ur busy schedule u updated this chap...for us...take care...🤗

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Disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#574

finally finally that jerk gaurav is dead. i hope alina survives though.

waiting for abhiya engagement now 😛

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heena mehta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#575

sry sry😛

super duper update...first it was so cuteee bt lastly it turned bloody

poor alina...his brother is blood jerk , ass****...n much more😡 , good amber killed him, he might have deserved something more brutal , to wat xtent one cn b selfish...u showed well this wid gaurav;s character🤢

abhay-pia convo was sooo sweet n emotional...every dialog in itself was telling a complete meaning😳 😳😳

i m super xcited for next updates bt also worried wat wl u do wid jeh, alina n mohini😕

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Sheena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#576

super amazing update!!

hope alina is okay!

happy that Gaurav is dead! what kind of brother does that to his own sister!

ABHIYA ENGAGEMENT 😍 can't wait!

ur an amazing writer!

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flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#577

Hahahaha i am happy that jerk gaurab is dead! Hooo...yeppie...
I hope alina is ok.
And abhiya angagement! WAITING FR THAT! Superb update, continue soon!

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#578

Best update of this FF ever Tanzie 👏 Kudos to u. U r a brilliant story teller n u never cease to amaze me 😃 Loved each and every part of this update. Starting with the Raichand's nok jhok at the start was so endearing 😳 Armaan's feelings towards Amby n his concern was so heart warming 😊 Abhay Pia convo was out of this world. It was so beautifully written. But one request n please dont say NO. Can the bit abt vampires not being able to reproduce be shown otherwise? Please 😃 Its OK take ur time but please give us a hybrid Abhiya baby 😳 Also loved Pia Amby convo. Last part was the thrilling part of the update 👏 n I was so waiting for this to happen. I wanted nobody other than Amby killing that creep 😡 n he deserved it. But please spare Armaan n Alina yaar 😭 I love Alina in ur FF. Please dont let anything happen to her. Now I am scared for Jeh. Will he completely shattered n turn negative? 😲

This FF is too too good. Keep it going yaar 👏 Get well soon dear.

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sonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#579

awesome update , Tanzie !!

Loved it to the core!

Abhiya convo was fab ... beautifully written. All the emotions , love , fear , longing were expressed perfectly !

please .. Do give us a hybrid Abhiya baby .. I want a miniature abhiya ! :) Piya & Amby convo was super sweet ! & abhay's million dollar smile was a KILLER PART ... ;)

yippee! Gaurav is dead! I'm so happy! Amby n Abhay were mindblowing! I'm glad dat Armaan is fine but poor alina! I hope, she is fine too..

Wat will happen to jeh ?? Is he going to turn evil ?

Eagerly waiting for abhiya's engagement.. Want some hawt romantic scenes in next update..hehe

continue soon
thanx for the pm
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get well soon.. Dear !

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Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Lovely update tanzie!! 👏
"abhay why...window?...a vampire??" "and...catch hr anytm." lovd dis two lines...it further echoes abhay's love n respect fr her...it wsnt a big deal for hm to break in her room...yet he didnt!! And thts mak hm d mst unique lover!! ❤️
abhay"...she thretened...into her room!! Hm..tht's y pia's only capable of taming hm!! [$]

amber"...enter thru d window.she cnt run n she wnt...bth of my brothers are..jerks..." njoyd n lovd d entire convo...specialy dis one!! 😊
abhay"you touchd a raw nerve...branded fr hr..."
aryan "I will d u bettr break into ur OWN house...mght break ur head"...aww...i soo love their bonding!! Both'r adorable!! 😍 ❤️
"she kissd hs cheek...hs boyish smile bck..." looks lyk ice r breakng btwn thm!
Abhay-pia convo ws beaauutifuul...specialy dis-"see I dnt hv a heart...bt there..tht is wat maks me alive"..whch is 200% true!!
Abhay"how cn u love me so much?" pia "...bcz u hv brokn evry boundaries...lovd me...capabilty of lovng sum1" The bestest n perfct line ever!!
"promise u wnt leave me evn if i ask u to"...tht's pia!!! Abhay-"promise me...love me..evn if darknes absorbs me."...bth of their luv's unimaginable n inexplicable...whch we cn only dream of !!! 😍
amber-pia convo ws very sensible!! Alas thy nevr shwd dis aspct n d shw!!
"pia jaiswal cn turn d world upside down fr abhay." soo true! ❤️
"abhay...fightng wth 10 wolves."!!! WoW!! Abhay R. Rocks!!! 😎
gaurav's dead!! Great!! 👍🏼
bt aline is dead!! and amber's hurt! Hope nthng happns to hr!! 😕
nd nw cnt wait for d mst awaited wedding!! 😳
p.s. Felt relevd tht u'r nt goin to end dis ff soon!! So nw i cn njoy d happy abhaiya moments.. 😃
and SORRY fr being late lateef again!! :((
awaitng d mst lavish wedding of d millenium!! 😃 tk..cre.. 🤗

-Indu

Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago