Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140) - Page 57

Originally posted by: -Sonia-

hey tanzie !

beautiful update.. loved it & loved aryan..abhay n amby's convo ..

Aryan was completely shattered.. Please, bring peehu back for him ! :(

i'm glad dat jeh didnt attack piya .. So, he has still some humanity left in him Unlike Gaurav !

Aryan & Aryan ke IDEAS ! Dono hi DHAMAKEDAAR hote hai .. Lol
poor piya! She heard the marriage convo!

Now abhay should MANAOFY piya in a romantic way!

Continue soon
thanx for the pm
tc

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Awesome update Tanzie 😊 Coming to Peehu, I so hate her 🤢 She's such a b*****. Aryan deserves better. If she wants to protect Aryan then she can do that by staying with him as well or if she's concerned about her own neck then Abhay n Aryan would go to any lengths to keep her safe 😡 Y does she do this to him time n again? She might be his true love or whatever but if life gives u a second chance u should grab it. I so hope Aryan ends up with Alina. Please yaar, he needs someone stable like Alina n not a jerk like Peehu. When will Mohini make her entry? I guess she's just a person with grey shades. Cant really blame her too coz she lost her sis to a vampire but I guess there's more to Ragini's death than what was shown. Thanku Mandy. Aha dont judge her so early. she really loves Aryan a lot. but as she said.. she is flawed. she is not so perfect like Aryan is. she is scared and you will see why. Mohini... will have to wait..

When will Amby get her revenge yaar? 😡 Dont want that Gaurav to hang around for long 😡 Please show Amby taking her revenge. Only that will give her closure n she can move on with Armaan. Gaurav will die in the next update.

Coming to Abhiya, y does Abhay act like a saint? 😆 Gosh I doubt if he'll ever wanna consummate his relation with her if he keeps thinking he's bad for her 🤣 Poor Pia 😆 This guy seems to be worse than Edward when it comes to virtue 😛 U gave us a hot ArPee update, Abhiya ki baari kab ayegi? 😃 How will Abhay get convinced to marry Pia? I guess next update will get to see them as Mr n Mrs Abhay Raichand 😊 Love u for tat 🤗 Are he will..wait for that 😉 Once they will come close... he will be shocked to see his innocent wife being so wild and his wife will see his naughty side who will find it difficult to stay away from her 😆 Abhiya ki bari ayegi shaadi ke baad 😆

Please update soon dear. Loved it.

Originally posted by: Mishty.M.k

lovely update

superb

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

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I came here immediately after I got the PM and see I ended up after 2 pages!😡 Seriously I need to update my username! Aww... 😆 are when I res and refresh the page aft 5 mins..usually myself is shocked.. next 2 pages.. res too 😳

First Precap or should I say it was a glimpse of next? That is what is running in my mind. Abhiya wedding😍☺️

Update was as usual amazing! You have no idea how much this FF of urs have a reliving effect on me, that too when I read it after Beautiful stranger😉 It's so light when compared to the other.❤️ Yes... it hasnt gone that dark how TBS is.. but it will soon get darker when the evil original witch will drop by..

Poor Aryan! No wonder he's agitated. So where is Peehu now! I know you wont answer and tell me "Wait and see" but still I'm asking for it!

Alina! I felt bad for her in the last as well in here. The way she helped, perfectly like her. Peehu has gone far away from Aryan but she has to come back but for that...u gotta wait 4/5 updates more... not now..

Aryan! I love you!! Now a bit more for suggesting the marriage option!!😃
Hope Pia understands Abhay's angst!!

Thanks for the PM😊 Pia will and this time amber will help her understanding how it is to be loving a human that too whn ur a vampire...😳

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29

Wow Tanzie its superb update feel really bad for Aryan and Peehu. because of that mohini they are separate 😡😡😡. What is Abhay hiding about Mohini from pia. loved abhiya moments it was too cute. abhay gonna come visit piya at night and piya sees this as the benefit of having a vampire boyfriend. eagerly waiting for the next update. cant wait till abhiya get married. Seriously Tanzie you are fantastic brilliant awesome superb writer.

Originally posted by: -Chinky-

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Needless to say that it was an awesome update as usual..❤️
My heart went out to aryan. Yeh peehu ne kya kar diya ! 😭 🥺
All because of Mohini! I am so hating her even when she hasnt arrived yet 😡
But I am happy that peehu is returning now :) Finally you showed up 😛 Peehy wont be returning within 4/5 updates... so will have to wait.

I just love ArYa(aryan and piya😳) friendship bond.. How adorable man! He is really suffering like hell. Piya trusting him was such a cute scene.. Glad u liked it dear... 😳

Last but not the least.. Abhay & Aryan! They just leave me speechless everytime 😍
Kisi ki nazar na lage in dono ko.. 😛 Now the real task is how abhay is going to pacify his lady!! That would be a scene.. I love them too... I heart the salvatore brothers and I made their bonding inspired from that 😳

Abhiya marriage in the cards !!!? 🥳
And after marriage..ahem ahem
🤬 🤬 wait for that...bohut time hai usme 😛 but tell me are you 18 yet? 😛 because Im planning of writing a 18+ scene... 😉

Love you ! 🤗 love u too 🤗

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Seriously Abhay!

This denying first has become your reflex action I guess and unfortunately there is no Medical Science for Vampires to solve this problem...

You always have to drive Piya to the edge..

And Piya by now you should learn that the idiot lover of yours first denies but then agrees...tho bhaag kar energy waste karne ki kya zaroorath hain...

Jeh...I am glad you didn't harm Piya...you at least have some sense with you...proud of him for that Tanzie...

Peehu...seriously! Love is always above life...because it is what sustains life...

Awesome job Tanzie just caught up with this ff and I love it's pace...

Originally posted by: lost_in_love

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WoW Tanzie...tht ws an awesum update...beautifuly writtn...!! 👏
'he strtd readng wth hs tremblng hands.fearng if he cud tak it r nt'...really it is too much for hm to bear...hw many tyms cn sum1 bear d same agony!!
'Your luv is grtr thn mine d thtsy u alwz forgive me'...'love isnt larger thn lyf'...these lines touchd my heart.! It also showd hw much pihu luvs aryan!! Though it ws rathr foolish of her to leave...!! 😕
'just bcz we luv eachothr... .togthr eithr.all luv stories...happy ending...our story is...unfortunate stories.' tanzie is dis an indication of their nevr happng reunion?? Glad u realized how much she loves him. her love can be flawed but no less. and I seriously haven't decided about their ending.. but she will be back wihtin 4/5 updates.
'tears startd falling frm aryan's eyes...of d rage nd pain he ws feelng right nw.' ...dis part ws beautifuly writtn and aryan's pain and agony ws so perfctly describd tht it wrenched my heart..!! Its unbearable to see hm in so much pain.. 😭
Pia 'I'm givng u d permissn. I knw u cn nevr harm me' tht rightly says y pia is a pure soul...! 😊 thanks a lot for liking it 😳

Oww..aryan doin magicl spells...!! Loved it.!! Thnks for adding dis part dear.. 😳
So sweet of alina..she helpd aryan to bring back pia!
Abhay 'what d hell is going on here?' haha..Mr.Raichand alys entrs in d wrong tym!!
'You r soo much intrstd in playng wth fire all d tym'...haha..tht crackd me up...donno y!!...mayb bcz it sounds lyk pia's a china doll..!(whch n a sort she is!)
pia..'abhay plz dnt scold aryan.' aww...she hs gt a heart of gold fr sure! And pia-aryan bond is amazing..i alwys njy thm bonding.!! 😳
Abhay 'ask hm I didnt scold hm.' aww..he's so adorable !!! 😳
'I knw he wud nevr ...sumthng is desparate...I ws sure it ws ur idea nt to tell me'...haha..abhay surely knws pia inside out! Glad tht he had full faith on aryan. 😃 Abhay knows Aryan and offcourse he know Pia as well... just like Pia knows him... 😳
'anywys,r u sure ..want to stay at my place'..tanzie i alwys wonder whethr its just to protect pia or he wants her to be around hm as well..!coz we all knw deep down hw alone he is..and also there r emotions whch he nevr shows!
'I will b bck at nyt..if u cnt cum at my place..i cn'. Pia'thts d advntge of havng a vampy bf'...love bth thz lines..and tht is y their love story is unique and draws us lyk magnet!! 😳
Aryan'...for 1nce in ur lyf stp blaming urself'.. Abhay 'hey...calm down...wll brng hr bck'... its really v.touchy hw bth of thm share stng feelng fr eachothr...
Aryan'thank you bhai...I'm so lucky i hv gt u.'...ohh..dis brougt tears in my eyes!
Amber'...nd i literally hate hr cz she hurts one of d two persns I love ...wthout notice'..lovd dis one too!! 😊 I love their bonding too dear... glad u liked it. Their bonding is inspired from the bonding of salvatore brothers who though everything always stays with each other... 😳
Very emotional..thoroughly enjyd dis part...
Abhay'why do u alys put me thru dis?' ohh..poor abhay.! Cn very well feel hs conditn..she's dat one precious gem illuminating hs othrwise dark world...
Abhaiya wedding!! Grt!! Bless aryan fr givng dis awesum solution... 😃
Dis ws grt'alwys death notice for me'...! Hs pain ws visible...
p.s.though abhaiya weddng's a gud news bt m worried as dis happns n mst ff's whn they'r abt to end..! Nd i dnt want dis ff to end so soon! offcourse not... I will continue this FF till book 3. and their wedding is only the start where the story will turn more dark. so no worries for ending it soon. 😳
And last bt nt d least let me tel you..dis update ws brilliant..👍🏼 nd no less than ur previous Ace updates...! Bt if dis is wat you call nt up to d mark than i wonder what is..!!!! 😲
I cudnt tel hw wonderful dis update is..jst wanna say 1thng,tht i wud hv mentiond each nd evry line only if i cud...! Bt sadly i cudnt cz thn it wud hv takn d shape of anthr update! 😆
Eagerly awaitng ur nxt update..thx fr pm.. 😊
Do take care dear..love you... 🤗 Actually I felt ints not that good... except the Aryan- Abhay convo...donno why 😕 but glad u liked it. and i love how you quote the lines. thanks a lot dear... will try to update tonight. I hope my health supports 🤗

-Indu 😊

Originally posted by: PurpleFairy

Hey, Tanzi🤗

Will have to keep it short this time 'coz I'm kinda multitasking. Rofl!

Great update and what stood out was definitely Aryan in this one. The poor guy is so damn disturbed, I hate seeing him this way. I'm used to seeing him all happy and chirpy and cheerful Worst part is, I can't bring myself to hate Peehu either but she is most definitely flawed. I dunno, sometimes, I feel maybe Aryan should move on with Alina but in my heart, I feel a connection with Aryan-Peehu so I really want them back together!

Coming to Abhay-Pia, I'm just waiting for the wedding bells now. Wonder how you will convince him when he's point blank said no in this update😆.😆

Update soon! Looking forward to a lot of stuff coming our way❤️