Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140)

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mgarg75

@mgarg75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Story is amazing, much better than the show but this new style of writing is difficult to read, please revert it back to your original style. Thank you so much for continuing to book 2.🤗

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visma

@kuttu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

So Abhay and Pia meet up and the denial starts from Abhays side and Pia not ready to take no for an answer. Aryan sure knows his way to get to his darling brother. Pia danger prone Abhay should know by now she comes with a fragile tag. After all how many times did he have to rescue her in one month. Abhays frustration was well potryaed so when is the wall oing to crumble.

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

And I pushed her. I could see tears swelling up in her eyes as she ran out of my cabin. I feel like killing myself, "I'm sorry Piya... Its for the best. You will be happy with any human but not me."

What is it with this guy & his obsession with human BF for Pia. Uff matha bhenge dite icha kore.

Anyways boriya update. Dil garden gardem ho gaya. Loved it. I love Aryan & Amby they are true angels

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

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finally abhiya meet wow😍😍...but abhay gone far again...feeling bad 4 pia😭
abhay pushed her😭
precap seems interesting😃...pia joining khuranas means abhay will go to save her👏👏
aryan is playing game😕...hope it will bring good reasult😊

Edited by .rumki. - 13 years ago

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your story
thanks for the pm
happy holidays

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Congo for book two... 😛 lovely lovely... bola tha... i have no words to appreciate ur writing... u r too good... btw precap ...is interesting ...waiting for the fight ...and pia will join their office wowie ...🤗

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Tanzie awesome update!!!

So pia remembers abhay's name n him...

Aryan is so cute. he wnts abhiya to be together...

plz continue soon...

Tanzie congratz for ur new thread...

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

awesome update . tanzie... aryan raichand is amazing... i love his charecter very much

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Congrats for the book 2 Tanzie!!

This time update is very nice and to be specific very different!! Instead of reading long paras.. This one I loved it!!🤗

The whole update I loved Aryan first..! Abhay's destiny is so good that he got him as his brother..! Also, Amby supporting Pia..!❤️

Only Abhay is afraid of being near Pia!!😔

Thanks for the PM Tanzie!!😳

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Resh

@SheDevil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

hey tanzie awesome update.Pia still remember Abhay's name & his hypnotic eyes.Kaun bhoolega itni intense eyes ko re?😆😆.And I love the way u described care of Abhay 4 Pia.Abhiya jst rock but agn Abhay ka rude behaviour😡.Aryan is superb yaar.And I m eager 4 nxt part

Luv u🤗

Edited by cuteshrishti - 13 years ago