Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140) - Page 25

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya4evr

it was an ausum,fantastic,fabulas, OUTSTANDING!!!!!! update...
i jst love it,love it,love it uncountable times love it!!!!! i loved angry n jealous abhay .
u deserve a very big wala hug 🤗 🤗 🤗 Thank you soo my dear...🤗
rapid fire round was ausum n abhiya wild kissing was jst 😳 😳
bravo piya!!!!! dhamki dedali abhay richand ko 👏 only Pia can do this 😃
waise wo ye deserve karta h kbse bhav kha rha tha...
jay ki pitai!!!! 🤣 double maza a gya...
gaurave 😡 hate him!!!! idiot kahika samjhta kya h apne ap ko?amby gonna kill him. she will 😉
armaan,misha n amby were too cute ..
aryan is a star, i prsonally like him 😛 ...everyone lovess Aryan 😆
abhiya were to HOTTT!!! to handle yaar?!!
piya's memory coming back ,egerly waiting for it!!!
update soon dear!!!
u r too good in writing ffs 😊 😊 Thanks a lot Embarrassed
thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

hey tanzie what an update yaar
loved every part of it
the way abhiya were lost in each other at the start and that small kiss was cute Thanks a lot Shivani...hows ur exms? 😳
but the scene when pia confronted abhay was sizzling she has literally seduced him into accepting his feelings more coming up 😉
i hope after the ultimate warning from pia and the threat hanging on her head by gaurav abhay will see the sense
and yeah you were right we r already hating gaurav i know..made him like this 😆
i hope abhay will be there to save pia from him
and jai deserved this beating from abhay when will he realise that pia belongs only to abhay love is blind swtheart 😛
aryan alina were cute i like them
when are u planning to give back pia her memories next update 😳
i want it to happen soon
thanks for the pm and update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PurpleFairy

Hey, Tanzie dear🤗 Helloo Neetho...how ru? 🤗

Finally caught up with your FF. Must say, what a beautifully woven story. Hats off to you👏
Surprisingly, my favourite character isn't Abhay for a change. It HAS to be Aryan here!!😛
I loved the initial half of the story with everyone in the AR Villa. Now, it's turned a lot darker. Glad to know Pia's memory is coming back just as I joined you in this FF😛 Thank you so much 😳 You too Aryan 😲 i must be not paying attention to Abhay's character otherwise every1 lovess Aryan 😆 yes... you are in time Tongue
Waiting for the next part! Update soon, dear! Will read your SS tomorrow as wellEmbarrassed will update tonight 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anukrati

AMAZING UPDATE tanzie.really sorry 4 late reply.amby is really a red chilly.aryan and alina too cute. abhiya kiss just wonderful.pia to jasoosi main saare jasooso ki mom hain. bechare abhay ki toh watt laga di. jeh abhay fight is amazing i really like jeh ki dhulai.excited for next update finally pia ki memory wapas aane waali hain. update soon

Thank you so much 😳 no problem you are late. 😊glad you liked everything. here she is a lawyer so she is very sharp 😆 hope you will like the next update as well 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: madhuri16

m really sry tanzie..!!. no prb sweety 😃

m late...n that 2 4 reading abt my honey 😭..
but he was barely here!!!
its was an amazing update..
piya n abhay's convo stole d show!!...glad u like it... 😳
this tym u didn't stop at d imp place... tum sab ne dhamki di isliye 😆
wow piya here is just fab...i luv d way u portray abhay...
his thoughts were so possesive... thanks dear 😳
n 4 my honey...he felt happy 2 b around alina...its gud 2 c him happy..!!
but poor alina will b shattered!!...she is so in luv with him..!!
he is too impressive..!!...now everyone is back of aryan...y should he be so impressive???😆... hahaha competition 😉
n i feel bad 4 jeh...he is far away 4rm d truth...n is madly in luv with a girl who was never his...wish he accepts things...seeing gaurav's reaction i don't think jeh will b with him 4 long!!!.. Lets see... i cant portray Jeh positive in here too bcoz u knw by the time i will never portray 1 character in the same way... even not Abhay or Piya...
n n n ...gosh that kissing part of abhiya!!...i was so like..m i dreaming!!!..nope i fainted!!..so hot..!!!..me on cloud nine!!!...i luvd piya's rapid fire!!!
d precap looks interesting!!...d conti soon n thnx 4 d pm🤗 glad u find it hot 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

hey i jus finished reading ur ff...i didn't read book one earlier but after reading first update i decided to go thru book 1 first to get better understanding...i m jus speechless...u r an amzing writer...u hv so well n skillfully handled all d emotional parts n scenes specially abhiya scenes... Thanks a lot dear... yea book 1 got shifted to FF section and some other readers told me they had to read the entire book 1 after reading the 1st update of this book.. thank you so much 😳

last update was jus awesome i loved every bit of it...abhiya teasing each other wid fake attitude n their kiss toh was jus...i m speechless...loved it. jeh ki pitaai..wah maza hi aa gaya. glad u like it and hope you will enjoy reading further 😳

plz update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
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last update an awesome n reli a high one frm story pov bt for me d best was , d way u wrote it down...
no doubt few of ur best writings till nw👏👏👏

pia's pov was something out of d world, xceptionally well written⭐️⭐️
it was so natural, d way u wrote down her heart...it was wooowww

abhay's pov, best was when amber heard his thoughts..bt u knw abhay makes me feel , which is totally difficult to xplain, i mean its hard to say dt he is wrong coz he is nt...n u av defined his feelings, his pov so well...n then d final justification by amber took away all d confusions...dt pia is nt normal😉

no comments on jeh's pov, i need time to judge him also😕

i loathe dt gaurav, he is beep , beep beep beep ( mere paas iski tarif ke liye words nahi hai😡
aryan's pov where he hd few thoughts abt peehu dt was an amazing one, it clicked dt moment only n after dt, dt compulsion part was again a good one...😳

u knw i m feeling bad for pia's accident bt my thoughts r more in future than in present , so sry for dt😆
okay on serious note last aryan's pov was heart wrenching n plsss it was complete abhay's mistake so btr he doesn't utter a single word to aryan😡😡
n has guarav kidnapped amber?? hope aryan find her soon n it would b much btr dt amber kill dt b*****
nw cn't wait for d nxt update, i just don't want abhiya, i want aryan-pia also

luv u🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesum awesum update tanzie!!!luvd it..the pov of all the characters were gripping..specially piya's..and that gaurav...ugh..kill him please yaar..and oh dear..piya wnt die,will she??how did she remember everything suddenly??:-S
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
Gaurav is really b*****d I think he kidnapped Amby
I hope she is fine
I have full confidence on my hot vampie he will save Piya n finally they can be together as her memory is back
I hope Armaan finds about the owner of the car
continue soon
thanks for the PM
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Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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