Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140)

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D.O_Xing

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

That was a fab Chappy Tanzy... Incredible..👏

Loved it to the core...😳

Misha will be Misha!! Loved her logic of "Ball"...🤣

Hope Alina finds out what his Brother had done to Amby... And everything gets clear...😕

Coming to the most romantic part of the update...😳

Abhiya's moment...☺️ Oh loved the Jealousy Factor which was clearly seen on the face of Piya... I can really imagine how Abhay must be enjoying it..😆

Ooh La La... That passionate moment...☺️ That was so perfect ki I just can't describe it... 😆Aah!! Still Drooling...😍

I wish Abhay could just rip off Jeh's neck!!😡

So there's danger to Piya's life also.. Waiting to see what Abhay does to save her love of the life...🤔

And not to forget... Aryan.. Just a sweetheart...😳

I can't hardly wait now... After all you've just given a hint that Piya's memory will be back... So excited to see..😆

Awesome work...👍🏼

Thanks a lot for the PM..😊

Lots of Love..❤️

Sweta🤗

Edited by -_Sweta_- - 13 years ago

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Smoking_up

@Smoking_up

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

wow... Loved it yaar awesome update :-)
Continue sooonnn plz plz plz and hopefully in next update piya's memory will be back :)

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navnit

@sukusnavnit

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

awesome update 😊 i just wished pia would have waited a little more than abhay would have blirted entire truth. ur udates are the one that make me scroll through this forum atleast 4 to 5 times a day .it seems i have become addicted to ur way of writing.

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Awesome update

Loved it

Poor Alina she does not even knows about her family

Abhay n Piya r always hot n romantic

Finally Piya's memory will return

continue soon

Thanks for the PM

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Ayesha khan

@abhiya4evr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

it was an ausum,fantastic,fabulas, OUTSTANDING!!!!!! update...
i jst love it,love it,love it uncountable times love it!!!!! i loved angry n jealous abhay .
u deserve a very big wala hug 🤗 🤗 🤗
rapid fire round was ausum n abhiya wild kissing was jst 😳 😳
bravo piya!!!!! dhamki dedali abhay richand ko 👏
waise wo ye deserve karta h kbse bhav kha rha tha...
jay ki pitai!!!! 🤣 double maza a gya...
gaurave 😡 hate him!!!! idiot kahika samjhta kya h apne ap ko?amby gonna kill him.
armaan,misha n amby were too cute ..
aryan is a star, i prsonally like him 😛 ...
abhiya were to HOTTT!!! to handle yaar?!!
piya's memory coming back ,egerly waiting for it!!!
update soon dear!!!
u r too good in writing ffs 😊 😊
thanks for pm

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

lovely update tanzie...

finally pia got to knw somethng abt the past... hope abhay tells her the entire truth...

loved the last abhiya scene... pia raising abhay's feelings n he ws unable to control himself... 😳😳

continue soon dr...

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

hey tanzie what an update yaar
loved every part of it
the way abhiya were lost in each other at the start and that small kiss was cute
but the scene when pia confronted abhay was sizzling she has literally seduced him into accepting his feelings
i hope after the ultimate warning from pia and the threat hanging on her head by gaurav abhay will see the sense
and yeah you were right we r already hating gaurav
i hope abhay will be there to save pia from him
and jai deserved this beating from abhay when will he realise that pia belongs only to abhay
aryan alina were cute i like them
when are u planning to give back pia her memories
i want it to happen soon
thanks for the pm and update soon

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

Hey, Tanzie dear🤗

Finally caught up with your FF. Must say, what a beautifully woven story. Hats off to you👏

Surprisingly, my favourite character isn't Abhay for a change. It HAS to be Aryan here!!😛

I loved the initial half of the story with everyone in the AR Villa. Now, it's turned a lot darker. Glad to know Pia's memory is coming back just as I joined you in this FF😛

Waiting for the next part! Update soon, dear! Will read your SS tomorrow as well😳

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Anukrati

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Posted: 13 years ago

#219

AMAZING UPDATE tanzie.really sorry 4 late reply.amby is really a red chilly.aryan and alina too cute. abhiya kiss just wonderful.pia to jasoosi main saare jasooso ki mom hain. bechare abhay ki toh watt laga di. jeh abhay fight is amazing i really like jeh ki dhulai.excited for next update finally pia ki memory wapas aane waali hain. update soon

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: heena_mehta
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last update was freaking awesome
i still cn't believe dt u finally u did it, dts too nt a single one, double kiss😲😲, were u under sum rush while writing😕😆😉 I was in abhiya drunk 😉
believe me i love this side of pia, this PIA is like a firecracker, kya dhuali ki abhay ki...hahahaha😆...mwah Thankuuu 😃
wish u give this kinda scene in every update
abhay-pia last scene was fantabulous...dt rapid fire, wooo , abhay was totally in need of this shock... i wish pia had played her game for some more time, may b kiss ke sath khuch aur bhi ho jata😉 No... dont hope for so much 😛
seeing abhay getting happy coz of her jealousy was actually a treat😳😳
n abhay's dialogue regarding pia's argument of gng alone was superb😆 😆 glad u liked it 😳
tanz plss don;t mind...bt dunno y aryan alina thing is nt clicking...sry if its nly me who has such opinion I know.. no1 is actually feeling alina and aryan.. i will do something about it..no worries 😳
n i knw i should feel bad for alina regarding amber's behavior n i hd felt bad, bt nt d way i feel bad for amber😭😭
n u r confusing me wid jeh's character...😕😕...
gaurav 😡😡...kill him, i loathe him🤢🤢
finally i av a request, keep adding abhiya hot hot scenes n aryan-pia's too😭...i miss them seeing together u will get them soon 😳

luv u🤗 luv u tooo🤗