Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

Thanks dear. Whats your name? I will teach Gaurav a good lesson... no worries 😉 will try to update soon 😳

my name is chiti...its a little difficult 2 pronounce i guess...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: bellaaa
awsome update...love abhiya scene..poor amby she should be killed tht jerk gaurav...hate jeh too😡...loved last scene of abhiya instead f fight and jealousy piya got melted in abhys arm...😉 hope abhiya come closer to this ball update soon

Thanks. Jeh ne kya kiya 😆 hate Gaurav yaar... jeh is grey here... Abhiya will come close for sure 😳

Originally posted by: kuttu
Looks like Pia and Abhay are at logger heads. Witing to see who wins in the game of love and war I should say. Ambys story was heart wenching. So three against two. will alina be the betrayer of her clan in your story.
And another fiasco in the ball. As it is so much of tension in the atmosphere and no room for error so what did the raichands do that it ended up as a disaster. waiting for that

Thanks. Kind of yes. Alina is the only good one in the story. Piya will confront Aryan and Abhay..

Originally posted by: hpoirotac
wow tanzie awesome update...the dresses were really pretty...and so piya played a game with abhay which came off extremely well ;-)
and i'm waiting to see how amber will test alina...update soon!

Thanks. glad u liked the dresses. The game will be better 😉

Originally posted by: Neytiri
Vry nice updte. I hpe pia knws d truth sun... Waitng 2 knw wht abhay ll do 2 keep pia away 4m jeh... Plz updte sun.

Thanks a lot. Piya will know the truth very soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: TISA07
Tanzie,kokhon update korba?

aj ratei 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: madhuri16
Awesome update Tanzie🤗...
so d ball is in piya's court...she did played a a good game with d Raichand brothers!!..game baki hai abhi 😆
gosh piya's dress was super hot!!...imagining them both☺️...it was sizzling hot!!
u again stopped d very moment!!... sorry 😛
gaurav is sick🤢...heavens sake his terrible mother is dead!!!..
how a father can do this!!...he is stinking🤢
i really feel bad 4 amby!!!...poor her!! like mother like son 🤢
now 2 my honey...aww he wanted 2 make abhay jealous!!..
isn't he cute as a cupid!!...wat 2 say...as usual he was sweet!!...
so he is going with alina!!...alina's dress was gorgeous!!!..amby's too...nice selections tanzie!!! Thanks dear 😳
i don't mind whom he is with...all i care is only him!!..hope 2 see more of him!!...he was hardly in this update!!!..i soo wanna see my honey supporting alina!!!...b4 amby...n getting shoutings!!!...u know wat he looks cute when he gets shoutings😛...n his mind voice abt amby!! lol... u and Heena's Aryan gatha 😆 😛
continue soon...m looking forward 4 amby's trick on alina!!!...
n abt abhiya too...y should u always end d very moment
thnx 4 d pm...luv u ..n take care🤗 luv u too..tc 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: priya.1
wow... so finally pia to knw that abhay n aryan r lying...
pia is gona play the jealousy game nw 😛
waiting for the winter ball...
plz continue soon tanzie...

thanks for the comment dear. will update tonight. 😳

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu
wow i hope pia abhay ke saath hi jaye, i hope jeh car's tyres got pucntured or he is called for some urgent werewolf meeting or anything, i just dont want jeh to be anywhere near abhiya. i want them to enjoy their evening dance

Thanks for the idea Dishu... your wish grunted. 😉

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni
superb update dear .
i love this jealousy game . abhay was too possessive.abhiya was adorable .now pia know truth and also know aryan and abhay hiding something from her.last par was amazing .
poor ambar .her past was dreadful .gaurav was such a jerk .
waiting for next part .

Thanks Sandy. Piya will know more soon and confront both the Raichands 😳

Originally posted by: neha_dubey1709
loved the part... u got amazing writing skills dear...
Waiting for winter ball fiasco...
Do continue soon

Thank you so much dear... means a lot. 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: abhiya4evr
WOW!!!!!!
thats an outstanding chapter,loved it.
abhay jealous or itna zyada ke khud puhch gya pia ko lene...
feel sad for amby...
aryan wanna play with abhay..hehehe
pia always loses her sense whenever abhay close to her n i love it.
thanks for pm
this tyme plz cont.soon

Awww...thanks a lot. glad u liked it dear. i want to update soon but started a new SS so late ho gayi...next time will update sooner 😳

Originally posted by: peehu24
tanzie..finally u updated..was waiting since long..15 days gosh!
The update was awesome..that gaurav is a jerk..argh! Poor amby..i want that she rips his head off n let him rot in hell..killing his own baby..
thank goodness piya came to knw that raichands are hiding the truth! So will piya be on detective mode nw? Thankfully nw she atleast knw abt her stay in manali with abhay..
aww..aryan was here..he is trying to play cupid! and piya is gona make abhay jealous! Cool! The last part where abhay came to meet piya was the best!

Thanks a lot Peehu. so sorry for being so late. Amby will take her revenge.

Piya will know more soon. thanks...i hope you will like the continuation of the last part 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: pkyekfanclub
Tanzie 🤗 thanku tanku thanku so much for updateing it I just love this ff of urs so Pia came 2 know that Raichands r hideing some thing n c stayed at their place in Manali n Abhay saved her i m glad n Aryan playing cupid as always he is such a sweety pie n Abhay being jealous n last part was best 😃n this Gaurav he is such a jerk gosh what kind of man he is😡 n poor Amby felt bad for her anyways update soon😊 n tc

Thanks Ankita. Means a lot to me 🤗 Gaurav is just like his mother 🤢 Abhiya will be on fire from next update, 😳

Originally posted by: zoozoo123
Awesum update...really loved it...Haye Abhiya...Im waiting 4 sexy Piya 2 seduce Abhay ...which will make him 2 spill the truth...😆...

Thanks Vidu...Well lets see who gets seduced 😉

Originally posted by: anukrati
AWESOME TANZIE u are great writter. i love ur ffs. abhiya scene is so cute abhay can't see wid other guy . poor amby but mr. bodyguard is there to save. excited for next update i guess some thing intresting happened in winter ball. thanks 4 pm

Thanks dear. Thanku so much...im glad u like my FFs 😃 Mr. bodyguard is always here 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani
Nice update Tanzie..! thank you dear.

A well neede d one from Pia's POV..! She's becoming a detective from a lawyer..😉! Good for her job!hahaha 😆

Amby's past was terrible or should I say cruel to get her kid killed by her husband..!

Aryan..! I'm always getting lost in that character with each and every update..!(Honestly more than the lead couples😃)..! gosh so many people just love him...im soo glad i made his character 😳

Thanks for the PM dear!

Originally posted by: sohiniluvsabhay
Superb update tanzie n i like amber's previous name ambalika...she'd sufferd alot n gaurav is jay's brother dey all r stupid mongrel...no except alina n finally piya came to know dat she was with abhay n aryan raichand n they r hiding it...btw piya's dress is super-sexy eagerly waitng 4 da nxt update cntinue soon thnx 4 da pm tc:-)

Thanks a lot Sohini. yea Ambalika as in 100 years ago. got it from Mahabharat 😳 she shortened it to Amber and people calls her Amby for her fashion attitude 😆 Piya will know more soon. Glad u liked the dress. my personal fav is piyas dress as well 😳 tc too dear.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

⭐️really priceless_xeelam ur FF rocksss...⭐️⭐️ ⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: Miracle_leo
wow awesome👏 n mindblowing👏 update tanzie,loved it to the core.loved misha n pia conversation,loved pia n mishu bonding aww i loved it the way pia is giving order to misha for breakfast n mishu say kitna kaam kerwati ho kerti hoon tum bhi kya yaad karogi misha dobriyal ko aww i loved that dialouges.so now detective pia is back interesting wow now pia come to know the truth that before memory loss she used to lived with abhay in manali in AR villa wow its amazingi loved it but i hope ab jaldi pia got her memory back.gaurav wolfie is so evil😡😡he killed his own child😡but thank god abhay killed deepanita,feeling soo bad for amby but i hope ab jaldi amby killed gaurav with his own hand.i hate gaurav😡except alina gaurav moron,jeh n deepu all three r evil but i wished alina apni family ki tarah na ho.loved abhay n amby conversation,loved abhay n amber bonding as brother sister its amazingaww i loved it.wow so now abhay come to know the truth that jeh n gaurav r brother n deepanita is their mother its mean now abhay will protect pia from jeh aww i loved it,i loved it the way amby say to abhay that we will protect pia n dont tell lie to me i know you as much as you know me i loved that part.loved aryan n pia talking,pia is hurted that everyone is telling lies so by talking to aryan she is not looking to him.loved abhay n aryan conversation,so pia abhay ko jealous karne ke liye goiing with jeh to winter ball but i hope abhiya go to winter ball together.loved pia dress she is looking soo beautiful,loved amber dress too wow she is looking beautiful too.wow alina is also looking beautiful infact pia,amby n alina all three ladies r looking beautiful😍😉,waiting for winter ball n i must say kuch to hone wala hai iss main.loved the last part to the core,aww loved to see abhay came to take pia to ball🥳,loved abhay dialouges You are not going to the ball with any Jeh Khurana aww i loved it . i loved abhiya romance aww both r melted in eachother arm,pia abhay ko dekh ke hi sab kuch bhool jati hai.

Woww Rehma... such a huge analysis of my FF...thank you so much 😳 Piya will get her memory soon...very soon..we are going on that path. Gaurav is just like dipannita...animal. I wanted to show Abhay's bonding with his siblings since here he has no parents. Thanks for liking the dresses. I usually have to spend a huge time on dresses when I look for them 😆 I love portraying Abhay as possessive. he looks extra hot when he is angry na 😉 Piya always Abhay ko dekh ker sab kuch bhool jati hai and that is her specialty that she could love Abhay to any extent 😊