Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140) - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
Tanzie 🤗 thanku tanku thanku so much for updateing it I just love this ff of urs so Pia came 2 know that Raichands r hideing some thing n c stayed at their place in Manali n Abhay saved her i m glad n Aryan playing cupid as always he is such a sweety pie n Abhay being jealous n last part was best 😃n this Gaurav he is such a jerk gosh what kind of man he is😡 n poor Amby felt bad for her anyways update soon😊 n tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum update...really loved it...Haye Abhiya...Im waiting 4 sexy Piya 2 seduce Abhay ...which will make him 2 spill the truth...😆...
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME TANZIE u are great writter. i love ur ffs. abhiya scene is so cute abhay can't see wid other guy . poor amby but mr. bodyguard is there to save. excited for next update i guess some thing intresting happened in winter ball. thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update Tanzie..!

A well neede d one from Pia's POV..! She's becoming a detective from a lawyer..😉! Good for her job!

Amby's past was terrible or should I say cruel to get her kid killed by her husband..!

Aryan..! I'm always getting lost in that character with each and every update..!(Honestly more than the lead couples😃)..!

Thanks for the PM dear!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update thnx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update tanzie n i like amber's previous name ambalika...she'd sufferd alot n gaurav is jay's brother dey all r stupid mongrel...no except alina n finally piya came to know dat she was with abhay n aryan raichand n they r hiding it...btw piya's dress is super-sexy eagerly waitng 4 da nxt update cntinue soon thnx 4 da pm tc:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome👏 n mindblowing👏 update tanzie,loved it to the core.loved misha n pia conversation,loved pia n mishu bonding aww i loved it the way pia is giving order to misha for breakfast n mishu say kitna kaam kerwati ho kerti hoon tum bhi kya yaad karogi misha dobriyal ko aww i loved that dialouges.so now detective pia is back interesting wow now pia come to know the truth that before memory loss she used to lived with abhay in manali in AR villa wow its amazingi loved it but i hope ab jaldi pia got her memory back.gaurav wolfie is so evil😡😡he killed his own child😡but thank god abhay killed deepanita,feeling soo bad for amby but i hope ab jaldi amby killed gaurav with his own hand.i hate gaurav😡except alina gaurav moron,jeh n deepu all three r evil but i wished alina apni family ki tarah na ho.loved abhay n amby conversation,loved abhay n amber bonding as brother sister its amazingaww i loved it.wow so now abhay come to know the truth that jeh n gaurav r brother n deepanita is their mother its mean now abhay will protect pia from jeh aww i loved it,i loved it the way amby say to abhay that we will protect pia n dont tell lie to me i know you as much as you know me i loved that part.loved aryan n pia talking,pia is hurted that everyone is telling lies so by talking to aryan she is not looking to him.loved abhay n aryan conversation,so pia abhay ko jealous karne ke liye goiing with jeh to winter ball but i hope abhiya go to winter ball together.loved pia dress she is looking soo beautiful,loved amber dress too wow she is looking beautiful too.wow alina is also looking beautiful infact pia,amby n alina all three ladies r looking beautiful😍😉,waiting for winter ball n i must say kuch to hone wala hai iss main.loved the last part to the core,aww loved to see abhay came to take pia to ball🥳,loved abhay dialouges You are not going to the ball with any Jeh Khurana aww i loved it . i loved abhiya romance aww both r melted in eachother arm,pia abhay ko dekh ke hi sab kuch bhool jati hai.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: heena_mehta



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u deserve this, just answer one question, if u would av been written one more paragraph , khuch chala jata??? 😡😡...i want a solid reason frm u for stopping it at such a point.
believe me i m nt angry dt aryan was nt there bt leaving it at such a point😡 sorryyy 😛 😆 adat se majur hoo 😉

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starting frm last ,abhiya scene was wooo, it just started getting hot bt thanx to u n ur ending schemes😡...bt still this side of abhay make me feel wowww n dreamy...super hot man❤️...pia's dress was HOT n CLASSY n i m sure while picking it up, abhay was all there in her mind😉 Thanks... i love that black dress..wish I could wear it.. i had suku in my mind and I think she wud look fab in that dress 😳

i felt reli bad dt pia dogged aryan..., although she was right at her own place bt i want their relation like it was earlier😳..i want more of aryan -pia

holy sh**...gaurav is such b*****d...how could he kill his own child, true i hate him more than deepu...i want him literally dead...a brutal death for a jerk n psycho like him😡😡...poor amby😭 I know
nw i gt it y said once dt somewhat she is similar to abhay...i want her to kill gaurav ...
d way u av shown abhay-amby relation...its truly beautiful... Glad u liked it..she is very much like abhay..

hehehehe, u included my university name in ur ff...cool...wish i could turn ur ff in some kind of reality😍...i mean u knw dt na😉 yea yea I know and i mentioned the name only for u 😊

misha teasing session was super sweet...
i reli liked amby's dress too 😳😳...
n dunno when it comes to aryan n alina..i find myself always confused😕
plsss nw continue soon wid dt idea only which u shared wid me, i mean plss consider dt😉 i already considered it... hahaha...don be confuse...lets see how their story goes on...



luv u🤗 luv u too 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
Piya is deffo dressed to kill...bechara Abhay...
This time I won't hold him responsible...ladki tho siren hain...
Alina's and Amby's dresses are beautiful as well...
Loving it Tanzie...
Continue soon


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abc123ca

awsome awsome awsome update!!!!! 👏👏
pia is playing a jealousy game...😆
very sad 4 amby... 😔how can a man be a jerk like him...😡
last part of abhiya was amazing...😛😉
cant wait 4 da next part...😊
update soon...😊

Thanks dear. Whats your name? I will teach Gaurav a good lesson... no worries 😉 will try to update soon 😳

Originally posted by: abhiora

awesomeee update tanz👏...with each fresh update i fall in love with ur ff's all over again.😍.poor amby..nobody knows the pain of losing a child but for the mother😭..urgh..this whole khurana family gets on my nerves.😡.except alina!!! and tanzie..u stopped AGAIN at a part like that!!😡 i cant wait for abhiya to burn my computer screen(or mobile screen maybe😆)...update soon..r we in for an ajeh showdown??😕

Thanks Tora 😳 Awww...thanku so much for the huge complement 🤗 Alina is offcourse the only sane one here...jeh is better but other ma-beta sucks 🤢 i will make it sure ur mob screen burn..maybe not now but i have planned for superb hot abhiya scene 😉 yeap..get ready for ajeh showdown 😃

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Posted by: Susmitasumi96

3 months ago

Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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