Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140)

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Looks like Pia and Abhay are at logger heads. Witing to see who wins in the game of love and war I should say. Ambys story was heart wenching. So three against two. will alina be the betrayer of her clan in your story.

And another fiasco in the ball. As it is so much of tension in the atmosphere and no room for error so what did the raichands do that it ended up as a disaster. waiting for that

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

wow tanzie awesome update...the dresses were really pretty...and so piya played a game with abhay which came off extremely well ;-)
and i'm waiting to see how amber will test alina...update soon!

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Neytiri

@Neytiri

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Vry nice updte. I hpe pia knws d truth sun... Waitng 2 knw wht abhay ll do 2 keep pia away 4m jeh... Plz updte sun.

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sweety_crazed

@sweety_crazed

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Awesome update Tanzie🤗...

so d ball is in piya's court...she did played a a good game with d Raichand brothers!!..

gosh piya's dress was super hot!!...imagining them both☺️...it was sizzling hot!!

u again stopped d very moment!!...

gaurav is sick🤢...heavens sake his terrible mother is dead!!!..

how a father can do this!!...he is stinking🤢

i really feel bad 4 amby!!!...poor her!!

now 2 my honey...aww he wanted 2 make abhay jealous!!..

isn't he cute as a cupid!!...wat 2 say...as usual he was sweet!!...

so he is going with alina!!...alina's dress was gorgeous!!!..amby's too...nice selections tanzie!!!

i don't mind whom he is with...all i care is only him!!..hope 2 see more of him!!...he was hardly in this update!!!..i soo wanna see my honey supporting alina!!!...b4 amby...n getting shoutings!!!...u know wat he looks cute when he gets shoutings😛...n his mind voice abt amby!!

continue soon...m looking forward 4 amby's trick on alina!!!...

n abt abhiya too...y should u always end d very moment

thnx 4 d pm...luv u ..n take care🤗

Edited by madhuri16 - 13 years ago

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@---Priya---

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

wow... so finally pia to knw that abhay n aryan r lying...

pia is gona play the jealousy game nw 😛

waiting for the winter ball...

plz continue soon tanzie...

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#146

wow i hope pia abhay ke saath hi jaye, i hope jeh car's tyres got pucntured or he is called for some urgent werewolf meeting or anything, i just dont want jeh to be anywhere near abhiya. i want them to enjoy their evening dance

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Smoking_up

@Smoking_up

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#147

loved the part... u got amazing writing skills dear...
Waiting for winter ball fiasco...
Do continue soon

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

superb update dear .

i love this jealousy game . abhay was too possessive.abhiya was adorable .now pia know truth and also know aryan and abhay hiding something from her.last par was amazing .

poor ambar .her past was dreadful .gaurav was such a jerk .

waiting for next part .

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Ayesha khan

@abhiya4evr

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

WOW!!!!!!
thats an outstanding chapter,loved it.
abhay jealous or itna zyada ke khud puhch gya pia ko lene...
feel sad for amby...
aryan wanna play with abhay..hehehe
pia always loses her sense whenever abhay close to her n i love it.
thanks for pm
this tyme plz cont.soon

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#150

tanzie..finally u updated..was waiting since long..15 days gosh!
The update was awesome..that gaurav is a jerk..argh! Poor amby..i want that she rips his head off n let him rot in hell..killing his own baby..
thank goodness piya came to knw that raichands are hiding the truth! So will piya be on detective mode nw? Thankfully nw she atleast knw abt her stay in manali with abhay..
aww..aryan was here..he is trying to play cupid! and piya is gona make abhay jealous! Cool! The last part where abhay came to meet piya was the best!