::SS::Abhiya's Heavenly Little Paradise upda pg126

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

superb update ayesha!!!!

i love train journey to Mumbai!!! i love abhiya cute and romantic moment in train .!!!the way pia trying feel his heart beat.and flats moment also cute.!!!pia stop abhay saying that he is strong and not die easily that moment was so beautiful . waiting for next part thnx 4 pm

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Lovely update ayesha!!!!
Loved their journey to Mumbai whr pia rests on abhay's chest n listens to his heart beat 😊
Loved their moments together
Thnx 4 the pm
Pls continue soon

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anjali

@adnilover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

nice start. Poor abhay, even eating food is not safe for him. I like abhiya better in this simple normal life instead of the super natural world where they can never be together

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-SnowKid-

@-SnowKid-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Awesome update...thnx for d pm

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sweta-mony

@sweta-mony

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Awesome start dr,

loved it,

Abhiya r so sweet,

continue soon.

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sohini

@sohiniluvsmusic

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Superb update aysha how can u write so well the scene where piya touched abhay's chest nd tried to hear his heartbeat was awesome show mei maine ye scene expect ki thi bt they didn't show ny such beautiful scene:-(bt fortunately i get it here in ur ss:-Dplz continue soon thanks for the pm nd tc:-)

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Ankita

@Fly_high

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

great start ayesha abhiya were awesome as always

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

awesome update, i hope cvs tumse kuch sikh le aur show mai bhi kuch aisa dikha de

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

loved it😊😳
do continue soon!😊

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: prerna26
Cute Update!😊

Your version is infinity times better than the current track. Liked the way you described their beautiful moments- that heartbeat scene, now even Abhay's heart beats for Pia and that last part where he tells her that he's strong enough and won't die that easily, the way she covers his mouth.Aww...so sweet! 😉Continue soon. I just love it!!😃

I have loads more where that came from. I think the show sucking so bad has inspired me to make my own Cute Abhiya moments.