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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

heena heena...🤗🤗what an update...mera dil garden garden ho gaya after reading this update... 😃 awww i m pleased rashu😳 here is ur gift..yaar gift to dekh hi nahi raha bt jo bhi hai thankuuu so much dear. My heart was filled wid love n respect for her, I was d man to whom she made love for d first time, to whom she lost her virginity '.i still remember , when I used to tell her, dt her guy wl b reli a lucky one bt never thought dt I would b dt lucky person. Pia was d first gal in my life to whom I made love, I always wanted my first time to b wid my love n there she was my love n my wife. @pink well written heena....👏 need shower now that also 2 times...😆 hahahah, itni thand me, its chilling cold here in delhi, ek baar bhi shower lene me afat aati hai😆aww he said gmrng wify...😳again tom cruise pia had to pay for teasing abhay...😆poor abhay he wanted to spend time with pia but had to go to office...😆pura plan kharab kar diya us ph ne...😆mohan kaka 😆so many disturbances...😆abhay missed two chances😆 hehehehe ab 24 hrs me do baar chance miss hona to mangta tha😉.it started frm sweet kiss n ended up into a wild love making' @pink my fav part 3 times they made love 😍 wowww rashu kya calculations hain😉abhiya are so romantic...😳abhiya honeymoon...😉heena u know what we all readers want in honey moon update...😛 bt i won't b writing much for their honeymoon jo bhi tha wo main already likh chuki hun ab aur kahan se aur kya lekhun😆now dont say i am demanding more...its ur fault u write so beautifully that i cant stop myself frm redaing them...😉 hehehehe, stop buttering me😉so keep writing and we will make u happy by our comments...😛 seriously ur comments always make me super happy LOVE U FOR GIVING SUCH A ROMANTIC UPDATE.luv u too..BUT MY STOMACH IS NOT FILLED...😉 u r to greedy

i am bribing u in adv now 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lost_in_love



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nice update heena... thankuu so much indu
Ur potray f emotions were v.well writtn.. thanx
So abhaiya honeymoon s cmingup... yeap😉

Continue soon sure wl try

P.s. Sorry fr commentng so late...!! no worries dear
Thx fr d pm...
Tcr... u too tc

-indu


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: renuka1997

Heena di...hi renuka
Sorry i didnt comment for the other chapters...no worries
Simply superb...thankuu so much
In d b4 parts i loved the wy abhay gave piya space for accepting him...
He is so sweet...
N i loved d way piya wished him for his birthday at ni8...

lad u loved dt😳
Piya's gift was trully wht he longd for a long time...
He really d best hubby...
N piya a shy shy wify...
N then this update was really hot and cute ...i m reli pleased renuka dt d way i wanted my story to b , it came out like dt only infront of u guys
Abhay from sweet hubby...he really became a impatient naughty lover...
Who is fulltime in d drugs of his wife...huh...heheheh
N piya shy bahu...n her saas is teasing naughtly...may b moms traits came to abhay..dts true😆.
N the servants jumping in when Abhay is in full mood of romance...was really funny...
N when Piya told about tom cruise...chocie choo Abhay got jealous...hehehehe, ofcourse she took his name twice n specially at those special moments😉
Loved every part...totally glad
Believe me or not...
I read ur ff 3 times from the beginning...omg renuka...thankuu so much, it means alot to me
N read ur mini ff unknown desire once...awww, u still remember it😳
Love d way u write Di...its unbelievably cute...ur comments r making me blush😳
Update soon...eure wl try
Thank for your pm...
Love u alwayzzz...
Renuka (Remona)..luv u too dear.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

awesome update
loved it
it was really romantic

thankuu so much dear n glad u loved it😳
Abhay is very naughty and romantic
waiting for Abhiya's honeymoon
continue soon sure wl try
thanks for the PM










Originally posted by: bellaaa

wow lovely update abhiya romantic scenes were just awsome mindblowing thankuuu so much dear 😳abhay planned 4 their honeymoon waiting 4 abhiya honeymoon lovely part thanx



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya_vijata

Awesome update romancequeen!!loved Abhiya scenes thankuuu so much vijata n guys u av given me a new name literally thankuu so much😳. n glad u loved abhaiya scenes.Wow lots of romance N looks likE more is cumming;).may b.!Sorry for not like replying for other chapters..U know dat I don't reli like to read em after pkyek ended but gave em a try.i understand it happens😊.Coulnt control so had to read it lolz..!Thanks for PM n update soon..!




Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Itna mast update meri to morning good se best ho gayi. awww so swt of u snigs saying dt😳

Abhay is so naughty☺️ Uske isi baat pe to main fida hu.heheheheh

Di this was superbly Abhiyalicious


Fantastic.thanx Love u so much.luv u too Happy New Year
🤗 same to u dear

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: seabeauty

awesome!!! continue soon thankuuu so much dear





Originally posted by: TISA07

Ufff. . . Abhay ws so mischievous nd hawttt.i loved da update.thankuuu so much dear😳honneeyymoonn. . . Oolala.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hpoirotac

haye re haye...what a lovely morning, and all thanks to you for this update...glad dear dt my update made ur morning gr8 n d same way ur comments made mine

very well written, and so lovely...thankuu so much😳
uff, i can't wait for more now...though i guess patience ka fal meetha hota hai ;-) yeap😳




Originally posted by: mandy1024

Super LIKE Heena 😃 Gosh it was so beautiful 😍 Loved it too muchthankuuu so much dea n i m reli glad dt u loved it. Best update ever 😳 So romantic 😊 U made my morning 😊 awww n ur comments made mine😳 Loved it a lot. Abhay was so sweet to reconcile Alina with her family n looking forward to Abhiya honeymoon 😳 Please update soon this time. Cant wait longer 😊 sure wl try

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luckdiya

❤️
ahem!!!!! ahem!!!!!
speechles!!!!!!!!!! no wrds...😊 awww😳
lagta hai tum hume romantic bana k hi chodogee...reli???😲
i m still dancingg kya kamal ka update diya hai🤗 totally glad dear😳 u r so swt😳
finally meri romance queen jaag gayi👏 hehehehehe,
update soon dis tym.. i cnt wait nw❤️ sure wl try





Originally posted by: Akshi0019

awsum di... it was a fab update!!!!! thankuuu so much akshi, btw how r u??

i loved d romance.. n wildness in dere passion...glad u liked it
that morning session of teasing n making love was fabulus... i was blushing reading dat!!!! me too blushing while writing it😆
n den d bathroom part.. was literally awsum... i loved abhay n pia naughtiness...glad
now pia n abhay giving surprise 2 alina n kabeer 4 dere honeymoon.. cool...i wanted to show their part also😊
n abhay is planing 4 his own... gud.. waiting 4 dere honeynoon.. n lots of romance dere..cn u guys ever get satisfied of their romance😕😆
cont soon sure wl try n thanks 4 d pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
cn u guys ever get satisfied of their romance😕😆
@pink...no we never get satisfied...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heena Di when will u update????

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