abhiya SS 'broken mirror' UD-pg-116,, last UD

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#741

Superb update
abhiya moments were so passionate n sweet !
Heena! tussi gr8 ho...
the update are full of romance and are HAWT
Very Happy for kabir & Alina!
Continue soon
thanx 4 d pm
tc

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Ankita

@Fly_high

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#742

muah awesome update Heena abhiya were superb n alina n kabir r also coming good now waiting for next 😊

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Divya6696

@Divya6696

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#743

Fantastic update Heena...!!!👏
kya romance likhti ho re...!!😳
Upar se woh Abhiya.. koi chance nahi chodte.. Romance ka..!!😆
You make us blush red..!!☺️☺️☺️
Update Sooon...!😳

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sonali

@--sonali--

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#744

hyyy heenadidooo itna bda itna bda romantic...hyyy hot hot update.../WOW WOW WOW loved it very much.thanx.
lov u di!
ab hnymoo ki bari hai...cant wait yar!
lov u lov u di

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Prima :D

@Trouble.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#745

loved abhiya romance😳

pls pm me

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zara

@meerubzara

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#746

beautiful update heena amazing...

i love ur writing so much...

love u heena

can't wait update soon

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#747

Heena..! Just caught up with Part 6 to part 9.!

It was the most amazing romantic one I ever read..!😳

Those Gestures from Abhay being very matured over Pia's feelings and Pia being childish all the way is too romantic..! My heart melted on that..!😍

Chap 6: It was so decent that Abhay helped Pia for her washroom..! And yes the food, i loved that part.. Isn't he a perfect one..??😊

Chap 7: OMG..! The confession part. With all possible best gifts..! Their memories, no wonder Pia was all lost in her love..!🤗

Chap 8: Their gesture of waking up each other.. The way their relationship moving forward.. It's really warm to read..! And most important Blushing part.. That is the main thing which pops in my head when I think of this part ** I know, you are thinking me a besharam, no problem for me **☺️

Chap 9: Birthday celebration. Urgh, I hated Pia for stopping him initially since she was the one started it. But still that ended up so good..! And Pia's dress was perfect was perfect for that day.. The cottage part, again ☺️. Finally, they are lost in their love. How caring is Abhay to ask Pia, whether she was ready for that..! I love that boy..!

You know what, chap 1 - 5 was all sad and hurting with Abiya fught, jeh intro, I read that and was a little sad. And had a break there.

Chap 6 - 9 is all romantic and warm..! Yeah I should have read it then and there, I'm crazy sometimes..! 😡And I hate that when I miss something like this..!

Anyways, thanks for the regular PMs Heena though I didn't respond for all..!😊

Phew.. Long comment! I know, it might be boring but didn't know where to edit exactly!😃