abhiya SS 'broken mirror' UD-pg-116,, last UD - Page 67

Originally posted by: madhuri16

Aww.😍...heena di..imagining this..m on cloud nine..😍..

seriously me on seventh heaven..☺️..u r class went it comes 2 romantic writings...madhuri nw i m on seventh heaven after ur reading ur super swt comments

it was just amazing!!!...thankuu so much

abhay was soo caring!!...his each actions n desires...u have done justice with them!!..😳😳😳

piya here was perfect.⭐️..n d movie part was awesome...d corner seat wala thing!!!..u r perfect in giving even d tiniest detail!!!...madhuri u r too kind n super sweet dear

d birthday party was well explained...n piya..she is d show stealer.⭐️..

their romancing part !!me blushing like a red tomato☺️☺️...

d last part of piya's pov was class...u explained it with such an intense passion⭐️...n i luv u 4 writing this.thankuuu so much for ur warming words...u literally made day by ur comments😳..luv u loads luv u too...continue soon sure wl try n thnx 4 d pm...belated christmas wishes!! same to u dear

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

😆😛Henna...this besharam loved this update...😎 here is ur gift...glad rashu u loved d update n thankuu so much for ur lovely gift😊

update mind blowing...rashu bows in front of u.omg...😳.thankuuu so much rashu.what a romantic update...😳abhay tying towel...😳abhiya having pizza date...😆kind of...because after their marriage first time they are out together...😆henna corner seat me kuch romance hua kya...😉😛😆nahi pia tom-cruise me jayda busy thi, aur kya uske baad wala romance tere liye kafi nahi tha😲aww pia keeping her head on his shoulder...so sweet...aww so sweetly she wished him bday...😍and abhay ne kya style se thank u bola...😆loved the way she celebrated his bday.,..😳glad u loved dt he grabbed my hand n v moved quickly towards our room, he looked d door n hugged me frm behind , his fingers touching my bare waist n he whispered while touching his lips to my ear- thankuuu so much for making this day reli very very special for me n dt was d effect of his touch on me, I started feeling weak on my knees bt quickly I gt my hold back n turned around , he was still holding me n I said- glad u liked it , nw go get ready , everyone is waiting for u down der n started moving away bt he held me more tightly n said while tucking few curls behind my ear- u r looking like an angel today, who has specially come on this earth for me n he bent down n kissed me softly . I went into his arms for sometime n then again moved back , I pushed him to d bathroom n said go get ready fast, many surprises r waiting for u down there.@pink...awsum awsum and romantic...😍thanxyipee pia said i love u...🥳aww the kiss and confession...from both i am crying now 😭and the last part i lost my senses...☺️☺️*rashu runs to the bathroom to have shower* hehehehehehe, thanks for the lovely update.thanx for ur lovely comments..and i hope next upadet also i get something like this 😉 y so much demading??😲

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

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I wont be able to write my usual essays because I'm in hurry...you know why...im leaving town tonight 😆 well..that's also the reason I'm commenting early. no probs hun...😳😳

First of all, sorry to disappoint u but it was very decent 😛 i will write more indecent stuff whn time comes 😉 😛 i would love to take it as a compliment.U knw me, i could nly write to this xtent...bt i cn read to ny xtent😉😉

I know u must be worrying while writing the romantic scenes s true i was , although i av written a love making in love n deception bt i wanted this one to b a different n of,course decent one...for which i was nt sure😕 but let me tell u something... u always write super romantic scene in the most decent manner but still drool worthy...👏 👏 I love it about your writing...the true romantic I must say 😳 awww thankuuu so much 🤗

Now from the beginning 😆 I assumed it wont happen aft the shower bcoz of those stupid stitches 😛 sorry for being despo... abhiya haina 😉 gosh u r behaving like a true despo😆😆

Abhay is soo sweet and the movie portion was rofling 😆 hehehehehe, it sudden;y came out of my mind Piya is truly romantic wife to wish her husband like that and also how she planned their night to be perfect... 😳 she wanted their new start to b a perfect one😉

the entire update was very very romantic and last part was too good 😃 😆 😍

continue soon wl try😉and I will miss u a lot i m missing u so much... will come back before 31st 😳 plss do come

luv u 🤗luv u too🤗