my first ff :evil and angel plz see

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Posted: 13 years ago

guys this is my first ff

evil and angel (the story of two opposites)

character sketch

abhay raichand: the hot handsome young man who lived alone his mother n father died when he is 7 he is a special child with god gifted powers

piya:mysterious beautiful girl who lived with her sister misha she is a vampire n she had a past

misha:sister of piya she is also a vampire loved her sister piya alot n cared for her

arnab dobrial: abhay's uncle who help him in his study

madhu dobrial:wife of mr dobrial n aunty of abhay raichand she dislikes abhay alot

panchi dobrial :panchi dobrial daughter of mr dobrial cusin sister of abhay in love with sid mehra

kabir mehra:cool handsome young play boy of mount college in love with misha

sid mehra: intelligent handsome boy n kabir's younger brother secretly in love with piya

chand rathore: richest man in town father of tanushree want abhay to marry with his daughter

haseena rathore:wife of chand support abhay in all matter like a mothe step mother of tanushree

tanushree rathore: beatiful girl uses boy as a tissue paper but in love with abhay daughter of chand

guys plz tell me should i cont or not

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vampire123

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Posted: 13 years ago

lovely start
loved it
eagerly waiting 4 d next part
thanx 4 d pm
continue soon
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sandeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

dear nice cs i love to read more pm me when u updated

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Rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wowww Character sketches are AWESOME:-) LOVELY:-):-) eagerly Waiting for the Chapter:-) please plz plz PM me when you update the FF:-)

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Posted: 13 years ago

first chapter

first day of mount college abhay enters the college everyone staring at abhay girl were drolling on him abhay feel so uncomfortable between them suddenly he saw a handsome boy sitting in the bench reading a book he went to him to talk with him he sat with him

abhay : hey my name is abhay raichand

hey iam sid mehra new here

abhay: yes

sid ; ihope so u like our great college ( laughing)

abhay : yea but they r a little bit strange when i enter the college girls r staring at me like they r going to eat me

sid : its their habbit whenever a handsome boy came in college they stared at him like a hungry b**ch when i came in college i also felt like u r feeling now

hey sid whats up

sid: hi kabeer

kabeer : who is he
sid: he is a fresher abhay raichand and abhay he is my brother kabeer

abhay: hi kabeer

kabeer: hi

sid :yeah awazai kahan sai aa rahi hai

kabeer : yeah to "T" ki lagti hai chalo dekhtai hai kya howa hai

u bloody idiot driving karni nahi ati kya mera pora dress kharab kar diya

abhay: who is she n why is she shouting like that

sid : she is r college's beauty queen

the two beautiful charming girls get out of the car everyone looking at them sid's mouth felt open when he sees them kabeer was staring them n abhay was totally confused but when he saw the girl in black shirt n black jeans the word slipt from his mouth wow every one in the college were talking about them the two beautiful girls.

in the class abhay sit with a girl he likes

abhay: hi i am abhay whats ur name

piya. kabeer sat with the other girl name misha

abhay is trying to talk with piya but she is not replying him

after the class

misha : piya i am going home r u coming

piya : no iam going to library to do some work

misha ok

piya go to the library n abhay follow him abhay piya pai sai apni nazarai bhi nahi hata pa raha tha

abhay :hi piya did u like this book this is also my favrouite one

piya didnt reply

precap: sid bhi library gya or piya sai bat karnai ki koshish ki or kuch mazak bhi kya jo piya ko pasand naa aya or sid sai rude behaviour sai pesh ayi

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Rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

Its Nice :-) cont soon :-)

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Akshita

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Posted: 13 years ago

nyc start dr!! cont soon n add me 2 d pm list!!!!

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Ankita

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey nice start dear yahan par toh sare characters ulte fulte hai😆 but that makes it different n interesting 😊

continue soon😊

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sandeep

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Posted: 13 years ago

lovely update i love it continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#10

2 chapter

while abhay was talking to piya sid arrived there

sid: hi abhay yeah wohi larki hai na jiska name piya hai an intelligent girl

abhay : yes she is piya

sid : hi piya i am sid

piya didnt reply or apni book parh ti rahi

sid: yar yeh two sisters r like a black cats na kisi sai bat karti hai of na hi kisi ki bat ka answer deti hai black cats

piya : mind ur tongue or jab nahi ki jati to bat kiya bhi na karo or ainda mujh sai bat karnai ki koshish bhi nahi karna

yeah kah kar piya wah sai chali gayi .sid shouting hey sorry mai to bas mazakh kar raha tha

abhay : she is strange n very different right sid

sid: ha yai bari ajeeb hai

abahy thinking

yeah piya kitni ajeeb or attractive hai par mjhai ek bat samajh mai nahi ayi yeah itna kum kyu bolti hai ab sai mai bhi us sai bat nahi karo ga jab wo hi nahi bat karna chati to mai kyu us sai bat karo

next day in college

kabeer is drolling over misha n flirting with her misha in anger said some terrible word to kabeer jis ki wajah sai kabeer ko bohat gusa agaya

in class

piya abahy kai pas akar baithi yah tak kai sari seats empty thi par abhay nai us sai koi bat nahi ki kyu ka us ko laga kai wo us sai bat hi nahi karna chati in last piya spoke to abhay

piya : can u give me ur history notes

but abhay decided that he will not talk to piya par akhir mai us kai innocent face nai abahy ko melt kar hi diya n abhay gaveher his history notes😉

precap : abahy n piya locked in classroom