os THE BEGINNING OF A FAIRYTALE lastpart pg 28 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Deepi20

Brilliant OS! You know I never wanted Abhay to become a human after drinking the potion but after reading your OS, I really hope he becomes one if the story thereafter will be like the one in your OS! Abhiya's wedding was beautiful and their first night was super hot! 😳 I really hope we get something like this in the serial! Thank you for such a wonderful OS! 👏

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

amazing dr!!!!

it was just fab!!!!

n u should write another part!!!! i will ne waiting 4 it!!!

cont soon n thanks 4 d pm!!!!

Originally posted by: piyali.1228

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awesum dear...i luved it...its amazing...totally wow...fantastic...fab...do continue...n thanx 4r d pm😊

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

i m glad that u liked it
well its a famous saying that if sindoor falls on the nose during wedding then ur husband will love u a lot throughout the lifetime. my mom told me during a wedding of my cousin to increase my G.K. as i was literally sleeping that day bored of those rtuals. never knew that the knowledge will come handy like this😆🤣

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

thanks for liking piyali
and welcome back i hope now on u will stuck up here
and won't ever think of leaving

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow shivani awesome update I so loved it yaar.It was so gud.I hope ending aisi hi ho so romantic & true.I was all lost as if I m watching a real loves story.I love ur concept & ending.Keep writing more😳

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

beautiful os shivani!!

magical one!!! i reli wish d same ending for pkyek!!

Originally posted by: peehu24

hey shivani...that was awesome...loved it...

part 1 was described so beautifully..their feelings..their longings fo each other...the hurdles..obstacles they faced...u put all their feelings in words..that was fab

part 2 was so dreamy..abhiya getting married..the way they were longing to meet..everything was perfect..i wish..i get to see one in the show also..

part 3...damn..that was hot...i was blushing...

beautifully written..really it was a fairytale...i want you to continue this...will be waiting...thanks for pm...

all the best for ur exams...

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

awesome os
loved it
it was really romantic
you write gr8
everything was perfect
Kabir asking for Piya against jootas was good
I hope the serial also have a perfect ending like this

Originally posted by: renuka1997

okay i will waiting for the next update from Monday...
Do update soon...
For this love itself...
I will surely give a very long update after 24th Oct...
If i get time in this weekend i will try to update..😊