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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ilove99

haaw!!abhay bhai is in my sidešŸ˜† 😈

tere bhai ko tou me poochti hn😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
meera nice OS.Gud yahan bhi bhadkao rishtedaar.OH I really felt bad 4 Pia.Y now Abhay is wid alina?Joote maaro uskošŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: black_scorpio

tere bhai ko tou me poochti hn😔



pooch kya poochegišŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 3


Today is dhanteras'mama , mami left but nani is still with Dobrials.thing r changing,including pia's breakup with jeh.she is now no more in his grip.


Everyone has shopped their needs only Dobrial girls are let madhu has sent them to buy something for all the upcoming occasions. Till now pia has become very gloomy she has stopped talking to everyone'.didn't eat till madhu or arnab made her eat from their hand , didn't even move just kept staring at the floor all the time.

Pia seemed to have erected a wall around her. She did every work she usually did, but there was no life in her, no reactions. There was no smile in her.She didn't feel hunger , she didn't feel thrust.


Everyone was sad with this except that evil nani'..she was over the moon with joy. Panchi was confused with her emotions '..she felt like crying after watching pia's condition but was totally jealous from the love and care she is getting from everyone. Nani tries keep that fire alive in her every time she feels for pia but panchi, she can't decide!!

Madhu tried to explain to misha to keep her happy .And mish agreed too. She was sorry for her behavior that day and tried too hard to make pia smile but she was lost''''lost in her own WORLD.


They reached the costliest mall and panchi started trying the most expensive dresses .Mish was going to hey boyish clothes section when she notices pia , she was still at the door! Her eyes fixed to the wall in front .Misha takes her to changing room.

Mish-PIA!!!!... (Said holding her by shoulders) hey sis... I won't ask u wht happened to u .But atleast try to be happy yaa!how can u forget pia dobrial 'THE SUPER MODEL PIA DOBRIAL' loves to shop!!Money can't stand in her hands for long. Come-on sis!! Let the blues go away!

Pia-(breaking down but trying hard to control herself)mish!there's nothing like that'

Mish(interrupting in a stern tone)I know u very well pia don't try to hide, even if anyone who doesn't know u can see how miserable u r turning .I don't ask the reason but !!i want my pia back.

Pia was happy watching her sis's concern for her but still sumthing missing in her heart~ with a lot of hardship she tries to put a fake smile her face giving satisfaction to mish.

Pia (with a smile on her dry rosy lips) whatever!...

{Just like she said to mish in the show}

Misha was too happy to see her sis smile again and clung to her. they both start shopping and mish buy a beautiful dress for pia to wear at today's puja at night and all functions.

All pia's dresses were done now it was time for mish..they weren't interested in panch as she tries every dress in the showroom, so no need to enter her bubble. Mish was in changing room while she gave all her dress to pia to hold. Suddenly she heard some giggling behind her back and turned!


Shock had immobilized her.

It was one of her greatest shock! 'no!!no ..this can't be!' she thought!And froze where she was..it was supposed to be pia's place in her abhay's arms where right no alina is clinging , laughing , giggling! she just kept staring at the face she carve for each dusk , each dawn, each moment of hers .HER ABHAY who was no more 'her'!misha's clothes fell from her hands onto the ground.


Alina went for trial and abhay turned to chose something for himself when he saw pia , crying uncontrollably yet silently' he never saw her in such crestfallen, with a question in her eyes.


They were staring at each other only to be disrupted by 'pia!!pia why did u threw my clothes..

Misha said running towards her. when she saw pia's eyes fixed at some point. she looked and to her horror it was abhay she know pia has sumthng for him and him being with alina will add her pain.


Pia was not answering just staring at mish now. Abhay took a step forward toward them and pia backed with a jerk rather a scared one!when alina came'

Alina(overjoyed)'hey pia!mish! howz u!i came to shop with my b.f'aah!silly me he's ur frnd too!!u know he is so sweet he took time for me(and kept on blabbering ..pia interrupted in between)

Pia-alina..we 'we hae to leave it late now!

Alina-yeh pia I just wanted to tell that we all will cum to ur house for puja and this diwali!my mom is not at home and abhay''(she starts her bak bak agn)

Mish(frowning)bye GUYS!!!!

They were about to leave when pia tried to take her eyes off abhay and moved when her head stirred. And she held her head tight.she felt her strength ebb,and her hands tremble under the impact of packet she was holding!!

Her shoulders began to ache,her arms felt heavy and her eyes grew tired.Then her vision blurred!Her body sagged and fell limply.

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Since they came back to home mish ignored her nani n all her manhoos dhantera ke din upshagun kar diya and all that!and was beside her sleeping beauty.

.But panchi madam was burning with the attention pia is getting afterall its her last diwali here soon she's be wedded and will celebrate with Danish all the diwali's her life.

when she woke she found herself lying on her bed in her bedroom , covered by a light blanket.

As soon as she woke mish fed her light food and asked if she is fine-yes mish!! Am fine ..u said na to be happy chal neeche chalen!puja ki preparations karne hai!!

Mish-no work-shork!just lay here and sip down this glucose!

Pia without any word gulps it giving a huge shock to both girls!pia never drank it easily without any nautanki! but ignored .

At night everyone came all frnds'.even abhay in dark brown attire.

Pia came down with mish holding her .In breathtaking attire making everyone stare at her. But she wasn't interested anymore to these things and without greeting any directly went to madhu.


pia-mumma! anything I can do?

Madhu was extremely delighted that finally pia has started giving her sugandh's place! She never called her' mumma 'before!

'no bte come today u will do the puja!'

This irked panchi now-mom har saal ye mai karti hun!

Nani-haan!madhu ye sirf tumhari beti ka haq hai!!iss ka nahi''(making faces)

Madhu-pia ko karne do beta!its her 1st time with us!

Panch-no mom!!ab nahi hota mujhse!

But went quiet when she saw Danish and kabir entering with his dad.All rituals were over now it was time for food mish dragged pia to dining table .pia was too sad with wht all happened before puja .


Abhay realized her pain but was helpless! he can see her weeping alone but can't go and wipe her tears'''''he felt himself so helpless! and blamed himself responsible for all that it was him who made pia like the otherwise the obstinate pia would never listen to any1 bashing her!...this was not only felt by abhay but all except the three wanna be queens panchi ,nani jaan šŸ˜†and alina!!

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precap-choti diwali!!!!!

  • misha and pia hiding something!
  • .next update mein sab buri atmaon ki baand bajegi!😳

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Edited by ilove99 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for Abhiya to come together ...
here's something for Abhiya fans here as we wait for them to unite ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update meera dišŸ¤—...i luvd it...but it was so emotional😭..poor piya!!always in pain😭😭...n alina...how i wish some one put a plaster on her mouth.misha is cute..she always supports piya..i liked piya's saree...n birdie no comments...but this nani... i really don't have words 2 explain her gentle soul...😔...wish abhay soon stop hurting piya...continue soon..n thnx 4 d pm😊
Edited by madhuri16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
meera...šŸ¤—...awesome update..loved it...

what is with piya?? why is she getting unconscious?but damn...that alina..whats her prob..abhay ko piya se dur kar rahi hai..really feeling bad for piya..and abhay..he is feeling bad for piya's condition..but what is with him?? why is her behaving so?...this nani jaan...kill her meera...šŸ˜†..

so many questions...i want answers..when are you updating again...šŸ˜†...thanks for pm..
Edited by peehu24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update what problem with pia? why she fainting ? poor pia see abhay with alina she will broken inside .and yeh alina chupko har jagaha abhay se chapke rahte hai paka isne bohat sera fevicol lagaya hoga apne upar . and nani ko agg lagne ke addat hai kya kahi b suru ho jate hai. plz jaldi se abhiya ko reunite karo. waiting for what happened next . thnx 4 pm
Edited by abhiyan_soni - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update yaar.šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘. i'm confused as to y abhay is behaving like dat wid pia😭

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