OS-: Alone!!*updated @page 44 (most awaited PART)

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Part 1 {parts in page-1,7,15,23,27,31,37}

"Abhay!!...why are you doing this!!!?why!??i..i just can't handle anymore..it has to end ...it has to!!i need my answers! and only you can give it to me!"

A crying pia was running on the road leading to Khurana House.She heard chand taking to abhay
and he was ordering abhay to be careful with jeh with this she understood he's with alina ...She was very furious and heartbroken not becoz abhay was with alina but bcoz he lied to her...

"is he really doing his duty or he likes to be with alina!!!!does he...does he have started liking her!!"

"no!!he can't do this to me he loves me!!only me!!"
She was having a hard time in the conflict b/w her mind and her heart.Without realizing she reached ..where 'her abhay' was supposed o be!

(after this is the same scene when pia sees abhina romancing from behind the door i'm ending it in short)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Tbph_Ftx4Y

alina-"Abhay i love you ..thank you for coming here."

abhay-"(to alina)kaise nahi aata mai alina...i am yours tumhare liye toh mujhe aana hi tha!!"

"(thinking)mujhe mafh kar do pia..mai sirf tumhara hun..,mom ke liye mujhe ye sab karna pad raha hai...im sorry!!"

pia was listening to all this she thought now she got all answers ...

'what other reason could it be?!alina in abhay's arms and what abhay said just now was it also a lie...no the truth is he is playing with my emotions ..he is ...!!'

pia can't handle herself anymore and she ran away from all the blues to get some peace but how could it be possible coz it was only meant for her with abhay!!

pia -"You didn't do right to me abhay you didn't ..."

Before she could complete her sentence her cell phone beeped. She checked who it was.

It was panchi!

-phone convo-

panchi -"hey pia where r u??come home fast ...when will u reach ...u don't know what happened ..OMG i am so happy!!

pia-'(in a broken voice trying to hide all her pain and agony)panch!put a break and tell what happened?'

panchi in her glee didn't realizes pia's sorrow- 'pia!!mishes is awake...come fast she's asking for u!'

pia-coming birdie and control urself...(forced to smile on the breaking news of her sister's awakening.)

(after it the same pia and misha's sister drama😆)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cRFLHP7X1-o&feature=related


Three days passed''.Pia was unusually quiet and tried to be alone always .But misha kept sticking to her and didn't let her go .

Some relatives came to see misha from her mother's side.They always stucked to mish giving her yucky soups , boiled veggie's and lots of 'bhashand'. To avoid all this mish kept pia with her .She realized that pia was sad and treid to talk to her but came only one answer every time 'I am fine mish u worry too much chill!


Every time pia came to misha's room her grandma , uncle and aunt left the room .She was confused by their behavior and hurt too'they kept whispering to each other all the time and ignored pia .

Pia was more hurt and cried silently when she saw their grandma cooking for both the girls , pulling their cheeks ,kissing them ,she missed her mother very much this time. Whenever she went near Grndma she didn't talk to her left'.

Grndma kept telling both girls-beta sambhal jao!!!!woh bin maa ki ladki tum dono se jalti hai'sab ko apni meethi meethi baton mein phasa kart um logon par raj karna chahti hai!!pata nahi kahan pali badhi hai!kin halation mein kya sikha hai usne'.(making disgusting faces)


Uncle- haan!panchi dekha nahi tumne jijaji tumse zada us par viswaas karten hain!uski baat mante hai! Aur madhu who toh mamta mein paagal ho gayi hai!samajhti hai ki uss sugandh ki maout ki zimmedar who hai!!par tum logon ke sath jo anyay ho raha hai who use nahi dikhta'jijaji ne apni nayi company bhi uss anath ke naam kar di!...jabki tum dono bhi to the!!


Misha-du-oh!!mamu hamare naam pe bahut hain!!now come on leave mujhe sona hai!!


Aunt-misha tum abhi choti ho samajhti nahi ho!!tum apne bachpane mein use chipki rehti ho aur who aage aage ho kar saare kam apne haanth mein le leti hai!!


Misha ignored it all in her innocence but panchi took it seriously and started distancing from pia. She started taking every hose or office work from pia which broke her heart!!



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Happy Diwali guys


hey guys!!this is the first time i am writing an OS.So spare me...it will be both serious and besharam types😆those who like it thanks for reading and those who don't ...'who asked u to read man?!'
😆ohk just kidding plz don't give harsh comment i am very soft heart-ed heart attack aa jayega! inspired from shivu's , m2nz's new track.It will be in parts...Do leave lamba comment and press like button!😛.And shivu ke ff se bas ye buddhi nani ka idea liya hai😆don't worry 😉

And pehle updates serious honge and then kuch...actually bahut difficulties ke bad i'll give a big besharam ending😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start, meera!
although, i felt bad for piya but i liked the update especially misha's answers .. :p
plz. . Is buddhi daadi aur uncle aur saath mei panchi ko to ek heart attack de hi dena! Lol
continue soon
do pm me when u update
tc
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res beshram types fir apun ko hoan to banta hai boss, apun use category mai aata hai😉😆
haila meera nice update aur bahot he serious type tha, jo tujhe suit nahi karta anyways besharam types bhi aayega😉, bechari pia uska dil tut gaya, abhiya mai misunderstanding, lekin yaar ye sab buri aatyamaye milkar birdy ke sath kaousi kahani khel rahe hai ?😉😆, too old type movie ke diologues bol diye sabne , very good maja aagya 😆, nice upadate, maine tere serious update ko apne comment se funny bana diya 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey it was gud must say . i know its inspired from shivu's ff n m not having any prob coz i know how much besharmi is there n m ready fr besharmi . btw it is just a bit different coz here birdie is taking it seriously !! nice start continue soon n pm me please !
take care dear 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Meera first class OS Continue soon. Agli update pe lamba comment dungi promise.

Happy Diwali Hun.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oye hoye. . . .nyc start.abhiya story wd family ka tadka.nd besharmi is lyk a cherry on top. 😳 m very bad at laamba cmmnts.so wnt try to.update soon nd pm me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: missglam


Nice start, meera!
although, i felt bad for piya but i liked the update especially misha's answers .. :p
plz. . Is buddhi daadi aur uncle aur saath mei panchi ko to ek heart attack de hi dena! Lol
continue soon
do pm me when u update
tc



thanks dear!!!yup ...mish is gonna be with pia till she can!!

sure sure😆i am always ready for that😉

i'll pm u for sure!!😊

Edited by ilove99 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: pratiksha2009

res beshram types fir apun ko hoan to banta hai boss, apun use category mai aata hai😉😆



oye!besharam😆pehle thoda love breakups zindagi hojaye😆 then dungi tujhe besharmi update 😉

any way miss u partner🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteteddy

hey it was gud must say . i know its inspired from shivu's ff n m not having any prob coz i know how much besharmi is there n m ready fr besharmi . btw it is just a bit different coz here birdie is taking it seriously !! nice start continue soon n pm me please !
take care dear 😳


thank u!!no😆besharmi will be mine😉i took idea of that nani!actually i was thinking of her story when all this came to my mind!😳

yup i'll pm you!😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Meera first class OS Continue soon. Agli update pe lamba comment dungi promise.

Happy Diwali Hun.



thanks😊 ..btw what's ur real name😛
same to u dear!

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