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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
guys thank u so much 4r ur lovely comments
they r really a enery booster to me
n i promise u all dt i ll update d next poetry soon
as i m working on it only
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ya guys
pls inform me that how many of u want the PM 4r this post

with regards
piyali 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
It's gud that u made a thread 4 ur poems. Both the poems are very well written 👏 .
I'm eagerly waiting 4 new updates. Btw thanx for d PM. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dikshi92

It's gud that u made a thread 4 ur poems. Both the poems are very well written 👏 .
I'm eagerly waiting 4 new updates. Btw thanx for d PM. 😊

glad u lyk it dear
i ll update it today itself

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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

I promise you my love forever


Theres so many things that I love about you
I could name so many things you continue to do
You always stand by my side and show your care
Good times and bad you're always there.


In sad times you always manage to make me smile
The way you promise we'll be together to walk down the aisle
I love the moment we look into each others eyes
A love so beautiful I have invisible happy cries

I love the way we both know that we belong
Through tough times we've proven to always be strong
The warmth of your hug when you hold me tight
In bad times you promise everything will be alright


I love it when you tell me we'll always be forever
I know now and all our days we'll face everything together
Times that are hard and my eyes start to cry
Your hand is always there to wipe them dry


I love spending my days with you, they are so much fun
Together on rainy days and under the glowing sun
I love seeing you in the day and dreaming of you at night
I keep every memory with me and you're never out of my sight


I love your gentle touch and your words that are sweet
Every time I'm with you my heart still skips a beat
I love it when you know I feel sad
You will do anything just to make me glad.

No one in this lifetime can understand the way I feel
Mornings I wake up sometimes still wondering if this is all real
Your love and comfort is what I'll forever need
You're not only a girlfriend but my soul mate indeed.


I love the way its taken me ages to find
The most divine love between us, for I call you mine
Every single day is better because you have brightened my life
I hope to one day have the privilege of becoming all yours

I respect each word you say that comes out of your heart
I promise you that nothing can tear us apart
I love the way you've taken away all my pain
And still to this day your love keeps me sane


I love the feeling I get when I hear your name
I know that when I say I love you, you feel the same
I cherish you so much and thank God I found you
I promise to my everyone and to your love I'll always be true

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guys I knw that this is not that good

Bt still waiting for ur rplys

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oo my sweet cute poet piyali, when I read ur poems I feel my self in fantasyland 😍
Love u dear n thank u so much 4 sharing with us ❤️
Keep it up 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
u want me to punch u ? u r saying it isn't good ? how could u? its really beautiful n lovely poem . perfect don't u say anything against it !! keep up the good work . bring a new poem n lovely poem as u always bring somthing phatakedaar . thanks for the pm n update next soon .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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who says its nt gud dear!!u write absolutely great!the words r soo lovely n apt
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
omg..how dare u say that u dont write good..its beautiful..awesome...i love ur poems..the worda are always so perfect and has deep meaning..u do a great job while writing these
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
wow this is a really nice poem, this is how Abhay is feeling.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
WOW VERY LOVELY POEM
I LUV THT ALL...UR WORDS ARE SOUND VERY SWT KEEP WRITING ND I M WAITING 4 UR NEXT UPDATE...AND THANX 4 PM ME

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