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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#891

awesome update... sidharth is evil.. how can he do this to pia... poor pia... i know abhay going to save her...

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Pallavi Sarkar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#892

thnx for d pm

awesome gr8t 👏👏

cont soon

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#893

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳
Me first...😆...tanzie what an update...sid has turned evil...😡rudra...and metz also she behaved so bad...😭poor pia and the kids i hope they r fine and abhay finds her and saves...happy 4 misha she accepted jeh...😳atleast one couple has less problems...waiting 4 nxt chap...

for u ...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗...

Glad to see u happy🤗 🤗

Sid is still grey. nexzt chappy will be last one... thanks for liking

Originally posted by: ..tora.tangled.
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wat a breathtaking update tanz!!oh no!!hpe pia nd the babies r fine!!they have to be,right??hope sid's regret does him sum gud...argh!!that rudra!!!nd chapter may be xtnded???yay!!gr8 nws tanz...nd nxt chappy's name is last sunrise??its nt gng to be sad,is it??

Thank you Tora. i also hope the babies are fine. Rudra is going to have victory and next update will be heartbreaking...

Originally posted by: flora212
oh my god...great wrk!!!!👏Loved each and every thing...😳.hope pia and littles are all right...😉
sid becoming a villen was my real shock...😕

waiting fr abhiya wedding bells!!!!😃 update soon...😊

Thanks Naf. I hope so soo. Sid was always villain or rather grey I should say... will update on sunday.

Originally posted by: .rumki.
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superb update
gr8 that misha and jeh r 2gether and their prob is solved
sid turned so evil.he again joined with rudra.hope he get some sense before it is too late
now whom pia will make vampire king as she cant make sid
omg pia got hurt and kidnapped.hope nothing bad will happen to her and the babies
liking nandini.she is too good now

Thanks Rumki. I like Nandini too... i need time to write the final chapter... its going to be heartbreaking

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Posted: 13 years ago

#894

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Awesome update tanzie.I so loved it.Abhiya r cute lke always but now whn metz had kidnapped her & rudra had trapped Abhiya I dont know how they will manage 2 save their baby.I m not angry wid sid coz I know love mai log bawle ho jate but I hope soon he realized his mistake & help Abhiya.Loved misha & jeh convo & confession.Nandni sounds good.Plzz cont..

Love u🤗

Thank you. ROFL yes, love makes people crazy and he is being highly manipulated by Rudra so its not exactly his fault. Nandini is very good. Love u too 🤗

Originally posted by: -Sonia-
Tanzie ... Superb update..

I'm really happy for MISHA n JEH ! Finally they confessed...yiiipppeee...

OMG ! Sid has gone back to rudra...i hope, he realizes his mistake before its too late...the convo b/w sid & piya was awesome...the way u potrayed sid feelings & his madness for piya left me speechless... I hope..he changes himself for good...

Metz is dead...yiiipppeee...yaaahhhooo...i hate rudra but i'll give him credit for this act... Hehe

so, abhay & guruma have the dagger.. I hope , they save piya in time !

Continue soon
thanx for the pm
tc

Yea Jeh and Misha are together now. Love is madness to some extent and that is will be for Sid. I hope so.. can't promise.

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Thrilling update Tanzie 👏 So Abhiya r getting married soon? 😍 Misha n Jeh r together 😳 But Sid has turned bad How he could he even bring the thought of harming an innocent child? 😡 I agree he has issues with Abhay but this was too evil even for him I hope Nandini drives some sense into his head before he does something rash. I am so scared for Pia 😕 I hope Rudra doesn harm her or the babies. Anyways our Abhay is there to the rescue na? 😉 Finally Metz met her end 😃 but I wish it was either Abhay or Pia who killed her and not Rudra. Thanks dear 🤗 wedding will be in the epilouge. If rudra would have cared about a baby then he would never be such a master planner. he cares only for himself, power and revenge. Pia would be very sad with Maithili's death and she will have a talk with her before death. u will see how.. next update will be shattering, dramatic and heart breaking.. i might take more time to write it because its the last chapter and most important...

I am feeling really bad that this Fra F will end 😭 Will miss it for sure but glad that we got to read such a lovely story. It was completely unique and different from other stories I have read so far. Kudos to u 👏 Im also feeling bad, this was my 1st FF on abhiya and its gonna end.. its emotional thanks a lot 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#895

Originally posted by: abhiya0006
amazing update!!!!!!loved it

Thanks. 😊

Originally posted by: _Sonu_
Wonderful update Tanz...👏 Finally Misha nd Jeh r together...😳.. and finally Metz got what she deserved...😡.. Abhay will not leave Rudra and Sid now...They both r so gonna be dead now...I just hope Abhay and Haseena rescue Piya before Rudra harms their babies... Waiting to see how Nandini is going to help Abhay... and Tanzie...I am happy that we will get an extra chapter to read... Continue soon ...and thanks for d pm...😳

Glad u liked Misha and Jeh together. Lets see. Nandini will help Abhay. not sure about extra chappy dear... will try. 😆

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
oh tanzie...what has happened😭 this sidi wil kill him what has he done...😭 happy to knw misha accepted the truth😃 I hope pia is fine...abhay and hasina wil nt leave them alive

Thanks dear. Lets see.

Originally posted by: kuttu

The transformation of Sid was well depicted. I just can't be mad at him. He has become a mere pawn in his masters hands. But still looks like there is hope as he regrets his actions at times.

I hope he does become the king after all at least he will get to continue his fathers legacy and may be nanadini and Sid can be together. After all they should be able to understand the feeling of not been loved back.

Now waiting for Abhay to bring own the master who in fact triggered the immense power in him.

Thanks a lot you understood my point. I cant be mad at him either. he is being horribly manipulated from so many years. n offcourse there's hope. 😊

You said everything I want to do.. lets see. thanks for the comment 😊

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Tanzie what an update I cant wait for the next update. Juniors are gonna be alright right??? And Siddy boy is having doubts now Idiot. I hope Abhay skin Rudra alive

Thanks Snig. i hope they are gonna be alright.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#896

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
brilliant update...its simply mindblowing.

m happy that abhay and pia are getting married ..but siddharth how can he even do this to her?she was his friend...

i hope when siddharth see abhay doing so much for pia he can realise what love actually is.

maithili has died..i think she deserves this and abhay has found that dagger so rudraksha is dyeing in the next update...

waiting for ur nxt part ..and m really gonna miss this ff.i really loved reading it.it indeed had a novel concept .i luvd it.

thanks for pm

Thanks Megha. Sid feels betrayed. a betrayed lover is pretty dangerous. Abhay will use the dagger no worries. thanks a lot for liking the FF dear..means a lot... its very specially to me. 😳

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
God tanzie dhamaka update. I really liked Jisha but Sid in love with Pia..sort of took me by surprise. Anyway..I hope Abhay manages to deal with it properly!

Thanks Shreya. Sid always had a soft corner for Pia. remember I wrote he used to love Pia n Maithili used to love him n they ended up together because Pia never loved him.

Originally posted by: pkyekfanclub
breathtakingly awesome Tanzie it's gud that Metz is dead but Rudra uff hope Pia and kiddo's are ok and Sid will be back to his senses and get someone who'll love hiim and keep his head straight

Thanks Ankita. I hope they will be ok.

Originally posted by: bellaaa
tanzie...superb update yar...
liked sid piya conv
sid love piya ohhh
but abhiya made 4 each other...
maithili is such a jerk na...
gud tht she died
poor piya hope she will fine and abhiya babies too
hope sid laos help piya and abhay too
but abhay came too recuse his love
waiting 4 next part
justt loveeeddd ur ff
sad tht soon it ended...
hope u will write more like
cont soon

Thanks beenish. Pia is so vulnerable right now that she cudnt fight anyone. Its book 2 on the finishing.. not so soon 😆 i wish i had more time but already 1 other FF and SS running. 😳

Originally posted by: SheIsTheOne

Amazing update...👏 Misha-Jeh confession was simple yet very sweet... You know in Pyaar Kii...I kinda liked Jeh-Misha's pair...I always wanted Jeh to become positive and fall for Misha... and also T to become positive and fall for Kabir...but...it never happened... But MishKa are also one awesome pair...I love them too...Anyways...back to the update...hmmm...Siddharth...damn I don't like it...he became negative again...😒...That freak manipulating Rudra...😡...Umm...I know this is your story but still I'm saying what's in my mind right now...Can't it be like this that Siddharth becomes positive again and there's a jodi of Siddharth-Nandini...both are really nice persons and both almost have same story...the person they loved..never loved them back...😒 So..you know it can be like that..😛.And what will happen to Piya..??.I hope Abhay handles everything...as a fact...I know Abhay will handle everything...he's the hero after all...😃 And Lasker?? Is he gonna come back??😲

And last but not the least...awesome update...loved it...🤗 Will be waiting eagerly for your next update...

Thanks dear. I lik Jisha pair too..they had a spark but i knew it wont happen in PKYEK. Mishka are cute too. Sid is betrayed lover which is pretty dangerous. will update on sunday maybe... i need time to write the last chapter...

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STUTI KANSAL

@arunsunita_gm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#897

hey dear pia her babies abhay haseena and all gud people will be safe haina ???????

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tht b***h maithli and sid and tht rudra will die die die die na and this is last chappie and it will be the end of bad people and this will be also new start for abhay-pia and their babie

nothing shuld happen to the babies otherwise i will be vry angry wth yu

gn tc ks hsd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#898

Originally posted by: heena_mehta
first n d most important i want rudraaksh to die a brutal death😡😡😡...i want him to beg for his death!!! saying dt i hate him, won't b enough . nt even i loathe him, i just want him to go to hell🤢🤢 He will go to hell dont worry 😆

sumthing peaceful happened in d last part was jeh-misha's proper lovy dovy patch up...i so loved it..😳...it was sumhow one of my those wishes, which never gt fulfilled during pkyek... I know you like them 😆

i reli love u d way u took out d best frm sid's character, his character is grey, neither black nor white...which actually touches all d banks of reality, coz its easy to b grey rather than black n white n dt wat sid is !!! Yeap being grey is like being a thin line between white n black.. i enjoy writing grey characters n i guess u know it 😉

poor pia, how much scared she was n i appreciate her sensibility n rationality towards sid, she didn't blame him bt pointed rurdra...bt wat sid has done under his rage n anger , might gng to b cost large to everyone specially to him, although i knw u must av planned sumthing towards his redemption...😉

eagerly waiting for d nxt chapter my writing QUEEN😳 I have planned a lot of things which u will HATE in the next update. infact last time u decided to throwsandals n this time you will throw throw the entire shoe-rack 😛 last update will take time... love u 🤗

luv u

Originally posted by: anjali0111
nice update!!!👏 thanks dear 😊

sid is so confused here.😕...he is feeling betrayed but still he has some humanity left within him even after becoming monster...you portrayed his dilemna very well👏⭐️...hope he will overcome this dilemna n decides to support pia. Sid is grey but yes humanity n still left in him.

finally misha accepted jeh...liked their whole convo.😊 glad u liked it

n that rudra is so evil😡...wondering how abhay will manage to kill him with that dagger killing rudra might kill all of them...its not gonna be easy...

i guess next chapter will be full of action...waiting for it...continue soon.😊

Originally posted by: --Siva--
Hey Tanzie! Sorry I'm late.. I was outta town! I figured that out ur busy since ur late

First thing!! Yay! Maithili is no more.. Though she has done her bad deed before she died.. One good thing Rudra did! Maithili will have a talk with Pia soon...last talk..

Sid, back to original state?? Or may be at end he's realizing something mysterious?

And is the vampire bite on Pia has any effect?? you will see..i wont spill a bean becoz its the last update 😛

Getting so dark.. Only you can solve those dots.. Expecting cross fingered for good things to happen!

Thanks for the PM! I hope so too