Book2 FF-The Beautiful Stranger(ENDED){Note:pg146}

Divya6696

@Divya6696

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1011

Hey Tanz.. 🤗 🤗

I did not know about this FF of your's earlier.. I found it out just yesterday and completed reading the whole of it in a day..!

It was just SUPERB..!!! I loved it..!!

Everything about it was just awesome.. the story, the characters, the relations, the bondings, the evilness, the passion and the best part.. Abhiya Romance.. everything was just perfect..!! And this.. probably is the reason why I couldn't leave it in the middle and completed reading it in a day..!!

As I read it all yesterday.. I cannot give chapter wise comments.. It will run into pages..!!!

I swear.. This one is one of the bestest FFs I've ever read.. and now.. My Beautiful Disaster is into the list too..!!

I simply love your writing yaar.. Hope you continue writing FFs on Abhiya even after the ongoing ones end..

Love You Loads Tanz.. *A Bigg Huggg* 🤗

-Dhrishti.. 😃

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SmoothCriminal

@SmoothCriminal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1012

Hey tanzie I got a really long review 4 u hope u don't mind

Tanzie this was an awesome ff on abhay and pia, I loved it. It had the right combination of romance and the supernatural. I liked how you kept your intimate scene clean and romantic. Omg the first time u mentioned madhu I was visualizing the wrong madhu. I cant believe u made panchi abhays sister hehehe that was epic wid Sid calling her a turkey. Dil kush kar dita and u killed her off as well. Tanzie why did u kill chand off...I love chand and his sexy voice (I know I'm special) 😆 I seriously felt like murdering u when I though Chad was evil 😆

Really random thing Fabien is such a sexy name 😳
Pia and maithili's relationship was heartbreaking. Everytime u mentioned both of them together and their sisterly bond I would freeze. The second to last chapter brought me to tears on how she explain why she was bad and left
what was pia's fault in all of this? How was not being loved enough justify all the wrong people do? Sorry 4 my dhuki aatma wali questions in advance 😳

It was an awesome read and ruksi was right ur one amazing supernatural writer 😳

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Amanda D'Souza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1013

@Phoenix.Xeelan: Awesum n superb!!!😊

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anshitadean

@anshitadean

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1014

hey Tanzie,

don't kno wat brought me 2 dis ff bt it hs been amazingly wriitn

i strtd reading it a week ago nd got so much addctd!!!

i really lykd d abhiya romance nd all d mysteries❤️❤️

ur wrtng is amazing!!!!!

cn i please take a printout of d whole story nd also corrct sum grammatical nd spelling errors?plz reply

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1015

Thanks to all who started reading this FF and encouraged me to continue my writing. I used to be late since i have tight working schedule but everyone waited. and because of the encouragement I have written 2 OS, 1 mini FF, 1 SS, 2 FFs and 1 FF still one hold 😆.. thanks so much everyone... i means everything to me. At one point of time I left writing and after years I started it again with this FF and ever since 2011 I havent stopped. all credit goes to my wonderful readers for appreciation, encouragement... thanks so much 🤗

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anshitadean

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1016

hey Tanzie,

i startd reading ur ff on 5th dec,d day pkyek hd ended a year ago, wen i ws visiting d forum

It hs been amazingly written.I really lyke d abhiya romance and the mysteries involving d supernatural.u kno i even cried lyke hell wen abhay lft piya,such beautiful is ur writng

Ur ff made me live d abhiya romance i wishd 4 in d show

cn i plz take a prnt out of d story 4 reading,nd also correct sum grammatical errors,otherwise ur writing is perfect

sry cudnt properly post my commnt earlier

If ever Pyaar kii yeh ek kahani returns wid season 2,i wud lyke it revolve around ur plot

pkyek ws my life,thnk u 4 giving it a totally new magic❤️

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1017

Originally posted by: anshitadean
hey Tanzie,
i startd reading ur ff on 5th dec,d day pkyek hd ended a year ago, wen i ws visiting d forum
It hs been amazingly written.I really lyke d abhiya romance and the mysteries involving d supernatural.u kno i even cried lyke hell wen abhay lft piya,such beautiful is ur writng
Ur ff made me live d abhiya romance i wishd 4 in d show
cn i plz take a prnt out of d story 4 reading,nd also correct sum grammatical errors,otherwise ur writing is perfect
sry cudnt properly post my commnt earlier
If ever Pyaar kii yeh ek kahani returns wid season 2,i wud lyke it revolve around ur plot
pkyek ws my life,thnk u 4 giving it a totally new magic❤️

Thanks so much dear 🤗 please pardon the mistakes since it was the first FF I ever wrote and 1st story which i completely. I left writing long ago but made my return with this but before this I never gave finishing to any story actually. Its my humble request please dont print it. I hope you can understand since there's no copyright or anything IF gives. i hope you understand and thanks so much for the beautiful comment 😳

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anshitadean

@anshitadean

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1018

Thanks so much dear 🤗 please pardon the mistakes since it was the first FF I ever wrote and 1st story which i completely. I left writing long ago but made my return with this but before this I never gave finishing to any story actually. Its my humble request please dont print it. I hope you can understand since there's no copyright or anything IF gives. i hope you understand and thanks so much for the beautiful comment 😳

sure,😊

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1019

@Phoenix.Xeelan: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1020

Tanzi 🤗 I know u will feel puzzled to discover this post is pushed up in ur my post list 😆 kholke dekhoge to u wl get to know thats bcoz of my comment 😛 I had started to read this ff long b4 , right after joining pkyek forum , but then had to take a break for xam & then lost the link...so couldn complete it last 5-6 chapters were left to read . But suddenly today when I opened IE , I just found this link saved in my bookmarks . Lately I was using chrome , so just forgot that I kept this link saved in IE ! But today thank God ! Chrome was doing problem , so I opened IE & thus found this ff again . Just read last 6 chapters & the Epilogue at one go ! Seriously I won't try to praise u & ur writings much , coz I just don have that much stock of praising words ! Excellent ! Brilliant ! Superb ! Amazing ! Wonderful ! Fantastic ! Mind blowing ! Awesome ! Mesmerising !...my poor vocabulary supplied only this much , but honestly I feel only these few can't do justice to ur writing . I am seriously clueless how to praise u . I can just say it touched my heart . I loved it to the core 😳 you know while reading the last chapter I cried like hell ! Piya's dream & Abhiya moments...u wrote them so well ... I felt like I am watching them to take place in front of me ! Seriously I cried so badly for Abhiya ! I never ever cried this much even while watching any extreme sad scenes or films the way I cried while reading the last chapter of this ff . But then the epilogue...it brought my smile back 😊 Abhiya moments , naughty Muskaan ...I felt as if m in some dreamland ! Actually I was in dreamland which we call as Abhiyaland 😳 it was so so so superb Tanzi !!! & regarding the story...kya kahe , u knitted the suspense so well & then unfolded them so perfectly...it was just Perfect ! Or more than perfect I should say ? It was really very much different from the original show , but ya ! I felt it was BETTER than the show ! Hats off to u for sharing such a great story with us ! & thanx to God I was fortunate enough to read such a brillian piece of writing 😊

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