AN ANGEL OF MINE chapter 5 updtd page30 - Page 15

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow yaar so romantic.Beautiful update I so loved it.It was jst out of the world.thanks for appreciation ur comments means a lot to me Wow the way Abhay proposed her😳.He rememered the day.he is a 100 year old vampire he is supposed to have a good memory The way he gave promise ring was breathtaking. thanks yaar pia dreamed that he will propose her during panchi's wedding so i thought of fulfilling her wish partially Whole Abhiya kiss session was wow.thanks i was so scared while writing it😳 I m gud Pia told jeh tht he is jst her frnd. but he is a tough nut he won't give up soon I loved it yaar.Now wht kabir will do?😕lets see

Originally posted by: ilove99

hayye!!!!abhiya r just awesome!!!!i seriously adore them u wrote wonderfully...and that new chick i guess she will not be a problem!!

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Shivani I am sorry I made a blunder while typing my comment😳

I typed

"There are considerable mistakes in your SS Shivani."

While I actually meant there are no considerable mistakes in your SS...

Sorry for that😳

Originally posted by: madhuri16

its just amazing shivani🤗🤗...thanks for reading 🤗abhiya part was sooo romantic😳☺️...m still blushing☺️☺️...luved d way abhay proposed piya😳... i m glad u liked it even i enjoyed writing it i really like d way piya answered jeh😆...ya i always wanted her to make things clear in front of jai n m really sry 4 being late😔...its okk 😃i was really busy with my physics projecteven i m also busy with my quizzes asssignments and upcoming exams ...continue soon ...waiting eagerly😊 sorry yaar i will update after 24 as i m having exams and has already started a ff😭

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

Finally commenting Shivani... OMG...that was sooo romantic... 👏 👏 trust me i was eagerly waiting for ur comment

I loveddd the Abhiya moments...sooo passionate but sweet 😳 thanks for liking i was so scared that whether i will be able to do justice with it or not

The ring...wowww 😍 it was really beautiful na

So what would Kabir do as he knows the truth now? well i guess first he will talk to pia rest u will know in the next updte whats with the new girl? we have a lot to have of her I hope she wont create a rift between Abhiya... maybe she won't wonderful going dear...thanks for the PM 😃 entirely my pleasure

shivani amazing update!!!!!

abhiya romance part was out of the world...

too good yaar!!!!!

plz pm me nxt time...

Originally posted by: renuka1997

Shivani...Piya's dress is really superb... thanks yaar even misha's dress was not that bad
Your update is really colourful...
I mean the font colors... ya i think abhay's life is so dark and now soon it will be full of life so i thought of adding colours to my ff as well
Loved the proposal of avhsy... i m glad u liked it
Want more abhiya romance ... u will soon get it
As they have proposed... it was just a promise yaar not engagement but in my mini ff abhay will soon turn more romantic
Love u... luv u too🤗thanks for reading
Renuka...

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

nice ff
loved it
continue soon
please PM me